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By : YoukaiMusashi

From ANON - kagome1312 on April 10, 2005
drama drama drama so much drama in kags n inus life but hey its a very interesting kind of drama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wuts gonna happen next will inu get wut kag is tryin 2 tell him?????? will he tell kag the truth??????????? will she be as pissed as i think she will be???????????? will u update soon??????????? i hope so!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Kirah on April 07, 2005
Wow.... you rock! Your story is right up there with Cutie Pie Hentai's story (specifically, I'm comparing you to Elemntal).
(For the record, I intended to say more, but I lack your gift of writing. That, and I've had waaaaaay too much Pepsi....)
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From CoffeeGyrl on April 05, 2005
Ok my master word smithy you freaking rock!!!! :bows down to the great and powerful YM while making offerings of coffee, milk and chocolate: I just love how you've taken an idea from the physciality of Inuyasha's 3 different forms and given each one its own yet same voice. It's quite an orginal idea most people just focus on the full demon/half demon Inuyasha but you go for the whole shebang. I love how his full demon form is all ready to settle down put a ring on her finger and have two kids and a dog......or rather put a mark on her neck and have two dog-kids:) It has suddenly occured to me that Kikyou has never had the pleasure of meeting full demon Inuyasha before. Hmmm I wonder what that might be like since he's much closer to the surface right now and full demon Inuyasha not only has no real feelings for Kikyou but he is everything she's been trained to hate. I mean if being half a demon is bad how much worse is full demon. She might not have the stomache for him in that form anymore. Or maybe I'm just thinking of an easy out.

I love this story to pieces so this next line is more for your fans. Ok people if you're not already a Inuysasha fanfiction club member on yahoo yet please join. I was going to nominated our illustrious YM here but Midoriko-sama beat me to it so I'll just have to have the pleasure of seconding you. (ok that line was pretty hentai ^_^) Make sure you VOTE I want to see this story have a new by-line next time:) :steps off of soap box: Thank you for your time.^_^

Love and kisses and puppy dog wishes
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From ANON - Jacqui on April 02, 2005
I Loved the new chapter.... been waiting so long for it!!! But good writing takes time...... You did very well! Can't wait until the next one!!!!
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From ANON - kari on March 31, 2005
wow i'm speechless! I came across this story lastnight i was sucked it automaticly by everything. i mean how you wrote the beginning of the story and InuYasha flashbacks of what has been going on in his life for the past 2 years wow. you are a awesome, awesome writer, and i have fallen deeply inlove w/ this story. it's like i'm right there w/ InuYasha's pain, and Kagome telling him over and over again how she loves him for him, youki, hanyou and human. i'm on the edge of my seat the whole time reading this story. i was in tear, happyness and all the warm and fuzzy feelings, and don't get me started on the limes lol i'm a bit of a hentai myself *hehe* i'm horrible. but you, you are one talented person, i'm soooo looking forward till u update this wonderful fic again.
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From ANON - Yathtallar_Z on March 28, 2005
Sorry, I'm a chatting silly little girl and I forgot the main thing! I haven't said a word about your ff! ---baka---
Sorry, I'm not a good reviewer, so I don't know what to tell you... I love the whole! Maybe the part when Inu tricked himself the best:) I wonder when will our beloved couple really become mates... But only the Holy Author knows it. Until then Inu will suffer on and on (so do the poor waiting readers, like me...)

oh, and ::much hugs for you too:: ^^
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From ANON - Yathtallar_Z on March 28, 2005
^_^
thanks for your welcome! ^^! I didn't deserve it though... I just wanted you to know you have fans in Europe too. Perhaps you'd already know it, but I had to tell. And the fact that I love your story as well of course. I gave it to my friend too, and she is fond of it. Our, mostly my biggest problem with it that I can't read the continue yet! :(((((((( so pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon!!! I think I read too fast.......
oh, before I forget! I would like to send you a picture, of course only in that case you would allow it! This pic is one of my favourites. I don't know if you had already known it, but it's more than cool^^! don't take that as a hint (just in case if you want:D), I would just show you it..
so, would you allow me to send it to your e-mail?
Uh, I think I'm chatting too much again... sorry^^! so pleasepleaseplease continue soon!!!! thanksy!
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From Aislin on March 27, 2005
This chapter was really tense.

I feel sorry for Inuyasha, but poor Kagome just can't get a break and there's nothing she can do about it! Until he gets it through his thick skull that he has a personality disorder and deals with the voices in his head, he'll always think she's betraying him. Ah the irony... It was always obvious that he had self-hating issues, but this is getting pretty darn extreme.

I hope that when she tries to purify his youkai form that he doesn�t go ape-shit. Ah, it�s bound to happen anyway though right�

I'm interested to see whether or not Inuyasha learns to just coexist with his dominant side, or if he'll end up killing it off in some breakdown. Or will there be a way to restore the balance? That seems to be the less messy solution of them all. Hmmm... some equivalent way to weaken the youkai side? Whatever that could be. I don't know, his youkai side could find out that it's gay�. That would be pretty darn defeating for him. *blink* Lol. I'm crazy, I know. :P Yeah, that could prove for an interesting and awkward story. I�ll just go off and ponder that to myself for a while, don�t mind me.

Really awesome chapter, one of my favourites thus far. I will never be paranoid again! Unless there are hints that Youkai-Inuyasha is gay. Then I�ll suffer a mental breakdown. XD

I should really stop over-analysing, but the sign of a great story is becoming obsessed with it, right?

My, all I can say is that Kagome has the patience of a saint.

I�ll try to emulate her and wait like a loyal reader for the next chapter. Love it!

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From ANON - Hotnspicyfox on March 24, 2005
Let me start by saying I am NOT a Kagome fan--at least not of the dubbed version. I think she's immature, helpess, and an utter idiot. She sits Inuyasha for no good reason, ENJOYS hurting him. She treats him like a puppy to be dragged around on a leash and made to sit up and beg on command. I hate Kagome.

BUT...

You have me absolutley loving her. Your Kagome is everything Rumiko Takahashi intended her to be, and for that you should be proud.

That said, I adore everything about this fic more than cake. I can see why it was entered in a contest. It's beautiful, heart-warming, and utterly steamy. You're a goddess. Enough said.
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From CoffeeGyrl on March 24, 2005
Ok I've got to make this fast as I'm in the middle of a 1200 mile road trip in a New Mexico info center but they've got a computer and I just had to check on one of my favorite authors. No really you are you're on my favorite's list, I swear half the reason I wrote my first story is to make that list...oops did I just shamelessly plug my fic 0_0. I love you to pieces you're just to darn cute thanks so much for the shout out. Marshmallow mocha's are my fav too :) I just love this fic too much the whole me Tarzan you Ka Go Me thing cracks me up. Way hot chapter again but the suspence is killing me all this closeness is just more fuel to the fire for Kikyo and Naraku to muddle up. Ok I promise a longer review when I've got more time but I love this story and you TOTALY ROCK!

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From ANON - J on March 23, 2005
Wow I can't believe this, you have gotten better. I love the way everything is going. How even with the intimate scenes you remain classy. I read stoies on him being intimate with her love but rarely read that she return the love. Please don't let it be the case with this story and the other. I'm torn between which chapter is my favorite. Although this last one is unbelieveable. I guess I just have to go back and read the whole story again. Can wait to see how you'll top this one. What about BTS? Don't forget that one!!
I see that you thank your girl Scherezade all the time in your story but I say to you please get up right now from where you are and take a BOW because you certainly deserve it. Go on do it! Your readers are waiting.*standing O for YoukaiMusashi*
Sorry about not reviewing earlier but my brain had been on vacation lately and I'm still not sure if I've received all of it as of yet.
Oh and don't worry about me forgetting you. I have made you my girl and I don't ever forget my girls. Just my brain.
Again you just have fucking ROCKED the lastest chapter!!
Go YoukaiMusashi- Go YoukaiMusashi *dances around the room yelling that*
-Till next time girl-- much love ;-)
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From ANON - Trace on March 23, 2005
your eloquence is amazing.
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From ANON - PK on March 23, 2005
I promised you a better review than last time, ne? Well, I hope this suffices, and forgive my late-ness!!
Although I already told you, this chapter was another one of the great ones, and I am sure just a spec of the great ones to come! I am waiting patiently ::crosses fingers behind her back on that one:: for the next chapter, but I hope you update soon. Maybe you will feel well enough to update and make a very loyal fan (PK) EXTREMELY happy! Please update soon, please please please!!! ::begs shamelessly at your feet:: Thanks for your words of wisdom, and just to let you know, I am working on the second chappy! ::does happy dance:: YAY FOR Whispers on the Wind: Anxiety Full Force!! Wish me lots of luck! I will need it.....::sweatdrop:: But back to your fic, I love this story, and I am always excited whenever I see that you have updated because this is one of the best ones out there!!

Please have mercy on your faithful fan and keep the updates coming! Hope you feel better soon!!
Lots of love, ramen, and pocky!
PK
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From ANON - Aislynn (PK) on March 22, 2005
ech.....its late......::blinks sleepily::......I just wanted to review quickly and let you know that this was a very interesting chapter, and I have a few questions for you, but I won't bother you with them until I review tomorrow! ~.- *Phew* I just read this chap really quickly, so I probably missed a few things, but I put it off since yesterday and I just couldn't wait any longer. I will re read and put up a better review for you tomorrow after I re-join the land of the living.

You're amazing, and you just keep em' coming. Love ya muches!

Lots of ramen and pocky to you for getting this chap up even in the hard time you are having!
PK
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From ANON - baku on March 21, 2005
omg, this is one of my favorite chappys...so much drama!! oh, hehheh, about my e-mail,uhmmm...yeah, i was at my sisters house and i was in a hurry trying to write it because i wasnt really supposed to be on her laptop, so it probally wouldnt even make sense to me...yep, i love my butcher knife *pets knife*my precious...lol, yeah, you hump...i mean huggle...those lifesize plushies!! *gasp* i finnally found aplace near my house that sells pocky...soooo, hear you go!!*hands huge bag full of pocky*but, yeah, i really liked this chappy and how poor inu-kun seems so...i dont know...sorta vulnerable almost in this chappy. wheeeee!!!! bai bai buu!-baku
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