Click Here!

Reviews for LOVE POISON

By : YoukaiMusashi
  • From ANON - scherezade on February 06, 2005
    Ahem ::clears throat nervously:: I'm finally taking a look ::ducks as a tomato flies over from Argentina::
    First off, the part that you added was PERFECT... I love how you keep giving Kagura such personality and flavor. You're making me like her character more and more -y'know that I'm usually only Inu-Kag centric! I thought the entire scene with Kikyo and Naraku was terrific - how you had Naraku taunting Kikyo with images of Inu snogging Kags by the tree. And the way Naraku rubbed the fact that Inu went to Kags right after seeing Kikyo at the river was perfectly heartless...totally Naraku style. I suppose the only suspension of disbelief comes with the idea that a lusty Kikyo is so hell bent on erasing Kagome's importance to Inuyasha that she is willing to make a deal with her enemy, Naraku. But of course, this only justifies us hating her even more!

    I don't think of this as a filler chapter as all. There are many serious issues to be dealt with in the aftermath of youkai Yasha becoming free. I think you did a wonderful job with exploring the villagers' reactions to Inuyasha after the rampage. After all, they have pretty much adopted the half demon as their village protector, even though for the most part humans don't trust youkai. For Yasha to suddenly threaten them, undermines a lot of goodwill towards him. And yet, for the most part they are still willing to trust him... And then there are Yasha's companions...they too are still willing to trust Inuyasha even though he's purposely keeping them in the dark about what's going on with him.

    Of course, the saddest part of this all is how Inuyasha still can't accept the different parts of himself. How he keeps referring to his demon side as if it's a completely separate being... But now with his human night approaching, I think some exciting developments are on the way, ne?

    Again...terrific writing! I love the way you convey so much emotion...can really get behind the characters' reactions. Looking foward to more....more...more.. :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fruitcake on February 04, 2005
    DAMMIT! update please??!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - gud on February 01, 2005
    oh my god!!! i can't WAIT to read more of this! i keep coming back to see if you updated yet!!! it's so gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) can't wait to read more of it!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Reo on February 01, 2005
    youve created a well written masterpeice.....oh,who the hell am i kidding,IT'S FRIGGIN AWESOME!!! you definitely deserve every good review you get,also,take your time with the next chapter,who cares how long it takes as long as its as good as the others

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Psycho Koneko on January 31, 2005
    Poor Inu, he has to do manual labor in his weak human form. Shippou seems to be getting more mature by the minute. I am sorry that this review might not be as good as the others, but I am totally stressed about my fic, considering my friend who was to help write the lemon is now mad at me. *i can be such a baka sometimes* and I have returned inu for now.......*evil grin*. Sorry I didn't review earlier, but I have had so much work to do, that I just now finished reading this chap. Great work as always, and I am definately gonna have to check out BtS SOON! Thanks as always for mentioning me in your AN's! luv you girl.....and if I get a chance soon, I will try to send you the rough draft of my fic.

    As always, another great chap for a great story! Much love, ramen, and pocky!
    PK 1414
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kute koyori on January 30, 2005
    Heee! Yes! MAKE KIKYO SUFFER!!!!!! HAH A HAH A!!!!!!!!!!! gO NARAKU! (for now anyway) 2 POINTS FOR KIKYO'S SUFFERING!!!!!!!!! And MIroku.....i suggested ya keep your mouth SHUT!!!!! Ya don't wanna deal with an angry confused inu do ya?? GO GO GO! This fic is awesome!!! BUT WHERE ARE THE EVIL EXPLODING RICEBALLS?????? he he he.

    ....MeOw...kiddding


    Report Review

  • From ANON - lady_green_ on January 30, 2005
    I've never watched much inuyasha or even read any fanfiction about the cartoon before but your story drew me in. I could cleary understand the characters (even if i had only seen them once before) and the storyline is intelligent, moving, and sexy. Keep those chapters coming. And BTW, I love the fact that you write long chapters, they resemble real scripts instead of ramblings.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Wing_Goddess on January 29, 2005
    YAY!!! I'm so happy you updated! Another excellent chappie though you had felt it slow. It gave a lot of incite into the mind of our dear hanyou and is building up to whatever the sinister Naraku has planned. Oh and that little girl who was hugging Inuyasha's knees was just adorable. Poor Inu was so flustered by it. SO CUTE! And I love how portray Kagura. Kagura has always been one of my favorite characters, I love her defiance and how strongly she desires to do her own thing. And I love her thoughts on the "scary clay witch stinking up the place." HA! That's exactly what I think of Kikyo too! Oh I can't wait, please update soon...what's gonna happen on the night of the New Moon? What does Inuyasha have to do to confront his weakened blood? Oh ::wails:: the suspence, I can't take it!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Serafim on January 29, 2005
    The BEST fic I had ever read! Continue pls! Hi from Russian sport dancer!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lil_penguin on January 29, 2005
    This is an awesome story. It has all the right elements to have readers begging for more. Lol, me included. Great job with this. Please hurry up and continue. -Amanda
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Durian on January 28, 2005
    Well, it's been a while but I have to say I quite appy with it. I think that out of all the ways I've ever seen Naraku portrayed, your's is definately the most fitting. Whenever I think of Naraku in my mind, he comes out like you write him to be and that's awesome characterization. You really tried to get this chapter from all the angles and I'm quite impressed at that, though I wonder why didn't you try from Kagome's angle? I'm a REALLY BAD scrutinist when it comes to detail so I'm soryy about that. You had that many people review you? I'm kinda scared. I would never be able to keep up with that many people reviewing me. I'll have to post a story AFET I'm sure that it's completely finished, so I can release one chapter a week or so to try and keep up the suspense. Anawya enough yammering. I look foward to more of this and I'll look into Benieth the skin tomorrow, as it is really late, or technically early.
    Durian
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lere on January 28, 2005
    HAHAHAHAHAH!!! Yeah, yeah! I'm getting ready for the carnaval. It will be next week and I can't wait. I don't live in Rio de Janeiro or the north where people dances for four days @ @. But I'll enjoy the hollydays. And thank you for your coments about my country. I love Brazil and I'm happy when people from other countries say as much. Thank you again.

    Oh! Now about the story. Well, I can't wait to see what will happen in his human night. And how about the "new" Kikyo??? I'm biting my nails here!!!! I hope to see what Kagome will think about the situation soon.

    I'm a hentai lover too, but I like stories with plot or one-shots lemons. Just sex like a mechanic thing is terrible.

    Please, update soon and have big hugs from Brazil!!!

    Lere
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Zelix on January 28, 2005
    ....... What can i say? You blew my mind once again! God... this story keeps getting more and more intense with each passing chapter, each chapter is just so... intense and just by reading it i feel so excited! Man, you are one crazy ass god-level writer! Good work, this chapter was perfect and i know the future once will be as well, i won't wish you good luck because like i said a few chapters back, you don't need luck, only your current skill, luck doesn't have anything to do with your excellent story, it's pure skill!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sourgirl on January 28, 2005
    that was a good chapter! please update soon! i absolutely love this fic!!!!!!!! ^________^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fruitcake on January 28, 2005
    woo! thanks for the update. heh. im happy now.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!