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By : YoukaiMusashi

From ANON - misheru on January 19, 2006
Well--I must say this story is probably my favorite on-going IY fic. I think you've nailed Kagome and IY's personalities, and made it seem feasible that they've talked about (as IY puts it) "mushy crap." ^_^ This is probably the first story I've reviewed in three years or so, and I only did because I was overcome by the greatness of it. I like how you've handled youkai IY--and he's quite sexy of course. I can see why you were nominated (and won?) at the IY Fanguild. There aren't too many well written IYKag pairings, or IY epics out there anymore. You are an oasis in the desert, my friend. I think the writing style is on par with Ookami-chan's Turnabout (a compliment of the highest order.) Keep it up.
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From ANON - Kia on January 19, 2006
Okay damn it you made me cry at this chapter, LOL

such a sweet moment between Inu and Kagome...well, as sweet as they can get while still yelling at each other....and then Kouga had to go and show up and ruin everything! *sniffles*

Then finally Inu confesses what happened with the cold hearted bitch *coughKikyoucough*....not to Kagome, but he confesses it none the less.... *wails*

Please give our poor hanyou a break! *sniffles* I'm hoping his human blood will strengthen maybe just a little bit from his confession? *hopeful puppy dog eyes*

I never thought I'd ask this, much less beg for it....but any way you can squeeze in a fluffly inu/kag scene? I'd prefer the fluff while he's hanyou, but...well...I'll take anything I can get....this chapter was so heartbreaking, I really think inu/kag need a little fluff. *gives puppydog eyes again*

No update until Febuary ? *sniffles*

*glances at calendar*

*waits (im)patiently*

Hope you have a wonderful vacation!

~Kia
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From ANON - Echo on January 19, 2006
STILL SOOO AWESOME!!! I loved this chapter but *sniffle* Miroku almost got killed, Inuyasha was purified, and Kagome was scared. But I'm confident that the next chapter will be interesting. I wonder what Kikyo will do to Inuyasha? *head throbs* I need pocky.... Always great! Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, btw, I'm glad you thank everyone who reviews. Thats quite sweet of you! I haven't seen someone thank everyone who reviews so thats awesome. And I do read your author's notes. *wink* *large box full of pocky and ramen for you!* :)
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From ANON - subetehoshi on January 19, 2006
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! Go action-packed goodness! This chapter was NUTS! I LOVED IT! haha, like always! mmm....wolf blood...tastes....good...*cough**cough*.....I feel like running around the room chasing my non-existent tail because this chapter kicked some Kouga/Miroku ass (well...some Miroku 'neck'...) mwahaha! Kagome and her powers were TOO COOL! The visualization was awesome!
Was I ever happy to find that my FAVOURITE story had been updated! And, you NEVER dissappoint! (man, does it feel like I put too much pressure on you or what? haha) Every chapter is always amazing...I can't get enough!
And yes, I did promise I'd review FOREVER AND EVER...so here I am, once again...as another day passes and we take another step forward towards 'forever'.....
THANKS AGAIN for ALL your hard work!
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From ANON - drake220 on January 19, 2006
::whistles:: damn..!! That was one hell of an action sequence you wrote! It was wonderfully descriptive and your fully youkai Inuyasha gave me the shivers. Loved him. Also, kudos on Kagome's screaming reaction. There were no repitition of phrases that I could see which I found (1) extremely impressive and (2) a miracle in a scream monolouge. you could feel her desperation and i think it was really well done.
this chapter was fantastic. You got in the angst, the violence and the humor (Miroku is the greatest fall man of all time. Need a laugh? Beat up Miroku.)
Enjoy your trip!
(and I did fine on finals, thank god! thanks for the cheerleading.)
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From ANON - Kid ^_^ on January 19, 2006
AAAAAAAAHHHHHH! THANK YOU SO MUCH! This chapter was DEDICATED to ME! YES, ME, the geeky loser Kid ^_^!!! Psh, the arrival is fine, (you updated the day after Dog Skin!!! Isn't this week just Awesome?!!? :D) you were only, oh, fifteen days late. ;) I'm kidding. It is VERY much appreciated, as I'm sure you can tell. Just for this, I'm gonna review And sing a song: "Kappei Kappei Birthday, from all of you to me. And if I get lucky, he can do me in a tree." Ah ha ha ha. I made that. Yup, I sure did. ;)

Gasp! I read your lovely AN's! :O They make me sooo happy (not to mention envious of other great reviewers. Pout pout...). Your responses are so heartwarming, and they put such a big smile on my face. :) Just like when I read the AN's today.

I don't think it was so much that we wanted to see Kouga get his ass kicked, more like we just wanted another oppourtunity to see the sexy, wild wolf get in another brawl with the equally sexy, hot inu hanyou. ^_^ :D XD I suck at writing action sequences. >< XD Uhhh uh...full youkai Inuyasha...Uhm, excuse me, I have to go to the bathroom. :) Ha ha ha. Awwww, poor baby Miroku! I'D cuddle the perverted houshi boy. :)

To say the least, this chapter was very..powerful to me. For some reason I can never completely describe things the way I feel in reviews. I end up mostly using the same words a lot, (this annoys me constantly >
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From ANON - GUESS WHO MADE WAAAFFLES?! on January 19, 2006
HI HI ITS ME HINAMI! sorry i been like all over teh place but not aff...some how i forgot about aff...

...

.....YEH WELL I CAME HERE TO SAY I STILL READIN UR FICS AND THEY ARE TEH BEST! ESPECIALLY THE RECENT ONES! raaah cant get enough of how great it is..

-oh and srry fOR the random name ive been watching too much invader zim...I KNOW I NEED TO GROW UP!!
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From ANON - Kirah on January 18, 2006
I love this story... I can find absolutely nothing wrong with it, and that is rare for me... despite going remarkabley slow, every chapter hads it's purpose... and, as usual, I cannot think straight, so you'll have to forgive the pointless review. Will be checking back every day to see if you've updated, you can count on that, so you will be hearing from me again.
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From ANON - Kia on January 08, 2006
Please, for the love of all that is holy, please update!

Being a writer myself, I know how difficult it can be some times...

*whimpers* but your killing me! Your story is so wonderful, I've been reduced to tears quite a few times, laughed, hated Kikyou and Naraku with a passion and cheered for Kagura and Sesshouramu to get together (even though that wasn't a paring I hadn't thought of before).

I howled in frustration when I realized that the story wasn't finished. It's my own fault really, I should have checked to make sure it was finished, cause I hate WIP's. No offense, but I've learned that it really breaks my heart to get involved in a fabulous story, only to find that it isn't finished yet. I'm not blaming you of course, It was my own stupid fault for not checking, but.....Gah! *whimpers in frustration*

You're a fabulous writer, and you've kept all the Characters miraculously IC, true to the show. Including Kagome and Inuyasha's extremely frustrating ability to mis-understand each other and piss each other off at the drop of a hat, LOL! Your style of writing has made it incredibly easy to picture what is happening in the scene, as if it were really happening on the anime.

And I am infinately glad to find a story that isn't just all about the Lemon. Don't get me wrong, I'm not opposed to it, hehe, on the contrary infact. But a great plot, fantastic writing and such clear character vizualization make the Lemon all the more worth it. Think of it as the cherry on the banana split, if you will. ;)

Please please please continue writing this. I can't wait to read more.

I am both looking forward to, and dreading the time when this fantastic story ends.

~Kia

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From ANON - Lady_sttar on January 03, 2006
This is an awesome story! One of my favorites! I'm really interested in how InuYasha will tell Kagome about Kikyou... unless some does it for him... My only complaint is you take too long to update! LoL Though I really can't complain because I take FOREVER to update mine and they are not nearly as long as yours. Well keep writing I am looking forward to your craft of words!
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From ANON - Ashi Taiyouno on January 02, 2006
Horray! I finally caught up with the rest of the people reading this fic! YM, my comments in my previous review still stand, perhaps even more strongly than ever with appearence of Kouga and the further definition of Kagura. After I first reviewed, I went back and read the manga series again (well, as much as the local bookstore had, at any rate, since it sucks being poor), and I am still awed at how true to the characterizations you came.

Not quite a criticism, more of a personal pref though...I would like to see more done with Shippo. I loved the way you (quite literally) snuck him in there in this current chapter. That's the only real bad thing I have to say (and can you really even call that bad?)!

Until later!
:D
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From ANON - Serena (MeMoi~) on December 30, 2005
Oh my god, how could you leave such a cliff hanger?! This is the first time I read this story and I love it. I went back and read some of the previous reviews and all I can say is that if one does not enjoy a story then they do not have to read it. I'm also very glad that you take the time to go back and edit the mistakes out, because as a communications major who has been forced into many a English class, mistakes can be a bit more obvious if not more distracting to me than probably the average person. On that note....how dare you leave such a cliff hanger??!! lol, update soon!
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From ANON - karla on December 28, 2005
dude!!! i bet Kouga's going to get his ass kicked!
i really like your story so far so keeeeeeep wriiiittttiiinnngggg!!!!
Pleeeeze!!!
you can tell i really really love it!!
and if anybody flames you....fuck em all to hell!!!
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From ANON - MEL on December 22, 2005
MAN THAT WAS GOOD. HATE THE CLIFFY LOVED THE CHAPTER :-) CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.
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From ANON - Lynn on December 21, 2005
Hello!

Wonderful chapy again! You know, your limes always makes me want to have sex... And also the angst... I'm just sooo glad that you didn't sent them straight to bed... Love your fic!!!!!!!!! - goes to rape boyfriend...

Lynn
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