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  • From ANON - kogasgirl-1 on January 06, 2005
    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Cutie Pie Hentai on January 06, 2005
    Jes- very well done chapter! I liked the interlude with Shippo- that'll go far with Kagome and if he wins over the kit, perhaps the runt will give them some time alone...Nicely discriptive lime- sweet but also in character, taking Inu's various sides into account. The transformation scenes seemed a bit rushed, but, hey, we were working towards the lime, which wasn't rushed at all, so you're forgiven. I wonder where Myoga ran off to....
    Jen D.
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  • From ANON - baku on January 06, 2005
    poor inu, talk about sexual tension...but at least i got good use of my fuzzy red handcuffs!!thank you so much!! i really liked that chapter, it was so awsome. you rock so hard!!! i freakin love you!! i guess i have to give you back inuyasha now...*tears* im gonna miss him so much!!
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  • From ANON - Psycho Koneko on January 06, 2005
    Kudos again on another great chapter. I can't wait to know how Inuyasha manages to control his youkai. I hope that he can, but I will leave that up to you. Once again, your story was AMAZING. Please keep up the good work and update soon, I check every afternoon for it, so don't disappoint us. lol. Thanks for considering my offer, and I hope to read the next chapter soon! Much love and ramen!

    Always a big fan,
    Psycho Koneko ~_-
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  • From ANON - Heather on January 06, 2005
    great story! i love it! lol my favorite on this whole website.i hope Inuyashas gonna be ok. well post again soon and ill review ;)
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  • From ANON - sourgirl on January 06, 2005
    this is a great story have going on here! please update soon :D
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  • From ANON - zelix (Not logged on) on January 06, 2005
    Wow... that scene and all that happened in this chapter... just simply, wow. You really gave that personality idea i suggested a lot of thought didn't you? The results were simply magnificent! To be truthful i was a bit suspicious if i gave that idea of Inuyasha's split personality to the right person but seeing as how you made it happen, my worries are blown away for good, you were the right person and to be truthful, you surpassed my expectations! Congratulations, you impressed me to the core.

    Also, on the Lime scene, that was SO hot! If the lime is this good, i can't wait to see what the LEMON is all about... like, if these limes of yours are this good, can't wait to see what the main course is all about, heh, your style is excellent...

    Oh yeah, thank for the review on "Time Soul Exodus", i'm glad your enjoying it's beginning, just wait until you read further, your in for a story unlike any other... well, with the exception of "Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past", THAT one is unlike anything, i swear, that fic is the one i'm pouring the most intensest plots i've ever cooked up. Well, hopefully i'll hear from you soon and i would wish you good luck, but seeing as how skilled you are, you won't need it, your skill alone is more than enough.
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  • From szmadad on January 04, 2005
    Oh my gosh...THANK YOU for your wonderful words of praise and for the "plug". Really, it's too much and you are too kind. :) You *know* that I just love your writing...and the fact that you seem to enjoy mine, well that in and of itself makes me happy. What I love about this chapter and about your story overall is that you delve so well into the characters' thoughts and feelings. You don't leave things one-dimensional. The push-pull of Inu-Kag's relationship is one that many of us write about since the dynamic exists in the anime and the manga: they get close only to have one of them freak out/feel guilty/feel unworthy and then try to distance themself from the other. The way you set up the scenes conveys so much of that tension without you having to specifically describe it. You did a great job of the whole conversation that Inu-Kag have immediately after Inu pulls away from the kiss...and by extension what happens in front of the rest of the gang with Inuyasha trying to *get* Kagome to leave. I thought your campsite dialogue was great! Miroku the pervert always catches on quickly when there's a hint of action and he really doesn't seem to be able to keep his mouth shut, does he? Sango is always so strong...so caring about Kagome's happiness. And then there's cute little Shippo who really wants to make sure that everyone in his makeshift family is happy and stays together.

    I'm very excited about the next chapter because you've given us some wonderful possibilities for the way things might proceed. Hmm...wise yet cowardly Myoga...I wonder what "pearls of wisdom" he'll be able to offer?

    I keep thinking that the resurrected Kikyou is waiting to rear her head and tell Kagome what happened (I'd imagine that her version would be very edited...she'd leave out the fact that Inu called Kag's name) by the river. Eww....I feel icky just thinking about it!

    You're doing a great job...so please don't doubt yourself. I still can't get over how you write so beautifully in English...considering it's a second language for you.

    :)
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  • From ANON - Baku on January 03, 2005
    poor Inuyasha, so confuzzled...but i will wait for your lemony goodness.oh, and do you think i can borrow Inuyasha for a night???I really want to break in my new hand cuffs...
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  • From ANON - kagome1312 on January 03, 2005
    luvd it plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Pshyco Koneko on January 03, 2005
    Wow, I am a really big fan of your story, I can hardly beleive that this is your first fic, you are as good as a veteran writer. I am loving the story line, and I just read all your chappies in one sitting because they are that addictive. I hope you can come out w/ the next chappie soon though, I am dying to know what happens next. I have always been a big fan of mushy inu/kags stories, and yours is the best I have read so far. I wanted to flame at you a tinie tiny bit when the kikyo scene happened, but I trusted you, I am just anxious about what Kagome's reaction will be when Inu tells her, I trust you won't disappoint though. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!! I mean it. I am not much of a fanfic writer myself, but I could give you a few ideas if you wanted. Just let me know. Can't wait to read more stories from you. Get the next chappie out asap, onegai!

    Ja ne! Arigatou for the great read!
    Psycho Koneko
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  • From ANON - Sandro666 on January 03, 2005
    its good, keep it up
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  • From ANON - Zelix on January 03, 2005
    Hehehehe, thanks for the credits and words of praising... just remember what i said in those Emails, no matter what sort of writer's blocks you have, i'll help you.

    Okay, now for the review: You handled that camp scene with skill! I wouldn't have been able to come up with something like that. Also, it seems like the ideas i gave you are starting to flourish huh? Keep it up, even if i sent you those ideas, i'm more than eager to see how you play them out, VERY much more than eager... hehehe. Update soon again, this chapter ruled.
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  • From ANON - kagome1312 on January 02, 2005
    i luvd it plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - code_wyze on January 02, 2005
    I'll tell ya what's wrong! Too much unsatisfied sexual tension! Kagome creamed her panties and she barely even got started! *cough* Someone has an unsatisfied libido... I think Inuyasha's overworrying about how badly Kagome will react, although she definitely won't take it lying down. That girl seems more forgiving than Jesus, for crying out loud. Can't wait to see your next chappy!
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