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Reviews for LOVE POISON

By : YoukaiMusashi
  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2005
    i loved ch 6! i can't wait till your next update! ...and lemon! :D
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  • From ANON - baku on January 01, 2005
    ::gasp:: i feel so loved!although you made me role of the bed when inuyasha told kagome to forget about everything...::glare:: but its ok , i still love you ^^ and MERRY NEWYEAR!! i mean happy newyear...i think...
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  • From ANON - kogasgirl_1 on January 01, 2005
    so what happens does he tell kagome how he feels or what?
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on January 01, 2005
    Totally loving this story...I like how you have Kikyou as more of a victim than some evil bitch like most people...it wasn't her fault that she was tricked and killed and brought back from the dead! I don't like her either...but someone has to be the sexual antagonist in the story. Can't wait for you to update!
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  • From ANON - morlana on January 01, 2005
    Hi,

    Just found your fic and I Love it, I can't wait to read whatelse you write. Even though I"m not a Kikyou lover that chapter sure did add a lot of complications to the story, complicatios I'm sure inu and kags will confront. Is there anyway I can get notices of updates? i"m not too familiar with how AFF.net works yet.

    thanks for writing and keep up the good work!
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  • From szmadad on December 31, 2004
    Your last 2 chapters have sealed the deal if there was ever any doubt (and there wasn't in my mind!) about your ability to depict the complexity of a character's emotions. Ch 5 in particular just floored me. It's actually very creepy - I'm currently working on an update to one of my fics where Inu breaks down his feelings for Kagome...when he first realized he was in love with her etc. And a lot of what I had put in my draft is what you've written. Of course the details and the phrasing differ but the set up is eerily similar. Sigh...this means I have to rethink what I'm writing :)

    Truly, these past 2 chapters are terrifically worded and highlight the different levels of thoughts and emotions that poor Inuyasha is dealing with regarding his feelings for the two mikos in his life.

    Unlike many fics that depict Inu as having knee-jerk responses to and simplistic assumptions about the various events that befall him, you have really given him a depth...a credibility. He wants so much, cares so much...and yet there's so much standing in the way of him actually having a relationship with Kagome.

    And I am growing really curious about what Kagome's eventual reaction to what happened b/w him and Kikyo will be. We all know she will find out. The manner in which she does will make a huge difference - smug Kikyo throwing it in Kag's face vs. mortified Inu telling her the truth. Hm...why do I think it might be the former?

    At any rate...excellent writing...excellent characterization. Keep it up.
    And feel free to email me :)


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  • From ANON - renee on December 31, 2004
    please do a lemon chapter.

    p.s. love your story.
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  • From ANON - J on December 31, 2004
    Theres nothing wrong with this chapter everything in it's right place. STOP DOUBTING YOURSELF AS A WRITER. I'M A BIG FAN!! Keep putting the chapters up. Happy new year. Heres to the next great year and to the next great chapters!! God Bless!!
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  • From ANON - Antoinette on December 31, 2004
    What can I say ... but ... WOW! WOW! WOW!
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  • From ANON - Zelix on December 31, 2004
    VERY good chapter, i don't know why you would think something is wrong with it, it's good! It pieces things together nicely and all that... As for suggestions on what might happen in the future, i'll send you an Email about that soon, update soon and happy new year!
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  • From ANON - Baku on December 30, 2004
    OMG!!! i love you...although i was about to pull my knife out on you in the last chapter*growls*, but its ok now. your now one of my new favorit writers! i rank you up there with sueric. becaause she is so awsome...so i guess that makes you awsome to. so happy dance for you!!!omg!!i just rymed!!>.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on December 30, 2004
    I thought your story is very beautifully written and wanted to make a suggestion. Here it is, maybe you can have a female demon try to come on to inuyasha so that we can see kagomes demon side come out.( I know shes not demon but she does look and sound scaring sometimes)*shutters at that thought* nothing will happen HE WILL NOT BE INTERESTED IN HER. But shes in heat and wants to be with him.( then something happens although I don't know what) His demon side comes out because of the smell of the heat but who does he go after because kagome and the female demon are both in heat. He starts to yell mine (while sticking his nose in the air to actually have the scent engulf him) but thats all he says. Now somehow the female demon has kagome in her grasps ( you write how) so he looks at them with lust and need in his eyes only the female thinks hes looking at her not kagome since shes a full demon and not a weak human like her. So she laughs at kagome who's still in her arms and kagome is confused and hurt. He looks at them still yelling mine. Then the female whispers in her ear something a long the line of " You a mere human can never do what a female demon like me can do and that is to satisfy a powerful demon like inuyasha." Of course him having great hearing he hears that and only angers him even more * who knew that was possible* After she says that she starts to cry and thinks Can this be true? He lungs at them with his blinding speed and then the female demon throws kagome hard (shes still awake though) and turns around to entice him with her behind only to feel the wind past her and him going to kagome yelling mine. Grabs her and then leaps into the forest leaving the female demon behind and really angry. She will get him she says. We both know that's not true though. Although he doesn't hurt kagome and nothing happens as of yet or maybe it does *smiles evilly* but he some how ends up going back to normal of course it's totally up to you.


    To me that tells kagome not only does his human side wants, needs and loves her but also his demon side. Both sides that make up our little inuyasha. The inuyasha she loves with everything in her. Maybe you can even have kagome kill the female demon later or not for trying to do anything with her MATE!! (As I have stated kagome has a temper) Then that can turn him in hotter for her cause he sees that she will fight and maybe even kill if anyone tries anything with inuyasha. (Kagome shouldn't always cry and be weak, have her fight for her man, her BITCH)

    I think that will bring your story to new and interesting heights. Especially when it comes time for them to mate. The explosion will be unbelievable. I hope you consider this. You wanted an idea so here it is. But you can only use it if I get some credit for it. (just kidding) *gos to the corner and cries uncontrollably* *please gave me credit if you use it*
    I hope you like it, please let me know. sorry it's so long.
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  • From ANON - J on December 30, 2004
    Damn that was good, please keep it coming and let it just stay like that so what it does finally happen and they mate it would be an explosion of everything that they are. Just a thought! This story does so freaking rock *jumping up and down* and now cause of the story even though written by you I love the show even more now than before. *getting excited all over again*

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  • From ANON - kagome1312 on December 30, 2004
    woa who won did inuyasha win or did his demon side??? great update hope to read more soon!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Zelix on December 30, 2004
    A nice, heated chapter.... wow... not much i can say except hopefully you'll update soon again, this fic is excellent and i was right to put it into my recommend reading section.
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