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By : YoukaiMusashi
  • From ANON - Death2You on December 30, 2004
    God dammit woman! why must you end it in such a manner!
    p/s keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Chokoreto on December 30, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOO DAT WAS SO EVIL! and i thought its a full lemon V_V so disappointed...by makin me happy ADD A NEW CHAPTER ASAP!!!! XDDDD and it was gettin SOOO GOOD TOO!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2004
    Wow. Great great story. I love your way of writing - everything just...is so right. The part when Inuyasha confesses his love to Kagome in Chapter 4...I nearly cried, it was so beautiful. Hurry up and post the continuing (sp?) chapters! Not nice to leave a cliffhanger >_
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  • From szmadad on December 30, 2004
    I'm so glad my review made you feel better...but you have nothing to feel bad about! Every chapter I read just makes me admire your writing *that* much more! Your style is fluid and I love your use of ...; makes everything glide together. I was truly melting, absolutely turning into a puddle of goo as I read your description of the kiss. If that's the kind of lime you write then by all means, full steam ahead! Besides, as much as we all want a lemon between Inu-Kag, you've set up a scenario with characters that you can't rush into that with. I mean it would be strange to have our devastatingly handsome but up to now emotionally conflicted and sexually inexperienced hanyou decide to have wild youkai sex with innocent, virginal Kagome out of nowhere. Though many fics do that and it's just fine. I personally like the longer, drawn out approach. Much more gratifiying in the end...also more realistic :)

    Regarding your comments about Kikyo...I totally agree with you! I think having Inuyasha turn human was definitely more to benefit her than him...as such, it was a selfish wish and who knows how the Jewel would've interpreted it? And you're right...it's implied that they would stay together as man and woman and have a family. The thing is, I just don't see the original Kikyo acknowledging or even acting upon a physical desire for a hanyou Inuyasha, given a miko tinged distrust of youkai and even the conventions of society at the time. A human Inuyasha would be a different story and would thus be fair game for settling down and creating the family and "normal life" she so badly wanted.

    When I made that comment about resurrection making her horny...I was being a bit flip. :) But you make a great point - Kikyo version 2.0 (resurrected) has been freed by many of the rules that bound her in life. She's become more of an "ends justify the means" character (actions with Kagome and the jewel) ...even though she retains some of her initial traits (tendency to heal the injured and sick; kindness to children). Given that, it's plausible that Kikyo's earthy desires, which had been repressed during life, are now unleashed in the form of 2.0 -and in an extreme sort of way. Would be consistent with her being motivated by an irrational anger and desire for vengeance (both of which presumably were also repressed during her real existence).

    Ok...enough of the blathering!

    Write more soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Cutie Pie Hentai on December 29, 2004
    ok, let's try that again. < i > to start < / i > to end (without the spaces)
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  • From ANON - Cutie Pie Hentai on December 29, 2004
    Good stuff! In regards the italics- to start the italics and at the end....hope this helps.
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  • From ANON - Sueric on December 29, 2004
    Nice. Good writing skillz! A very good start! I don't know if you know this, but ... In one of the earlier episodes, InuYasha makes a point of saying that he cannot go with Kagome to see the Soul Piper because that is where "Humans are dragged into hell" ... which is why he can't go. I found this interesting. In the manga, he doesn't say that, but what he does say afterward does indicate the same, something along the lines of, "If you had gotten in trouble, I couldn't have saved you," to Kagome... Just an interesting point of reference. I psersonally don't think he ever promised he'd go to hell with Kikyou, and even if she had managed to drag him down there, I don't think they would have been together for eternity, either. Apparently hell is only a human place where youkai/hanyous cannot go.....

    But back on your story, I very enjoyable! Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Kirah on December 29, 2004
    You must update faster.... I hate cliffhangers... I would say what I thought of your story, but I am at a complete loss of adjectives. But look at it this way- people only review chappies once, so more chapters = more reviews! I think...
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  • From ANON - Kirah on December 29, 2004
    You're forgiven. Damn, you hate Kikyo alot, don't you? At a loss for words, will review again...
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  • From ANON - kagome1312 on December 29, 2004
    i was pissed bout the whole kikyo thing but hey then it turns out it was nothin and i was pleased. i the fact that he actually pushed his over sized ego to the size and actually told kagome his feelings n.e. ways i like ur story plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kadaede on December 29, 2004
    OMG! Don't leave me hanging like this....did they kiss??????????? ARGH!!! Update onegai!!
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  • From ANON - zelix on December 28, 2004
    hmm, interesting... let's see how the next chapter plays out. Oh yes, thanks for the review on "Shiroi Inu, Kuroi Inu", i've added this story into my 'recommended reading' section on my profile. Hopefully i'll hear from you again!
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  • From szmadad on December 28, 2004
    I really like how you're blending in very realistic emotional reactions on Inu's part with all the hentai imagery. I have to admit, my eyes just popped open at the idea of the resurrected Kikyo doing *anything* remotely sexual to Inuyasha. I've seen her depicted as lusting for Inuyasha before in other fics and have tended to roll my eyes at that. But if I was to believe it happening at any point, I would pick the way you set it up, though I still am laughing over how in life Kikyo may have stolen a hug or a kiss and in death she appears to have become quite the frisky chick. Does resurrection make one more horny? Hmmm.... :)
    Of course I'm wondering just what in the hell possessed Inu to step out of the water buck naked and go to Kikyo. Was it a spell? He always seems to go a little cloudy when she's around...
    But you've done a great job of presenting Inu's conflicting thoughts and emotions regarding Kikyo. In my opinion, that's the part that's the most important and yet almost the hardest to make sense of when writing fanfics. I mean, if it wasn't such a complex issue, we know Inu would be with Kagome!
    At any rate, I'm looking forward to more. I know Kikyo is going to rear her bitter clay head sometime in the future. Afterall, she now knows that the one she's lusting for wants her reincarnation! Talk about woman scorned! And Kagome always is so vulnerable to whatever words Kikyo throws her away...ahh...
    Well, I hope there's some good hentai Inu-Kag action to offset the angst I feel is coming up! :)
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  • From ANON - Fluffy+Kagome=Kawaii on December 28, 2004
    all i can say is....DAMN YOU HOW DARE YOU END IT LIKE THAT!!!I DEMAND YOU UPDATE AT ONCE!
    P/S: love your story! ^-^
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  • From ANON - nokomarie the snake on December 28, 2004
    OK, OK, so you really know how to slap on a cliffy. I'm enjoying this very much. Even if poor Inu my want to rip a certain peice of anatomy off for where it's been. Hope Kikyou goes off in a huff and *stays* that way for a bit.

    Keep writing!
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