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By : YoukaiMusashi

From ANON - flesh tuxedo on December 21, 2005
this story is just, wow. your stlye is so clean and you nail the characters. please update soon.
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From inuficcrzy on December 20, 2005
whoa.

very very whoa.

holy cow!! hot steamy goodness, one hell of a funny shippo moment, and poor miroku. i'll bet he almost had an anurism trying not to laugh.

now we're really in for it. poor koga's not gonna know what hit him.

you're awesome and fabulous and rock so hard it would hurt the state of wisconsin!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - neko0805 on December 18, 2005
Wonderful story! Please continue!
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From ANON - Nicole on December 18, 2005
Hi I'm sorry I have not reviwed lately, I really like how the story is going and want to tell you to keep up the good work.
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From ANON - Kid ^_^ on December 18, 2005
Oh, yes, I forgot to mention how this is a very treasured and beloved Christmas present. ^_^ Now, my birthday IS coming up on Januarary 3, so, you know, if you ever just feel like posting a chapter close to my birth date....maybe even dedicating it....(Whistles innocently) ~_^ :D That would be an excellent present. (Kid ^_^'s mind: It would be the best present EVER!!!!!!! Just like this one!!)

Happy holidays!

Until next time. :)

"Why spell Christmas with an "X"? It's just laziness I guess..." ;)
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From ANON - JupiterIris on December 18, 2005
This story continues to enthrall and amaze. You've kept the characters so like themselves, and the reader can completely imagine the scenes you write. You're a very good writer. Very talented. I hope to see more of your work.
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From ANON - loulou4729 on December 18, 2005
I am one of those guilty people who forget to review. But I just had to this time. This chapter was out of fucking control! *Thats a good thing*

I just knew he was gonna turn somewhere in this chapter. Please don't take away dark Inu so quickly in the next chapter. I love him. Please keep up the good writing too. It's a breath of fresh air then the other crap that has been floating around lately. *Opps, I'm gonna raise a few brows with that one huh? lol. Bring it on biatches!*
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From ANON - Vylest on December 18, 2005
You are such a sweetie, YM! :) I really like how you went out of ur way to respond to reviews and that's so appreciated! I totally love your story, ALWAYS, and this chapter was HOT, not to mention very well scripted (as always)! LOL! Such sexual tension! It was a very good spicy chap and thanks for going out of ur way to post it up 'fore the big X-mas. My present for you will be to spread along the news of this story to all of my friends so you can get more adoring readers. Merry Christmakwanzahanukah! *Giggles* U are an awesome fanfic authoress. I will always cheer ur writings on--never doubt that. This reviewin' fic nut u won't lose as a loyal fan! Happy Holidays to ya:)
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From ANON - Christine on December 17, 2005
Oh please plase please pppppllllleeeeeeasssssseeeeee update soon. Does inuyasha kill kouge? I hope not. And is the chapter where inuyasha and kagome make love coming up soon?
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From ANON - Echo on December 17, 2005
Again, an absolutly wonderful chapter!!! I hope Kouga won't die... but I've gotta feeling Inu-chan's gonna beat the living shit out of him... I can't wait for more!!!! Whoop!
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From ANON - Cynbad146 on December 17, 2005
You surprise me. Right when I think that you can not out do yourself, you do it again! Unbelieveable chapter, chocked full of feelings, emotions, and actions. I think I need hospital rest after reading this chapter! Thoughts? I will start with, I was wondering why you did not take advantage of the initial bath scene when it was so full of potential . After reading the LIMON (spelling intentional), I understand now. You were saving up for later. During the preLIMON talk, you did a great job describing Kagome's insecurities regarding if she was InuYasha's "chosen one," and InuYasha's fears and jealousies regarding youkai Inuyasha's actions with Kagome since his human blood had been weakened. The subsequent lime was so good that I am renaming it a LIMON! One of my favorite parts (there are lots of them!) was, "You are mine, Kagome. Mine. You belong to me." Another one was, "I'll claim . . everything that you are . . ." A really great one was, "All of me, all of you, one." Very feeling and eloquent, I thought. And most hilarous, mixed with emotion, was, "Do something about that!/?" Ling MFAO helped me to remember to breathe! That important paragraph, where InuYasha was thinking, "could he," was very insightful, regarding his thoughts on his own personal "dark side" and the "dark hanyou," Naraku. The cliffhanger grand finale with dense Kouga was a cherry on top of the sundae. I can not compliment you enough. BRAVO! Thank you for always sharing with us and sorry for the long review. Cynbad146
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From ANON - subetehoshi on December 17, 2005

oh....my.....GOD!!!!! I think I just about died when I read this chapter...I love it, I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT!!!!!!! I really don't know how you do it...ack, I'm once again left speechless...but now I can at least die happy, because this chapter kicked ass (lime-y goodness and all!), AND you forgave my lazyness...I promised I would review again, and so here I am! And I will, forever and ever....tadaa!

I LOVE how you make the comparisons between all of Inuyasha's "halves"....it always leaves me in a state of profound astonishment...and your descriptions are lengendary...I actually feel like I'm watching everything that goes on (hentai parts included...hehe)

and THEN you add Kouga to the mix....AHHHHH *passes out and goes to her happy place*

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Kid ^_^ on December 16, 2005
OH MY GOD, ADIOS MIO, I KNOW!!!! Yamaguchi-san is like��unnnngh, orgasmic. ^^ I just watched the second movie in Japanese earlier today. :D Ooo, the Spanish version, I�ve been wanting a taste of that. (Blame the site Owarinai Yume on starless-dreamer.net for that.) Is Max Alto good as Inuyasha? I�ve heard he is, and the seiyuu � voice actress/actor � for Kagome in Spanish is quite good as well, I hear.

Haha, a quick laugh and a small smile appeared on my face when at the start of the chapter you used the word �pregnant� to describe the silence in the air in a paragraph about Kagome being naked. ^_^ See what I�m getting at? And you get pregnant by� See what I�m getting at�? :D XD (Psh. Who�re you calling a dork�)

Oh, SHIT, Koga, Hun, you�re DOOMED!!11!11!1!!!!!11!!!1!! >< Ohhhhhhhhh, Man!!! But yes, MUCHAS GRACIAS for this chapter! I mean, whoo, Kagura I�m going to have to use your fan for a second, I think I need to cool down a little bit. Ahhhh. Worth the wait, girl. Worth The Wait. The lime was so precious. The emotions�.Ugh! The dialogue! The descriptions! The need! The want! Girl, you rock me. (Man, if the limes are this hot, imagine the lemons soon to come. Oh, Jesus, we are FUCKING DEAD. :| ) But yes, I adore your story, and I am happy as H-E-L-L I found it again, that long time ago. Kudos to the exquisite YoukaiMusashi!!

Yay, go Charging Handles Forward for his last review! And drake220 and Ashi Taiyouno are such great reviewers that I am quite discouraged at my own ability. :| Why, cruel world, why?!!?!?!! ^_^ Hee hee. And, yeah, I read the reviews. And the responses to the reviews�.and the author notes�..What! >< I actually think lots of others do to, which is why my reviews sometimes address people other than the author in the review. Yeah, I know, it�s stupid. I�m stupid? Fuck. :|

Oh, and I�d like to bring this to your attention. Now, I don�t want you feeling you have to change anything about this chapter, because honestly, you don�t, but cobalt is usually used to describe a dark, deep blue colour. And well, Koga�s eyes are a very bright, sky blue colour. Although, the thesaurus that I am using (MSN Hotmail�s) says that �cobalt� is a synonym of �cerulean�, �blue� (which can range extremely in colour, of course. -_-), and �azure�, which are bright, clear blues, like Koga�s eyes. So, I guess that cobalt is sufficient, then. Excuse me for questioning your word use. ^_^

Well, I�m done. I have to go and check if any of my other wonderful, brilliant, talented authors have updated - such as yourself, if you did not catch on. :P - and if they have, YIPEE!!! Hey, and maybe I�ll work on some of my own stories that I have going and, you know, actually Get One Out There. -_- Maybe we can look forward to some of that in the future.�.Maybe. -_-;;

Pets YM for her beautiful, accomplished chapter. Pet pet pet. Pat pat pat. ^^ (>�)> (= Kirby!!! Kirby wants some hugs! ^_^)
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!
�Felices Navidades!

�Cuidados! (Take care!)
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From Pocahontas20 on December 16, 2005
Oh my God! That chapter made me so hot! The detail is excruciatingly deep and made me think I was Kagome in every sense of the being. Hopefully soon Inuyasha will get it through his thick skull that not only is he three beings, but one person and every one of his personalities is HIM. Well, I hand you the cake so you can eat it too and some chocolate. Every girl should have chocolate. Anyway, my mind has turned blank and I can't think. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Love, peace, and chicken grease.
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From ANON - ktakn *-* on December 16, 2005
awwweeeeeeeesomeeeeee...

you ave to continue this!! update soon please!... i just love it when inuyasha becomes full youkai!!!!!!

so possessive... >=D

update please!

congrautlaitons great chapter!
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