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Reviews for LOVE POISON

By : YoukaiMusashi
  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 16, 2005
    Ooooh, Yeah? Merry Christmas when you leave us hanging? Keh! We should string you up by your toes. Wonderful chapter though.

    Snowfall
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  • From Dunkelgelb on December 16, 2005
    Wow, you are pushing the R rating to its very limit, pushing its envelope and cramming it to the gills with better smut than that contained in a great number of NC-17 rated fics on this site. Youkai Musashi for the win!!!!1111oneone
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  • From ANON - Shaehl on December 16, 2005
    This has to be my favorite chapter yet. Can't wait to see Inuyasha beat down Kouga.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on December 16, 2005
    I got a shout out! With Ramen! This almost makes up for the fact that i'm going to fail finals.
    See, I have finals right now. I should NOT be reading a fanfic right now. i certainly not want to reread it (well, the smutty parts anyhow) because it was so great. But I am. Why? Because this chapter was great. I mean so many awesome aspects to this chapter:
    "lady bush"- can I please use this phrase as a one shot? I have a whole huge scenario in my head now adn i want to write it. No, need to write it. I'll send you a link to it and dedicate it to you.....
    that whole sexy, up-against-a-tree thing: dear lord. Very, very sexy. I mean, REALLY sexy. I hate the outdoors but I wnt to grab my local, tormented hanyou and introduce myself to the woods, you know? great scene. Scenes like that are what aff.net was made for.
    And now Kouga is going to get his ass kicked! WHoo-Hoo!!!! hehe. very excited
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on December 16, 2005
    By the way, please don't go all wimpy on us with the Kouga-Inu 'war'!!!!
    Kouga's not allowed to run away, and though I'm pretty sweet on the wolf-
    boy myself, can't have Inu sparing him too lightly, y'know?

    Lots o' love there! *muah!*

    -Jazz-
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  • From DLB on December 16, 2005
    Total awesomeness as always. Have a happy holiday, just in case
    you don't see me 'round the net for awhile! :)
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  • From ANON - AngelicMayhem on December 16, 2005
    *has little eyeball twitch going*..I don't leave reviews until I've read all the chapters that are up and when I finished this chapter I clicked to go to the next and realized there is NO other chapter :( WAAAAAAH! so NOT cool! please when you update e-mail me so I can glue myself to the monitor for hours on end yet again to further read this delightful sinfully HAWT story

    Sincerly,
    A fellow Author.
    Angel
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  • From ANON - chanda on December 16, 2005
    What a hot chapter. I can't wait until your next update.

    Merry Christmas to you too, and a happy 2006.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Chio on December 16, 2005
    A cliffy chapie :( but a great one. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - a lost soul on December 13, 2005
    Awesome chapter, as always I loved it. I can't wait to read your next chapter, oh as always, keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Ashi Taiyouno on December 11, 2005
    Hey there, I'm reviewing (though I've only read about 14 chaps of the story, thanks to a hideously slow computer)...oh, and I jumped ahead to the chapter AN (gomen!).

    First though, the story.
    I'm not sure what captured my attention about this story. I'm an Inu-yasha fanfic fan as a general rule (most pairings, at least, just couldn't wrap my head around some of the more extreme pairings *coughInuSessKikyoNarakuetalcough* (heh, heck of a hairball, sorry ;) ) and I've read a fair share, some good, some bad. But I sunk my teeth into your story without realizing what I was getting into, and now I find myself slugging it out with a slow computer just to be able to read a little bit further into this story in my spare time. I know it sounds egotistical on my part, but that's really saying something from me; I'm an extremely avid reader, but if something does not capture my attention intellectually (any good lemon or lime aside), then I cannot be interested whether it's just a quick one-shot pwp or an epic 50-chapter story, and I would most certainly not put aside other activities just to read it. You've written a capturing, captivating story, one that got my attention, one that goes into the depths of emotions that ANY couple in love could (and usually do) feel, and one that makes me truly believe that these are the true spirit of Takahashi-sensei's characters (if only this weren't a 16-up manga, I do believe that these characters would be getting into a lot more situations like this :D ). That's rare for a fanfic author to achieve. Congratulations, and please continue.

    Now, my piece of mind on flamers...
    *a chocobo raps her smartly on the head and kweh's warningly*
    Oh...all right, Gella, I promise I won't go too far. *grumble take all my fun away, you feather-brained...*
    *ahem* I have said it before, and I don't believe this will be the last time I will say it...BASICS! As Ton-chan says, BASICS! A review is meant to either show an author your praise of their work, or CONSTRUCTIVELY CRITICIZE to allow that work to improve! If you really feel the buring, aching, undeniable need to toast an author personally, or about anything unrelated to that work, DON'T...or at least have the ba...*ahem* guts to leave an e-mail addy so that it can be properly responded to, or simply air your grievences via e-mail. Anyone who cannot is considered a coward and should go back to Fanfics: writing and reviewing 101. BASICS!

    Well, I think that about covers it...within tolerance. Mata ne.
    :D
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  • From Pocahontas20 on December 11, 2005
    I am having the exact same question that Miroku and Sango are having. Shouldn't Kagome be worried of hurting Inuyasha? But then again, she doesn't know how great her potential is. I have a feeling this potential will play an important (or not) role in this fic. Too bad Inuyasha can't tell Kagome why he is so understanding of her supposed betrayal, even if only Kagome thinks so. Well, love, peace, and chicken grease until next time.
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  • From inuficcrzy on December 10, 2005
    thank heaven you updated! i love this chap!

    an i hope things work out for you in college. keep on sluggin', honey, and you'll be fine!
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  • From ANON - Vylest on December 10, 2005
    YM, hey again, I'm so uber-happy that you were able to post another chappie up recently (I never doubted ya!) I must say, I really do enjoy you not rushing to any steamy scenes even though its been awhile :) but that's just because you are, in my honest opinion as a fellow writer myself, a very intune fanfiction author who knows how well your writing skills are and how to apply 'em. Now, I'm not trying to seen goofy, but really--I like a lot of your chosen diction and have even reread many chapters because the flow of them really make me get into a story like no tomorrow LOL! I appreciate you responding to me and all of the other "reviewees" because feedback both ways is a definite plus in my book :)
    I will always be patiently (...well not always patiently, he he) waiting for your next update and I understand completely how sometimes stuff happens, simply said. This chapter was actually not bad because it spent nothing but its whole time diggin' into the minds of our dear troubled hanyou & miko couple trying to make sense of this crazy, crazy world. Heh, well, until next time--u r awesome, bud!
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on December 10, 2005
    one more review for hte list! You were awesome as usual, such easy lyrical conversation and words that leap out and make you take each one in stride. Really, for me, when a story flows like water in movement, it is talented. Thanks once more for sating my fanfiction fix! (I try to read only the good ones) You said there may be limey stuff in the next chatper! Between Yash and Kagome hopefully (shudders) Naraku is a piece of work that should go to seven hells forever! I dearly hope Kagome won't....be a threat to Inuyasha. That was a sense of foreboding!
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