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Reviews for LOVE POISON

By : YoukaiMusashi

From ANON - DizzySweetDreams on September 25, 2005
I've only recently started to read your fic, and I must admit it's pretty damn good. I think you're portraying Miroku more perverted than normal, but he makes me laugh. Thumbs up with the characters and plot too.

PS - I hope you don't get too discouraged by those annoying flamers out there (brings out fire extinguisher); I'll take 'em out.

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From ANON - scarletraven1001 on September 25, 2005
ooh... i bloody HATE flamers... they make my blood boil. it actually wouldn't be so bad if they flamed coz the fic was bad and called the author on it, but to actually insult a person they don't even know for just the hell of it?! bloody hell that's just sad...

anyway... this fic of yours is one of the BEST i have ever read, honestly. im glad i did read it, even though it took me a bloody long time to finish the ones you have posted so far! ^_^ the end of every chap just keeps me hanging on the edge of my seat, and i adore that you let out a jealous side of kikyo that no one else seems to capture. a spot of insecurity that she isn't among the living anymore. also, that even though kikyo is not exactly an angel, you didn't make her out as a damn bitchwhore like a lot of authors do... and the way you captured all the other characters is brilliant, and i don't think any of your characters are OOC.

i can't wait til the next chapter. don't rush though... im sure everybody could understand that life gets busy some times, ne? and i do hate it when people scream at me to hurry up... i am such a procrastinator. but i digress... again, you're a wonderful author, and this is a great story. much better than mine, that's for sure. but then again, all other stories are better than mine, haha! and i digress again...

don't let stupid flames get you down, alright? you take care, and thank you for sharing your creativity with us. ^_^

scarlet
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From ANON - Hannah on September 24, 2005
Hey, this is just a response to your authors note. I am so sorry you had to deal with that anonymous reviewer. The level of maturity in their writing only proves that you are the better person out of all of this. You dealt with it very well and I applaud you for that. I'd also like to say that I love this story and I appreciate you sharing it. Yeah..that pretty much covers everything. Although, I have been dying to know your thoughts on the subject of Mountain Dew......do you believe it's the nectar of life?
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From ANON - Arwey on September 23, 2005
Don't listen to those nasty reviewers...they're simply jealous that they can't write like you! Bring on the next chap---lol, such a hentai!
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From ANON - trusuprise on September 23, 2005
In response to an above reviewer who stated:
"PS: there is another story on the front page that says it was updated [2005-08-01] an it got an award too according to the summary and also asking to vote for it. If you look in the reviews there is another "review" from anon for pretty much the same thing they said to you I think anon is a "troll""

I think whoever this cowardly "anon" is, it is someone who's fic did not rank at the IYFG awards and is pissy about it. I have a pretty good idea who it is, too, but will keep my reservations to myself for the moment. Talk about childish.

In any case, YM, you know my stand on this whole issue, and you know I stand behind you mil y un percent. You rock! ^.~
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From Angelica on September 23, 2005
Oh, and the irony of YoukaiMusashi having to make ANOTHER update just to explain herself because you didn't leave your e-mail? Is not lost on me.
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From Angelica on September 23, 2005
To Anon:
Wow. That�s an awful lot of anger to be directed at an author even if she DID do what you claimed. Unfortunately with fan fiction archives the story is bumped to the top of the listings even if you so much as change a comma in a chapter. There really isn�t a way to prevent that from happening no matter how much you�d like it to be otherwise. Perhaps authors could put a note in the summary that states it was updated for editing purposes only but, as you might know if you write on the site yourself, we are allotted only so many characters for our summaries (this allotment includes the tags that we are required to post in the summary as well). From the look of it, YoukaiMusashi�s summary doesn�t have much room to spare� I�m a stickler for GOOD summaries, and I have to say that I wouldn�t want her to try and shorten it because some people might have to take all of 13 seconds to click the story, go to the last chapter, find out it�s not new, and return to the listings. That�s like what? 4 clicks of the mouse? And now you�re threatening to stalk this author which will only consume MORE of your time? Am I the only one seeing the flaws in your plan here?

Perhaps you should bring this point up with the site admins if you�re so worried about it. You know, do something CONSTRUCTIVE with your anger? Talk to them about perhaps making a tag or icon that authors can use when their updates are strictly to do with editing. I mean, you have all this time to flame people, why not put it to good use? I know I would certainly love to have an �editing only� icon or tag to use� It would really help us all out if you could spearhead the 'edit only!revolution', seeing as how you�re so passionate and everything. Kaythanks.
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From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 23, 2005
I'm still reading, but I had to comment.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm SO with Miroku...we burst out laughing
at the same time. Sango is fucking WICKED!
I can't stop fucking laughing & my whole
house is looking at me like I'm retarded, as
I think about Kagome FALLING ON HER NECK!
I'm out of breath & probably purple as I
picture Kagome's NECK HITTING A ROCK!

OMG...I have a fucking headache & my throat
is fucking raw. And STILL I laugh. Hell, I can
barely type this. You made my fucking week!
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From ANON - Karen Lacey on September 23, 2005
Hey Just thought I drop a few keys for to put this situation in perspective From reading the virulent and guttural ranting it seems vey clear this person is being threating and antagonistic full of anger and venting.
First call the web mistress and inform on the little psychopath, people who threaten others in person or in
print need to be dealt with otherwise they relax into the animity of facelessness and get more and more brazen. I doubt we'll catch the little sleeze but just in case from my keys to your eyes stop threating the author of Love Posion the Story is well written and thoughtful personally I think this Fic is Just fine the way it is so any body doesn't agree write your opinon's in a clear and valid review make your point then let it go.

I personlly find it creepy how certain cowardly people will abuse other people yet not be bad enough to leave a return address get real.

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From ANON - Anaidil on September 22, 2005
Hello!!! It�s been a while since I�ve last reviewed your fic. I read the �A/N� it really got me mad that Anon had flamed you. So this review is just to support you. You are right nobody likes to be insulted also criticism should never lead to hurting people�s feelings. I love your story just as always, It�s great, interesting and different. I think he is short tempered and he should learn how to do proper criticism. We are after all humans and what you did was a simple mistake that I bet he would have committed a thousand times. I understand perfectly and I wasn�t mad because it didn�t say �Editing story�. Also what he said, that you were doing it for attention, is not true. In my case I know I�ve looked your story in pages that believe me, are not at the beginning. I�ve always had an interest in your story and even if I had to look for this fic on page 90 I would. So you definitely don�t need to put your story at the first page �crying for attention� as he put it. That�s all� for now. So once again I�ll say to you, I love your story it�s great. Update as soon as you can no need to hurry�
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From ANON - nicky on September 22, 2005
You know... is really sad that people that not has enough maturity to respect the work of someone else and has a existential problem, they only way of release is to insult or offend.. so... please don�t pay attention... maybe they even haven�t a fic.... and they don�t know how hard is to write one and a really GOOD ONE... so... people like them is people that it doesn�t matter, doesn�t worth it... so, please continue with your fic... is really amazing!!!... I like it... a lot!!!!

Well you see... I�m always waiting for a update... I always read it... doesn�t matter the day, the hour.... (one time I read a chapter at 1:00 am!!!)... I�m sorry not put a review before... but... well... the real thing is that English isn�t my language so... I was really afraid to make any mistake (I think I already do) is easy for me to read it or to listen but I have a hard time when I write or speak it....but the point is to tell you that you are a fantastic author... and this is an international opinion...

Again... sorry for the grammar or the spelling... and again don�t pay attention to people like them... be happy that you are a better person and that you do things that you enjoy and also other readers!
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From ANON - Alix on September 22, 2005
oh sweetie just ignore that person. They obviously don't think enough of themselves to even leave their name or email where you can contact them. I really like you story and think you are doing a wonderful job. That person doesn't look at the date of the fic in the summary? There is a fic on the front page that was updated [2005-09-20] from what I can tell aff.net doesn't change that date unless you "add" a new chapter if you just "edit" and "reload" (I guess) a chapter/s then the date that says "updated" doesn't change but aff.net moves the fic to the top because it is supposed to have "new material" ... I am kind of guessing because I don't post here at aff.net I post at another site. I just read the great stories posted here. I am also going to be honest and say that yes maybe it should have been noted that you were editing the story but there are many, many that don't. I have actually seen stories that are moved up because the author "was" trying to keep it on the front page. Their reasoning is because "nobody looks past the front page" .... I am sorry that authors think that and yes there are probably readers that don't look past the front page heck maybe the authors that think that don't look past the front page. Well I am here to say that many of us readers DO look past the front page as a matter of fact when I find a new site with stories I like I will usually look at ALL the pages unless a site like ff.net has 1000+ pages.

Ok I will get off my soap box now. Please don't let that person bother you too much they can leave notes that insult you, etc but they don't know you and obviously they are a scare like chicken that doesn't like "personal" confrontations since they did't leave a way for you to contact them.

Keep writing I may not review much but I am still reading and believe this is a good story.

PS: there is another story on the front page that says it was updated [2005-08-01] an it got an award too according to the summary and also asking to vote for it. If you look in the reviews there is another "review" from anon for pretty much the same thing they said to you I think anon is a "troll"

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From ANON - jodibetz on September 22, 2005
Wow! Thats some angst there! I really don't see why you had to explain yourself. No author can force us readers to read or review. I enjoy reading fics but I'm not a regular reviewer. I review when I want to. I'm glad there are fic writers like yourself. You are actually way too nice in replying to that flame! Don't bother yourself with it, people like that gets their kicks out of pissing you. I'm sure there are others like me who enjoy your story and doesn't think stupid things like the stupid idiot who flamed you. Just ignore them.
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From ANON - gossa on September 22, 2005
Wow,i have read the first chapter and i have really really liked it,it express Inu Yasha�s feelings for Kagome perfectly(in my opinion).Now i�m gonna read all the others ^_^
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From ANON - penpaninu on September 22, 2005
I agree with your author's note. You can point out disappoint without being an asshole about it. Really, you can HAVE tact while stating what you liked or didn't like. It's called being a grown up, we dont' have to call each other names to state what is on our minds. Let's all try to execise this, maybe. Kudos to you, YM, I enjoyed your story immensely thus far. And it's also plain rude to sling mud while remaining anon-ymous. That's being a coward. If you want to call someone names, I think you should leave contact information so the author has a CHANCE to talk to you about it.
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