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Reviews for Just Grind

By : AJs
  • From ANON - animegirl007 on March 07, 2005
    YEAH!!!!!!!DR---AM-----A!!!!!!!! I knew you would make it good, but darn that was too good. I nearly had a heartache when Sesshomaru did that to Rin....I love him dearly but that was too cruel.. And okay, ~sniff...sniff~ since you won't break Kagura legs or arms...~sniff~I can live with her going insane. But, couldn't she going insane and break a leg???( I hate her so!!!)......I can't wait to see why Rin fainted, and how school is going to be when she goes back and see Sesshoamru in class( its nail bitting time).....update soon please!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kit on March 06, 2005
    GRRR SESS IS BAD!!! I can't believe he did that too poor Rin! He was the one who was basically blind. Poor rin! It sucks that she fainted. I hope she gets revenge on Sess, he'll hopefully come crawling back.... can't wait for the next chapter.... please make it soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on March 06, 2005
    Yeah, why did Rin faint it she pregnant or something.........Please make him suffer badly and make him come back to her on his hands and knees kissing her feet & begging for her forgiveness. I had to add that to what I had already wrote.....I would have done more than slap his ASS and told him off.....I would have whipped his ass like I was a demon or something crazy.....Please update soon can't wait.......
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 06, 2005
    I cried throughout this whole entire chapter. It was so sad. I want more, please, please, please update
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  • From ANON - Cassie on March 06, 2005
    Awwww!!!!!!!! How could he do her like that she loved him. Gave her virginity to him. She still do love him. Please make it right Please!!!!!!! I cried at the ending please another chapter......Please please please.........Please I want to see Sesshomaru and Sato umm Rin back together please!!!!!!!!!!!! Make your fans happy again....can't wait for the chapter 7......Please don't keep us waiting long.

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  • From ANON - techempath1 (not signed in) on March 06, 2005
    Oh Wow... She passed out. I want to hurt Sesshomaru...he's such an ass.

    Come back with more soon
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  • From ANON - cutie on March 06, 2005
    omg u have to continue it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - vtchachi on March 06, 2005
    Very seductive! This story caught me and I could not stop reading! You have captivated your audience which is a writer’s primary goal. Great job. I am excited to see how this turns out.
    You totally threw me off, I thought Fluffy was going to accept her, but I am not complaining. I like being surprised and I am awaiting your next installment with much anticipation. What
    will happen with Rin? How will Kagura get her revenge? See, you got me on the edge of me seat...don't let me fall!! :)

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  • From ANON - ... on March 05, 2005
    ur story is sooo good!! Pls, pls, PLS update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkAngel on March 05, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo.... why do you always leave cruel cliffy's. Awesome chappy, by the way, but did you have to stop it here.... why, why, why, why? Okay I'm done with my rant now I want you to update, I want to know more
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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on March 05, 2005
    Great chapter!!! Intense!!! We want more!!!!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on March 05, 2005
    Why did Rin fainted? Did Sess see 'Sato' Rin's performance? Will Sess be able to get Rin out of his heart? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Moon Dog on March 05, 2005
    I know I already reviewed, but I went back and read what Sess said to her, and I...*starts shaking, then yells even louder than before* SESS EVEN I FUCKING HATE YOU! I LIKED YOU THEN THIS, YOU SUCK! YOU DON'T FUCKING DESERVE RIN! YOU SHOULD ROT IN THE 7 HELLS! *clenchs fists* I WANT TO STRANGAL YOUR PERFECT NECK YOU BASTARD! *lunges at the screen* DIE!
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  • From ANON - animelo on March 05, 2005
    aWW He humilated her. =(

    He better suffer as well before this is all through.
    Love your writing please continue
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  • From ANON - Moon Dog on March 05, 2005
    No....THAT GODDAMN MOTHER FUCKING ASSHOLE! SESS YOU GET YOUR PLAYBOYIN ASS BACK THERE AND APOLOGIZE TO RIN! *yells at the screen* Harley pokes her head in, Moon stop yelling at the screen, it isn't real. That what they want you to believe! Moon replies. Yeah anyway, I almost wet myself when I realized you had updated. Ahhh, I've been waiting so long, and then this. Well at least both of them know that each other knows. *Shakes head* Sess, *starts talking to the screen again* You better get on your knees and beg forgivness for all the shit you said to Rin, and further more if anyone around here is a slut its you! You..*starts cursing again* I need a drink *goes off to find a diet Dr, Pepper*
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