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By : AJs
  • From ANON - Shrew on May 31, 2005
    i liked it...though i got a little confused since you hadn't been focusing on Kagome at all until now -- she was more like backround, if you know what i mean. anyway, i can't beleive you left all your minni parts at cliffhangers!! geh!! up date soon please!!
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  • From ANON - Lenne on May 31, 2005
    Thanks for e-mailing the last chappie to me. That chapter was terrific but yes you ARE digging yourself intop a bigger grave. You keep adding to the delemas. I love it though. As long as you finish the story. I was SOOO confused at the beginning of the chapter becasue I had forgotten it was Rin who was with Sesshomaru not Kagome. Anywho, that chapter was great and thanks again for e- mailing it to me.
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  • From ANON - binab86 on May 31, 2005
    omg! how the hell can kouga do this. i was kinda confused on the kagome part,cause i forgot that she was even in the story and i still cant remember. And rin a sess i wonder what is going to happen between them. i cant wait for sess and rin and kouga ad ayame. so please update soon i am so interested to see what happens next. dont leave me hanging
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on May 30, 2005
    So much confusion, so many secrets, jee sounds like real life! But really, what's happening with Kagome? That was completely unexpected and at first I didn't know who it was... well, at least something will happen between Sess and Rin, have her kick him where it hurts! That would be somewhat amusing. And then Koga, sheesh, why can't he keep it in his pants or Kagura for that matter? Poor Ayame, hopefully Koga gets what he deserves, and shes pregnant for crying out loud! Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on May 30, 2005
    Naughty, Naughty Kouga! Slap on wrist! I hope Ayame makes him sweat it out (and tears Kagura's head off in the process!) Can't wait for chapter 10. Naughty, Naughty Kouga!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on May 30, 2005
    You know you're right it was missing something, but I can't put my finger on it either well, maybe it will come to me later too, maybe it wasn't enough Sesshomaru and Rin and too much of everyone else.......and wow kouga and kagura I would have never known them 2 to be an item, but hey anything is possible.... What will Sesshomaru do or say when he catches her.... and will she forgive him for hurting her the way he did... and he should get down on his hands and knees and beg for her forgiveness and when he gets it they should make up fro lost time in the bedroom if u know what I mean......... Can't wait for chapter 10....... Love it !!!!!!!!!!! ^________^
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  • From ANON - Inus_Kagome_Forever on May 30, 2005
    First of all, WHAT THE FUCK!!!

    Second of all, WHAT THE FUCK!!!

    Third of all, ok what was this about??? I mean, I thought this chapter was gonna
    be about Sess and Rin, like most the rest of the story, but no,
    somehow Kagome gets dragged in this along with Kikyo which concludes
    one and two being WHAT THE FUCK, how does that go with the rest of the
    story????

    Forth of all, What past does KAGURA have with KOGA????? How could you make him
    Kiss her BACK??? NO NO NO NO NO!!!! ahhhhh, no, why blossum WHY???

    Fith of all, Ok OK, so all that confusing stuff happened, and in the middle of it
    (almost litteral) Rin and Sess happen to meet, but nothing sweet, just a
    "Sesshomaru?" "Rin." and a chase that we don't get to hear about till the
    next chap I'm guessing??? NO NO NO, WHY WHY WHY!!! No fair! I want
    more, but you have to leave us hanging ont that damn cliff! You could at
    Least give us a rope! I mean come on now-------wait, I wan't talkin about
    that kind of cliff was I? Anyways

    UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON, LIKE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOONER THAN TWO WEEKS!!!
    PLZZZZZZ, I MEAN IF IT'S ALREADY WRITTEN AND ALL (that is what you said right?)

    Inus_Kagome_Forever

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  • From ANON - ChibiSamuraiX on May 30, 2005
    Not bad. I don't know if the first part was really needed though. Since when have InuYasha and Kagome have been important in this story? I understand Kouga and Ayame. I'm quiet interested in what's about to happen between Rin and Sesshy-sama. What would I do if Sesshy-sama was chasing me.....*thinks naughty*....hehehehehehehe a lot of fun things. He probably will have a hard time getting me. Well update soon can't wait to read what's going to happpen next!!!! EEEEEKKKKK! Ya got me squealing like a school girl again!! Please hurry and update!!!!!^w^
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  • From ANON - Jess on May 30, 2005
    After reading all nine chapters over, I could tell that you have gotten a lot better then when you first started the Fic., and I must admit, it has gotten a lot greater (the fic, and your writting)! Keep up the good work. =)
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  • From ANON - sphinx on May 30, 2005
    okie this story is getting "bit complicated... what's up with the secrets here and there... the most confusin is y is kagura and kouga together... and also i'm seriously not expectin kagome and kikyo comin into this story... sigh.. well aniwae i'll still be readin it then so pls update soon... hope there's something more interestin bet rin/sess relationship
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  • From ANON - cassandrs on May 30, 2005
    i loved it, but i hope everything works out, stupid kouga, so weak.
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  • From Alena on May 30, 2005
    Yay!!!!! new chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the great fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE A.S.A.P.!!!!!!!!!! [insert trademark evil laughter here-> MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!]
    >_
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  • From ANON - ann on May 29, 2005
    omg this chappie was so intense I loved it. I'm finding out more about the characters and their lil secrets. I wonder if Kagome's and Ayame's secrets r the same? And I feel so sry for rin but I think sess is gonna make her a hole lot better ^_~ I cant wait to read the next chappie and find out wat happens. And omg poor ayame how could tat SoB do tat to her and especially with tat b**** man I mean kagura seems so much worse than kikyou rite now -_- *small squeel*
    I just love ur story and I hav the feeling tat the next chappie will b just as good as ch. 9 ^_^
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  • From ANON - techempath1 (not signed in) on May 29, 2005
    I think i'm rather lost in this, lol. Too many girls! I can't wait for more!! I need to get all these girls and who likes/loves who straightened out :)
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  • From on May 29, 2005
    WoW! What a chapie! So many things happened...but thats the good thing ^_^ I cant wait to see what happens between Rin and Sesshomaru! How in the world did Sesshomaru know to go to the graveyard? Was it just that Soulmate thing? Or did Sesshomaru follow her sent? ponder ponder ponder....And Kouga. Grrrrrrrrrrr dont evan get me starrted oh him! That 2 timeing little @$$. And and Kaugra! My goodness and right infront of Ayame!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh Ayame! what's going to happen???? PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon! This chapie was wonderfull! You outdid yourself! (makes me wonder what the other ones will be like) Well, I cant wait till you update, untill then.......


    ~Ever Rin~
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