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By : AJs
  • From ANON - CHIBIchibi on May 29, 2005
    I agree with you on the whole Kikyo thing, I mean with the whole Inuyasha ordeal, I do notice that they are in a way one in the same, because they can't rid their feelingfs for one another, despite Kagome's presence, in fact I think only having Kagome there, puts a whole big twist with Inuyasha and Kikyo's relationship, but that's my opinion anyway. I loved this chapter, It was amazing, I liked the way you included new characters and all, it was good, I'm dying to know what's going to happen with Ayame, Kouga, and Kagura *growls* Rin, Sesshomaru. Inuyasha, Kagome, and Kikyo. So much suspense, why can't you load your chapters any faster. Please, for me?
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  • From ANON - vtchachi on May 29, 2005
    Great chapter! You are really building up the suspense, I can hardly stand it. What is going to happen?
    I like how you brought Kagome in here. Everyone thought they were the perfect couple, so happy, so in love
    and then BOOM, the truth is revealed, that nothing is perfect. I am curious to see what Kagome's and Ayame's
    secrets are. And that Kouga, what a dirty wolf! How could he do that? I bet Kagura is doing it all to get to Rin.
    Well, thank you for sharing your story with me, you are a great writer. Sorry you did not feel it was a good chapter.
    I did enjoy it and from the looks of the other reviews so did your other readers. I know how it feels to not be pleased
    with the end result after pouring your heart and time into it. And of course you are welcome, I hardly helped, but thank
    you for flattering me!!!

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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on May 29, 2005
    Thanks for the update. We'll be waiting for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Cassie on May 29, 2005
    God!!!! please update agian soon this is my favorit story!!
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  • From ANON - Saphira on May 29, 2005
    that was great... you must write more SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN damnit soon.....And i offically hate Koga.........ayway keep up the great work!!! and HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPPY!!!
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  • From ANON - sadsoul on May 29, 2005
    I love your story. You are a very talented writer. That being said I'm not flaming you,...so don't take this wrong... (puts on her blond wig)...but I'm confused...I can tell that I'm going to have to reread this story from the beginning. Did I miss that part of Inu and Kags in this story or are you just bringing that in? And wasn't ayame in school while kouga was with kagura? (I love kouga but I think you got me to turn on him... how could he?!?!) You are torturing me with sess/rin (which might be what you are going for...with full out angst) that last statement made me think he was going to rape her. But other then that...I still LOVE your story and can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - kai on May 29, 2005
    holy crap, everyone is like cheating or fighting with each other or theres so much misunderstanding! that's what makes a fic so awesome, all the angst!! UPDATE SOON!!

    PK
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  • From ANON - Larka on May 29, 2005
    *dies of happiness for the 7th time today* OMG!!! I loved this chapter! Such great details!! I don't see WHY you would EVER hate it! I wish I could write such good details in my stories! But alas I'm still in the intermidiate zone. Anyways, this was awesome! I wonder what Kagome's hiding and how Kouga's going to react knowing Ayame saw him... And I also wonder what he'll do about Kagura and Ayame. And what about Sesshoumaru and Rin?!! AH!!! YOU LEFT US HANGING IN TOO MANY AREAS!!! I MUST KNOW!!! YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on May 29, 2005
    LOVE IT!!!!!!!! you have so many things going on with all the characters now.....first, my main love Rin and Sesshomaru...so now he wants to claim her, I hoping you have her reject him this time, before they are together forever.....his human side need to know how it feels to be hurt badly....second, Ayame...I'm still dieing to know her secers ....what is it???? you're killing me here...and Kouga, how could he??? He got the best thing in his life and he throwing it away on a slut!!!!! AAAAHHHHH!!!!!...now the Kagome and Kikyo part was good but, it felt kind of throw in because you set up your story as a Rin and Ayame tale then you put in Kagome. The reader knew she was there but she wasn't apart of the main focus which were Rin and Ayame. Now don't get mad at me!!!!! I'm just putting in my opionion......but, as always I can't wait until the next chapter and just keep it up........
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  • From LarkaWolf on May 29, 2005
    This story is SOOOOOOO good! You have GOT to update soon! I love it too much to keep waiting!! @.@
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  • From ANON - sessami on May 26, 2005
    this was a really really great story i loved the dance songs too!! it was awsome!!! plz plz update ASAP!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on May 25, 2005
    Hi, I'm one of your fans and I was wondering when u were going to update your fic its really really good and I really want to know if Sesshomaru and Rin will get back together....... and to see if Sesshomaru will apologize for the way he treated her. Please update I'm waiting patiently like all the other fans.....^_______________^
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  • From ANON - LadyDogDemon on May 24, 2005
    :::::::sing song voice:::::::: i love this story update soon
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  • From ANON - Caramel on May 22, 2005
    Hurry up and do ch.9!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Larissa on May 16, 2005
    I hope you finish this story!!

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