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Reviews for Just Grind

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  • From ANON - Lenne on May 14, 2005
    AHHHHHHH UPDATE!!!!!!!^-^
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  • From ANON - Sailortee on May 14, 2005
    Rating 50 out of 10*****************************

    I normally don't read rin and Sesshy fics But I really was curious about this one.
    A friend Recommended this story to me and I am so happy she did anyways......
    Oh my*clears throat* This is a VERY good story I was hooked from the very 1st sentence.
    I have to say congrats on how very descriptive you are. It was one of the things that had me so in
    awed by this story. And the the one that gets me the most your love scenes are very sensual not
    distasteful or down right nasty. They really had me feelings the moments. This is the kind of writing I
    Enjoy reading. Please keep up the good work and I hope to see A update soon:-) Oh yeah
    Thank you for sharing your work too:-)
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  • From ANON - PixiQueen on May 12, 2005
    I love you. I love you writing your imagination, your boldness. you dont shy away from the details and that makes your work so much more compelling. I dint know why im just now telling yiu this i have been reading Just Grind from the start. Keep on it girl!!!!!!!!!
    PixiQueen
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  • From ANON - Larka on May 05, 2005
    Wow. This story is REALLY good! I like... no LOVE it! It's got a great way of making a reader jump over the edge when you have these dark moments so to say. I love it all and I hope you update A.S.A.P!!! Chow for now!
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  • From ANON - Tokoharu on May 01, 2005
    Love the interaction between these characters ....its so compelling! This chapter was amazing, especially since we now
    begin to see to what lengths Kagura is planning to go, in order to carry out her revenge on Rin. Not caring
    about anyone but herself, I wonder if she plans on revealing to Kouga the extent of Rin's relationship with
    Sesshomaru and revealing to Rin the fact that Kouga was one of her "cast-offs". I think the roller coaster ride
    is about to take the first loop! Time to throw the "Bitch Switch" on!!

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  • From ANON - Larissa on May 01, 2005
    Wow, please continue!! I'm in suspense here lol...I'll keep checking back! Please don't leave me hanging :P

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  • From ANON - Inus_kagome_FOrever on May 01, 2005
    sorry it took me sooo long to read! So much stuff to do. It was a good chapter, although I don't exactly get some parts, like the end.... but reallly can't wait till you update again! Please do so soon!

    Laters
    Inus_kagome_forever
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  • From ANON - sphinx on May 01, 2005
    the attention seems to shift frm rin and sess to the others.. will sess come to the cemetary to look fer rin? aniwae cant wait fer the next chap! update soon
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  • From Precious on April 30, 2005
    Okay usually I have better reviews than this but I'm in a bit of a hurry. Nice story. I give you credit for the view you put on in the first chapters. The way you told us about the other characters (Kagome, InuYasha, Miroku, and Sango) But you never ACTUALLY use them. Like the reverse to a InuYasha/Kagome story where the writer just says Sesshoumaru was off doing whatever and then pops up with a girlfriend. I like the way you made Rin's job seem okay. Not like the usual where the girl goes home in tears and wants someone to rescue her for her job. But I'm not so sure why Sesshomaru is acting the way he is. I probably read it to fast or something. I'll re-read it again later. But if you want someone then why are you punishing them like THAT? (Not you..Sesshomaru) I mean that's why women invented the silent treatment, the cold shoulder, and all that crap. You don't leave someone you want up for somebody else to grab. You take them let them know you are mad and then later you make up. Simple. But I can't wait to see why you made Kouga on of Kagura's one night stands. And Ayame is pregnant right? Right?! But I'll guess I have to sit back and wait for Sesshomaru and Rin to stop torturing themselves and each other.
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  • From ANON - Jess on April 30, 2005
    Yay! I liked this chapter! =D
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  • From ANON - techempath1 on April 30, 2005
    Oooh wow, he's not cheating on Ayame is he? Can I kill him now?? I think Ayame sensed something.... crapola, you have to come back soon!
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  • From ANON - ChibiSamuraiX on April 30, 2005
    Wow. Sesshoumaru is losing it. And why does Ayame feel so guilty? Kouga is a kewl brother. And Rin needs to pull herself together....why dis Kagura call Kouga her lover?!Me soo cunfuzzled!!T_T Great chapter. Update soon please.^^
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  • From kogaluver on April 30, 2005
    I just started reading this story and after the first chapter I had to stop and print up all eight chapters. You see I needed to go downstairs, get comfy and have a smoke while reading such a great story. (I don't smoke upstairs in our office.) I could not put this fic down. What a fun and creative story. I usually don't read AU fics or Rin/Sess fics, but this caught my attention. You've done a wonderful job here and I look forward to future chapters. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ivy on April 30, 2005
    it was a very good chapter and specially the ending .
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  • From ANON - Paige C. on April 30, 2005
    Cool chapters! No, more like sad;_;Everything is just gettin' so screwed up! I mean, there's Rin & Sesshy, and Kouga & Ayame are almost even worst! Kouga can't do a whore like Kagura!!! He just can't!!!*sigh*I can already see the oncoming tragedy.u_u

    Btw, I understand the whole Kikyo thing now^^I feel the smae way about Kagome.
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