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By : AJs

From ANON - FoxFireDemoness on April 29, 2005
Is Ayame pregnant??? Grrr I must know and what about Kouga and Kagura? That bitch has been with everyone in this fic. She's such a damn slut. Anyway, I loved this chapter, but I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next, please update!
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From ANON - jem on April 29, 2005
Oh. my. GOD!!! 0__o I just figured that Kagura had something to do with another man in this story... just didn't know who...
WOW!!! I loved this chapter!! You can write some really good stories and I think that you should update soon! (LoL) now, you don't have to hurry, because the longer you take to write, the better the chapter is. So take all the time in the world!!!
Ja Ne!
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From ANON - TricksterGoddess on April 29, 2005
YAY another chapter, Woo Hoo. Lover? Now where did that come from? Did Ayame find out about Kagura and Kouga, or my first thought was that she is pregnant. Will Sesshomaru find Rin in the cemetary? Ooh , so many unanswered questions.. Please update soon, and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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From on April 29, 2005
YAY! You updated very quick double yay!! This was a very interesting chapter....But I loved it anyway! Oh my oh my it sounds like Ayame is pregnant.....could that be it? Muahahaha and it looks like Sess demon side is starting to take over..... Now what to make of this Kagura? And what is her history with Kouga? What was that she called him ---Lover---?! Is Kouga cheating on Ayame?! And what about my Fav character Rin? Will her father speak to her? Spirttualy? And will she ever Win Sesshomaru back? So many questions....perhaps the next chapie will give all of us (Reviewers) a hint of what is to happen......(Ya know it would be pretty funny if Rin started dateing another person, oh I can just see Sess rageing with jealousy...and if that person happened to be Naraku......Witch I have to say I have come across only a few Rin/naraku parrings....But I think it would Make Sess jealous to see Rin with a handsome and protective guy like naraku, but thats just me...tehe.... Well to make a long summary short, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!! You did a AWSOME job!!! Keep up the wonderful work! I am looking realy looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
~Ever Rin~
PS: Sorry for the spelling,its not my strong point.....
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From ANON - CHIBIchibi on April 29, 2005
Damn!!!!

Kagura has been everywhere, with Kouga, with Sesshoumaru.

With everyone, *shudders* gross.

This chapter was so good, please update soon,
I am dying to know what's going to happen next.
And what about Ayame, please!!! What is going on with her?
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From ANON - KogasAngel on April 29, 2005
O.O Please tell me that Kouga has not been screwing with Kagura. She is like the skank from hell. Why would he go to her when he obviously loves Ayame? Please update quickly and I can't wait to see what you do next. Kagura, ewwwww.
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From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2005
nooooooo!!!!! why kouga, why?
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From ANON - animegirl007 on April 29, 2005
Interesting!!!! Kouga and Kagura??????? And thank goodness for Sesshomaru's youaki side......At least it knows its mate when he see it.........it's getting just too good.....update soon....
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From ANON - Moon Dog on April 28, 2005
Okay answer first, reveiw 2nd. I first starte the whole internet-user-name-thing with neopets, where I created a bunch of different accounts. I was into the moon and sun back then, so I created the account, Sun Dog something. However that got shut down, so I switched over to Moondog, and added the 186 on. Next came my yahoo account, which I used the same name. After that, I joined lj, and Moon Dog, stuck. I used it for everything and the moon and dogs were what I loved long ago. Also after spending way too much time thinking, I realized that Moon Dog, could symbolize Sesshomaru or Inuyasha. Sess because of the dog factor, and cresent moon on his forehead. Inu, for the same thing, only at the new moon he becomes human. There fore, Moon Dog! Yeah I think too much. As for the 186, I just looked at my library card number, so that's where they came from.
Now for the review,
I love Sess's youkai! *Hugs youkai* Its your soul almost Sess, listen to it! Also I'm willing to back up on some of the punishment that Sess should have recieved. But only because he kicked Kagura's ass! Good for him! *dances* Also that bitch, Kag, better not fuck around with Rin or Kouga or Ayame. Yeah is Ayame pregnent? *pauses slightly only to twitch* I've been wondering it the whole the chapter, they'd have such cute kids! ^.^
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From ANON - Shrew on April 28, 2005
nice turn of events dude -- i never saw this comeing ^.^ i can't wait until you update!!
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From on April 28, 2005
I doooo envy your ability to write extended sexual scenes! Can we say, mini marathons, here! Whew! Damn, that Kagura! She really spreads herself around, doesn't she! Someone ought to slap her silly! LOL. The only thing that really grates my cheese: the page-long author notes at the beginning of each chapter. It's ALOT to sift through before getting to the story ... like having to snart your way through a pile of mashed potatoes before getting to the STEAK, ya know?
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From ANON - brownrecluse on April 28, 2005
Hi and thank you! While I may definitely rewrite 'Yousha' sometime soon (always tweaking away at things), for now, it's finished ... Thanks!
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From ANON - techempath1 (not signed in) on April 28, 2005
wow...that was really quick!!

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From ANON - vtchachi on April 28, 2005
Oh...great cliffy. You got me on the edge of my seat again! Great chapter. You are really building up the
suspense with Ayame, I am dying to find out what she is keeping from him; however, sounds like he has some
confessing to do himself!
Great scene with Kagura and Fluffy! I had to laugh at that. She got what she deserved...but what is she planning,
sneaky. I feel for Rin, loved how you reflected her off Kouga�s eyes, nice touch! Beautifully descriptive, painted a
great picture for the reader, and for Rin!

BTW, great poem Ren! I hope everything gets better for you!

Great Chapter, I was surprised and totally excited when I got your email saying you updated! I was having a bad day
and you brightened it for me! Thanks!

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From ANON - Ren on April 28, 2005
Ren here! Wai! Wai! I love the chapter, tee hee hee, I want to know what Rin is going to do with Sesshoumaru after what he did. Oh yes, I don't have a e-mail, gomen nasi, I wish I could talk to you, it's nice to have someone to talk to, but...my mother is afraid I'll turn out to be my sister. There so much pressure on me right now I want to scream blood murder! Then again...my mother is more worried for me, so I guess it can't, it was then I became the 'perfect girl' for my mother, but she never noticed...she always...somehow...always...forget me...it hurts...a lot. I sometimes wish I wasn't the middle child, you can be forgotten, and it's also because I'm loved by my father, my sisters always teased me saying, "Daddy's little girl..." but what they don't know is, I'm not. I don't get any special treatment what so ever, I have more standards to take up instead.

They don't want to understand for me, they are so into their own suffering world, they forget the one that is left behind and leave her out to dry. I guess it's not their fault, everyone is selfish sometimes, or not, all the time. I just want to be the one to understand for them though, I want to be there for them when they need me, that's why I learned how to control most of my emotion, the only one I have a hard time keeping in check is anger though. Tee hee hee, quite embarassing to say, but I'm sure glad at least I'm still some how intact with my emotions, it still helps me feel human in a way. I also now where a lot of white and black colors, not because I'm depress, okay yea I am, but it's also to always remind me, I am to ALWAYS be neutral, that way, everyone can be happy. In this family, I have to be neutral, in order to keep the order of the family, when one is sad, I'll be there, when one is alone, I want to help, when they get into a arguement, I want to be there to help them see both sides of the story...I want to guide them through life, be the person for them to come to when they need help and advice.

I want to help them, unlike me, I never had any, I guess that is why I was suicidal at the age of 5-8, no one knew, I had a bad attitude in school, teachers didn't help, they only made things worst. I am sorry for burdening you with my problems, but the way you write your story, it almost reminds me of how my life was, I really feel connected wtih you. I thank you a lot for answering my stupid long review also, I'm grateful that you took the time to read the stupid things in my life. It's nice to know there are still compassionate people in the world, my family never gave that to me, and never asked me, so I decided never to let them see that side of me. The one that is left in the deep parts of my heart, like Rin, I'm drowning, in the sea of sorrow, slowly falling deeper into myself, I've become very quiet lately, and do nothing but draw, sing, write and more things dealing with art. I always loved art, it made me feel like I can express myself, but then I want to show everyone what a beautiful world this is. I overhear many people talk about how bad their life is, how everything is wrong, so they take drugs and so other stupid things like get pregnant or make a girl pregnant. I want to help them see the world in a different perspective. One that can move them, make them feel the warmth, happiness, joy, and wonders of the world, I draw many things, I combine anime with realistic life to give my drawings a fantasy look, a look that can be one day fulfilled if one tries hard enough.

Words to my poems are sad, but they also contain truth, I wish to share one with you, if you are stiill reading this, this poem is call, Darkness of One's Heart...

Let the everlasting darkness envelop me...
Let the cold darkness fill my heart for all to see...
Let the light cease to exist...
Let life itself become a mist...

I can not see, what is beside me...
I can not hear, who I hold dear...
I can not feel, with my body and heels...
I can not speak, for I am too weak..
I can not smell, everything that once dwelled...

From somewhere I do not know...
From there a light wants to show...
For a light that wish to show,
it sure can be slow...

From where it came from,
I do not know nor do I care...
I do not dare...
From where I stand,
I will not enter the ligth with a hand...

Everything about it is warm,
and it promises to protect me from harm.
It is so bright,
that it is frightening...
I can feel this light help my senses heightening...

"No!" I cried as teh light pulls me in...
"I do not wish to return..." I whispered my sin.
A soothing voice whispers lovingly into my ear....
'It's so familiar,' I thought as I start to tear...

I feel a warm embarce from behind me...
I grew frustrated and shout, "Why can't you let me be?!?!"
But then the person whispered, "Because I love you....
I then smiled and embraced that person back and said,
"I love you too..."

~Ren

Tee hee hee, this is one heck of a long review, the longest I did yet, but I feel comfortable talking to you about it, none of my other favorite authors know about my life like this, so I hope you enjoy this poem. Truth is I'm only 15 turning 16 in August. I see the world in a much older point of view, I missed my childhood because that also...I wish I could have a childhood now that I think about it, I miss a lot of things greatly...but there is no time to think about that anymore. Life keeps moving so why not move with it, go through it as it guides you and pulls to different places, to new people and more. I don't wish to be depress all the time, this is the way I wish to live my life as a adult. My moral is, 'what happened in your life is not what mattered, what you do with it is what counts...' I want to stick to it to the very end, till my last breath. I thank you for the great story, it helped me explore that girl at the bottom of the ocean, it reminded me what I have to do, and what I need to do. I thank you so much, I don't know how to say it properly, you've done a great thing for me by writing this story, please continue it for me. I am a huge fan of yours, so please continue your great work and great chapters of this great story.

I'll be rooting for you, so please don't disappoint me, oh yes, if anyone of the reviewers think I am writing such a long review for attention, I just wanted to say, I am not, I only wish to express myself to this great author, and I advise every one to do so to. It helps the author obtain other great ideas since you are sharing your life to them. It helps them feel for your situation and gain your knowledge and wisdom that you have obtain in the situations you have been in, so if you all think I am annoying or stupid, I am sorry then. I just wish my author to know how grateful I am to have someone write a story that I can actually relate and feel deeply about...it's been 13 years since I last been able to talk, or in this case, type my soul out. I was always a quiet child, at birth I never talked, but ate instead, my mother thought I wasn't able to talk for a while too, it scared her to death. But this is not about me, I hope all the other reviewers have someone special in their life that they are able to talk to freely about anything that goes on in their life, because, right now for me, I'm grateful this author is currently that special person for me. I hope you all understand and if you do thank you very much, and if you don't, goment nasi....arigato again for the great update...
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