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Reviews for Instinct

By : DementedAngel
  • From ANON - lilly on July 10, 2005
    Wow! I'm *almost* speechless. I love this story, and the way you write is fantastic. It's so descriptive! I also love reading all the motivations behind the actions of both Kouga and Inuyasha. Thank you for writing such a realistic, definitely in character, captivating story. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! (And I love the chapter about Kanna... somehow I never considered her before as much of a character and you brought her abruptly into my contemplations.) Please keep up the wonderful writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2005
    This story truly rocks!!! Please continue!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nieni on July 09, 2005
    Awww... I'm gonna be sad when it ends and they leave eachother. ;___;

    I love the story though. ^^ Dominant instincts have always been my favorites in stories. They're hawt. ^___- Update soonz?
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on July 09, 2005
    This really is some of the best writing I've read in a long time. I absolutely love the whole basic dog insticts that Inu is displaying. It all sounds extremely plausible and true to what would actually happen in the wild with real rutting animals. Did you do some reasearch into animals mating in the wild and pack instincts regarding alpha and beta, especially within the dog and wolf kingdom? Anyway, Koga kicking Inu out of his own den was priceless. I just had to laugh my ass off. Also, Koga's musings are so funny and/or heartfelt. You've really done a brilliant job with this fic. I was so happy to see that you updated finally. But, talented writing like this takes time, especially when you have other things going on like, I don't know, A LIFE! lol. Good luck with the next chapter. I'll certainly be looking forward to it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dante on July 09, 2005
    haha, I like this new chapter; especially the ending. Keep up the good work.

    D_
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  • From ANON - ahanchan on July 09, 2005
    Great chapter! I think it was a really good ending point!! Please update again soon! I liked the Kanna chapter!
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  • From ANON - ChaoticSpecter on July 08, 2005
    I really love this fic. You write it so well, your descriptions are on point and do a very good job of conveying the emotional turmoil that Kouga and Inuyasha are feeling. I also really liked the chapter you wrote about Kanna. I've always thought that she was an interesting character, but this is the first time that I have seen anything with her written so well. I like your exploration of her character.; everything is very plausible and very interesting. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Update whenever you get the time.
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  • From ANON - Rawben on July 08, 2005
    oh. and yeah. great chapter. ;) i really liked it! lol! and i love that kouga's fightin it! lol! "*i dont want...but ohhhh...*" that's just hilarious. ;)
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  • From ANON - Rawben on July 08, 2005
    angst is all well and good, but there will be a happy ending right? cause really, that's all that matters to me. actually, dont answer that. b/c if it's a sad ending, then i'll stop reading. i hate it when they end sad... :(
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  • From ANON - ~Fluffy~ on July 08, 2005
    WoW! That was soo funny and good! I want more. I lvoed the ending...Kouga throwing him out of the den...That was cute! I like this paring and it's good to see Kouga being the uke instead of Inu. that's a refreshing change. ^_^ Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on July 04, 2005
    Ooohhhh. So. Good. i love this fic! it's ... just great! but i hope that kouga doesnt get the hell knocked out of him again! :( dont you think he's endured enough? poor thing. i like how in the last kog/inu lemon he yelped! ha! cracked me up! i hope he has a pleasant lemon soon!
    and i liked ch 5, but i didn't get it till i read the AN at the bottom... *blush*...
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  • From ANON - Dante on June 30, 2005
    Yay! Glad to see that this story is continuing, personally I'm kinda tired of Kouga being the dominant one. Go Inuyasha!!

    D_
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2005
    Run Kouga, run!! Not that it mattters, because he's going to tired eventually and Inu-chan will catch him. I just hope he doesn't hurt him too bad. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - yako on June 25, 2005
    ^_________________^Goooooood!
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  • From botticelliangel on June 24, 2005
    awsome story. i really did think that the chapter with miroku/sango and naraku/kikyo was great but it could have been posted up as a one shot, it kinda disrupted the flow of the story... Your dialog is great. i have never read a coupling between inuyasha and kouga that i ever thought plausable before, but this one has exceeded expectations. Wonderful.
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