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Reviews for Instinct

By : DementedAngel
  • From ANON - listersgirl on March 23, 2005
    Chapter 5 is very intriguing. Very poetic. It will be interesting to see how the whole story comes together. I don't know how often you update (a fic this great has to take serious time) but I'd appreciate you e-mailing me when you do.
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  • From ANON - listersgirl on March 23, 2005
    Chapter four - Kouga dealing with the aftermath. Still the leader of his pack putting their protection first. Loyalty I think has always been Kouga's strongest character trait and you demonstrate that. As for humour, I have to agree with you - life is a myriad of thoughts and emotions swirling together by not keeping the story totally in one emotional state makes it all the more believable and three-dimentional.
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  • From ANON - listersgirl on March 23, 2005
    Another fantastic chapter! I love the dynamic character mixture in Inuyasha. The demon/hnayou/human flows from animal to coherence, from lust to bloodlust and back again, so convincingly, as are Kouga's reactions driven by his own instincts.
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  • From ANON - listersgirl on March 23, 2005
    This second chapter is magnificent! A very convincing job of Kouga! A bit slow on the uptake, full of confidence and bravado even as he's taken down and accepting the situation without giving in. That's the Kouga we all know and love!
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  • From ANON - listersgirl on March 23, 2005
    This is an awesome first chapter! It's a powerful portrayal of Inuyasha trying to keep himself under control. It's evident how much he loves Kagome that her happiness is more important to him than his own gratification even when e's in such a primal state..
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  • From ANON - FoxOfNineTails on March 06, 2005
    It has a plot!!!!!Wow, great work keep it up!!!I am looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Lynx on February 05, 2005
    This story is wild and I love it!
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  • From ANON - YEHUDIS on January 24, 2005
    damn inuyasha is very uhh vicious and but damn you wrote so the thing with inuyasha annd koga fighting and inuyasha got his ribcage wow koga didnt even know for abit and damn inuyasha ruff
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  • From ANON - Cat Lynx on January 17, 2005
    I realy realy liked this story and would like to see what happens, does Inuyasha find him gone? does he reach his pack in time..alll the goody questions and the improtant one, what does Kagome think?

    PLEASE CONTINUE
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  • From ANON - GreenLady on January 14, 2005
    Wow. Just wow. I'll admit, at first I had reservations about reading this, because so *few* rut stories are written well, but this was. Your pace is amazing, and I appreciate that you don't forget the animosity between Inuyasha and Kouga. And well a lot of the rape scene made me cringe, it was handled with a sensitiveness that made me hope for a (and I'm going to sound cliche) brighter future for them. Kouga's reactions and Inuyasha's instincts are truly well done, and there's something fascinating about Inuyasha's lack of control. I'm really hoping you'll continue this? *I'll* definitly be checking for updates!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2005
    update. now. please?
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  • From Qem on January 13, 2005
    Hot hot hot. Addictive.Dying to find out what happens next with when Kouga meets up with his pack... An when... Inuyasha... meets up with ... Kouga... again....

    Ah dear Kagome, the things your loves do for you...

    Loved the wolf instinct touches you gave to add insight!
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  • From ANON - Kuiya on January 12, 2005
    Hello again! I decided to go ahead and read your story. Now that picture up on the IY Yaoi/Yuri site makes sense! Ha! Well, at least we know you're not just randomly drawing pictures of naked Inu looking like he just glomped Kouga in the middle of the night in the woods! Anyway, I love the story so far! You're a really great author as well as a great aritst. I really admire how you know exactly what you're talking about and explain in detail why there's a certain thought or action taken. Meh... I wish I could write AND draw like you do! Heh, anyway... I really hope you continue ASAP! I'll check up on it once in a while.

    Learn my name by heart...
    Write your prayers in blood...
    ~Kuiya Ukameya
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  • From ANON - Golden on January 10, 2005
    I really really really like this story. Keep it up you are doing WONDERFUL! ^___^ Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

    TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
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  • From ANON - Vapid B. on January 10, 2005
    Deep fic I think you do well in getting into their thoughts and expressing them. Inu Yasha has a lot to deal with when he gets over this 'rut'. Kouga has a lot to realize and I look forward to the chapter when he does. Good job and good luck.
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