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Reviews for Instinct

By : DementedAngel
  • From on January 10, 2005
    I must say, your story is just incredible to read! I see alot of stories about Kogome going into heat and driving Inuyasha crazy, but Inuyasha going into rut? That's not done so often; in fact, this is the first I've seen it. Kudos to you for thinking of a plot that hasn't already been done to death! It's not just the plot that has captured me interest, because its delievery has kept me glued to my moniter. Really, I'm dying to see how this all turns out. Poor Inuyasha.... hehehe, or should I be saying poor Kouga?

    The way Kouga and Inuyasha struggle with their demon and animal parts captures their phsyche in a way that is usually looked over for more smut (not that smut is bad!) and dialogue, and I must applaud your detailed use of the character's mindsets. There's just so many good things to say about this piece of fiction, so I really hope you update soon, so I could add more to the list!

    I know a website that this fic seems to be perfect for: it's called Shinjitsu no Shi: Inuyasha Yaoi and Yuri, and is located at http://www.starless-dreamer.net/shinjitsu_no_shi.html . Even if you end up throwing some Inuyasha/Kogome het into the mix, I think it's slashy enough to apply. They don't seem to have any sort of problem at all with rape stories at this archive.

    (BTW, thank you for making the character interactions REALISTIC and believeable).


    Your local fanfiction whore,



    ~Azaelian
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  • From loserbean on January 09, 2005
    wow.. this story is very good.. so realistic.. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!
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  • From ANON - nekoyasha213 on January 08, 2005
    wow ur story is so awsome i hopr you update soon and do u know and good mpreg pairings cause i luv inuyasha and kouga pairings also kouga and sessho and inuyasha and miroku and sessho and miroku ;) im a huge mpeg and yaoi fan xD ur rock keep this story going
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  • From ANON - Minako on January 07, 2005
    ::Fans herself:: o..m..g..that was oh fucking wow that fic is sooooooooooooooooooooo good. pleeeeeeeeeeeeease finishe it soon.!!
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  • From ANON - CallyKariShokka on January 06, 2005
    Wow. Didn't expect to find THIS from you, Lady D. I'm used to reading your Beast Wars humor stuff. XD Nonetheless.. Wow. Just, wow. *applauds!* Looking forward to more of this, I am. :3

    Never stop writing, Lady D. X3
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2005
    I love this story. I totally like the way you portrayed Inu-Yasha when he turns into a full demon. Very realistic.
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  • From ANON - KogasHentaiLuver on January 06, 2005
    I really can't get enough of this story. So well written and emotional. I am anxious for the rutting between Inu and Koga to become a little more sensual. I like the slow build up though. After all, Inu is raping Koga, nothing sensual about that, but then you showed the next time Inu took Koga that he was trying to consider Koga's reactions/feelings (am I making any sense?) and was upset that Koga couldn't relax. So I'm assuming that eventually this rutting will turn into something much more, even though they both love Kagome. Shit, I'm rambling again. I tend to do that when I follow a story that I love so much. Keep up the wonderful work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2005
    Wow!! Great story!! Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - storo on January 05, 2005
    man...I LOVE THIS FIC ITS THA BEST EVER AND me BELIVE I READ LOTS FANFICTION..YUP YUP GOOD WORK!!!DON'T EVER STOP THIS FIC OR I WILL BE FOREVER SAD AND WHANT TO DIE....T_T...love it!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Alpha_Inu on January 03, 2005
    nice keep up the good work

    Alpha_Inu
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  • From ANON - miyu on January 02, 2005
    Amazing fanfic. very true and believeable. keep up the good work. plz plz plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2004
    OMG!!!! This is the best story I have read in the longest time!! Your characters are so realistic. Please update quickly.
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  • From ANON - carrie on December 31, 2004
    Fanfuckingtastic! I love it when authors incorporate the baser instincts that being a demon could have. It helps mark them as something Not Human. Greath job on the descriptions, everything was conveyed wonderfully without being blunt or overdramatic or cliche. That's a unique gift in this age of authors that barely know what a spellcheck or prereader are. Please continue to write, I would hate to see this work of art left unfinished like so many others. You don't by any means have to listen to me but part of constructive critizism is suggestions and sometimes requests. I would like to see more interaction with Shippou. He's by no means my favorite charachter but being one of the only other demons around it is a unique perspective. Also I feel that Sesshomaru showing up would be far too heavy handed. Please take these suggestions with a grain of salt, I'm trying not to come off like so many other rerviewers I see out there that insist they want this or that in a story and then lambast the author when they don't see it.

    Keep up the good work,
    a huge fan made in a few short min.
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  • From ANON - My Reflection on December 30, 2004
    I agree with every one. Keep writing!!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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  • From ANON - Shinna on December 30, 2004
    I enjoyed reading this story. update soon
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