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Reviews for Instinct

By : DementedAngel
  • From ANON - Jade Dragon on January 07, 2006
    I'm really loving this story, the reactions of everyone are very very realistic. since your taking suggestions and the like have kagome come back to the feudal era worried about inuyasha, right when inuyasha gets his senses back after hes taken kouga again? pretty much like...hrm...kagome walking into the clearing, seeing a red-eyed inu taking the wolf and pretty much 'what the hell is going on?!' kouga, sango, hell.....miroku..with alot of teasing, would probably be able to help her realize what happened, and how inu and kouga both feel about her. she thinks of kouga as a friend but for him to do something like that for her, it would open it up more for an interesting threesome. LMAO Mama would be surprised with that if kagome told her. anyway, i've got alot of perverted ideas and stuff i can share to help with this story if you like since you want the imput, send me a message if you want to.

    please(onigai right?) update!

    ~Jade Dragon
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  • From ANON - Rachel on January 06, 2006
    Some of the things I really love about this fic so far:

    1. Inuyasha is in a NOT in heat, one of the more stupid plot devices floating around.

    2. Inuyasha and Kouga aren’t suddenly deliriously happy and in love just because they've slept together

    3. even though you don't much like Kagome you didn't turn her into an evil harpy just for the sake of it or because of personal bias.

    4. You do an excellent job of creating dimensions to the characters that are in the anime/manga pretty two dimensional.

    5. There is a plot and I'm not getting bored while it develops.

    6. The really good SEX is likely a reason I'm not getting bored.

    You seem to be avoiding pretty much all the irritating things that can be found in Inuyasha fanfiction.

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  • From ANON - RedHerring on January 05, 2006
    Beautiful! And even though this might not turn out the way I'm hoping, I still love to read the Koga/Inuyasha "interactions." Hehe.
    Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From ANON - Mauz on January 04, 2006
    Maybe Kouga could ask the "Dog Whisperer" guy on National Geographic channel for help? Though he has seemed to find a way to calm Inuyasha down! Whatever will Kagome say?
    Who cares, the whiny witch doesn't deserve either one on them.


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  • From ANON - DemmaJ on January 04, 2006
    I found all of Koga's reactions intriguing. I can not wait to see how he will react to the golden eyed demon of his dreams...
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2006
    oh wow! this is so good! when inuyasha gets back to normal, will we have more of his thoughts on this? will he even remember doing all of that to kouga?! :O and yeah... i think kouga's gonna kick his ass. ;) great last chapter! i can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dante on January 04, 2006
    Yeah I think Kouga is going to have a few words with Inuyasha when he comes to his senses, but I think he's really starting to like it. haha

    D_
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on January 03, 2006
    Wow! Hot lemon and I loved the whole no-speak begging for forgiveness thing. It was really cute. And Kouga's denial is funny has hell. Really well written. I like the style. Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Rawben on January 03, 2006
    :O another amazing chapter!!!!!!! omg!!! i absolutely adore this fic! and yes, i'd love to see a inu/kag and kog/kag, but... in the end... will inu and kouga be together? ...pweeeease? anyhow, great lemon!!! i'm so glad kouga finally lost it! ha!!
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  • From ANON - Cory on January 02, 2006
    Woohoo! Yes, more Kouga/Inuyasha interaction! I'm sorry if I seemed down in my earlier Kagome review... I was just expecting something different. I didn't say you wrote it badly (let no such words ever leave my mouth!!) because you wrote it wonderfully. It was smooth and seamless, just as usual. I just wanted to know if Kouga was forgiven yet... and now I know. This chapter is amazing, and once again I applaud your descriptions of pack mentality and motivations. Fabulous!

    Mmm, thank you for posting again so soon. You are a goddess, a divine gift to Inuyasha fanfiction. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter (no matter who it involves).

    ~Cory
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  • From ANON - Ryoko3600 on January 01, 2006
    Continue!
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  • From ANON - RedHerring on January 01, 2006
    Goodness! You left off on such a cliffhanger the last time, and now it's only Kagome!
    I'm not especially fond of her either, so I was missing Inuyasha and Koga a little bit. However, you did a superb job of portraying her as "not annoying". Kudos. Please update soon! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it will be with Inuyasha and Koga, and the changing relationship, now that Koga has let Inuyasha into his den. :)
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  • From ANON - Julissis on December 30, 2005
    WOAH.... i just found your story and read the whole evening till now.. just to find out that the last chapter ist only about kagome.. *cries..*
    You writing style is amazing.. i love a good plot. : ) Excellent work, really. Dominance battle and pack behavior.. very, very interesting. ^^
    But i must say, i'm more in tha Inu/Kouga storyline. (don't like kagome too gg)
    Hope you update this fanfiction anytime soon. ^^ Put it in my bookmarks and will be looking for new chapters from time to time.

    Julis
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  • From ANON - ahanchan on December 30, 2005
    That did seem to be a killer chapter to write. (Not that it didn't flow or anything, but just that I think I can understand how hard it is to write Kagome) I'm so glad you updated! So here's your poke with a stick! Please update again soon! And please update Koga and Inuyasha again soon! Great story!
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  • From ANON - RedHerring on December 29, 2005
    Alright! I haven't read the story yet (I'm printing it out and I'm going to read it at my leisure) but I expect the chapter will be awesome!
    I do believe your writing habits are a lot like mine. A review will remind me that I have a story to write, and a good review will make me take a look at it and, more than likely, write a few pages.
    Please accept my humble praises of this truly magnificent story. :)
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