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Reviews for Instinct

By : DementedAngel
  • From ANON - senbo-sama on December 29, 2005
    Wow! I really love this, they're so in character and I find the whole demon ranking and instincts so wonderfully potrayed! Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Cory on December 28, 2005
    Whoa... well, after finishing reading Ch 11, I think I just sat there for about 10 minutes solid. After waiting for a very long time (it felt like forever...) for an update on one of my all-time favorite stories... I don't know. LOL, I feel cheated somehow after that first rush of "OMG she updated!". As usual, you have a very smooth writing style, and your descriptions (and motivations) are great. I wasn't particularly in the mood for a Kagome/Mom sex talk, but hey... it has to happen sometime, right?

    *grumble* I want to know how Kouga and Inuyasha are getting along...

    Anyway, thank you for updating. It was an interesting chapter, even if it wasn't anything at all like I was expecting. Please, continue writing. =D I'll poke you with a stick for as long as you need me to.

    ~Cory
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 27, 2005
    I believe that you did an excellent job with Kagome and her mother. I may not be
    so free as to let my daughter travel 500 years away from me, somewhere that she
    couldn't call me for help, but she is fifteen, knows about the birds and the bees,
    and also knows that I will get her what she needs when the time comes. She knows
    that she can talk to me, quite explicitely if she so chooses, and has. I believe that
    Kagome's mother allows her daughter through the well because of duty. Japanese
    are big on duty and honor. Kagome broke the jewel and it is her responsibility to
    see that it is made whole.

    I enjoyed the description of Kagome's visit with her friends. It was very amusing.

    You've done a great job with the relationship between Inu and Kouga. I really
    like the way you have built it around the baser instincts. It was too sweet that
    Inu was hurt by Kouga's rejection and then Kouga let him into the den. I
    normally wouldn't read something this violent, but you have done it in a way
    that intrigues me.

    Thanks for the great chappie. *pokes, pokes* LOL

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Naraku's Muse (ff.net) on December 27, 2005
    Hi,

    Just writing to say that your story is great! I love the plot, characters, and descriptions!!! Please keep updating.

    Naraku's Muse
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  • From ANON - DemmaJ on December 27, 2005
    Wow that was a long update... a lot of Kagome too...interesting taker on her personality.keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Rawben on December 27, 2005
    *cough*... everyone's... 'poking' you... is anyone else out there feelin the perviness of that statement?
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  • From ANON - Rawben on December 27, 2005
    lol!! poke you and get porn eh? i'll have to remember that... and when you take forever to update! there will be much poking!
    great chapter!!!!!!!!! acutally, throughout the whole thing i was just worried that you were going to make this into a inu/kag... (because of the m/f rating) but then i read the AN! and yey! i'm so glad you dont like her! i love kog/inu!!!! and i just adore this fic! i was actually giddy when i saw that it was updated! oh! and i went and saw your drawins of them on... devinart? or something. and they were really good! i can't wait till you get back to the inu/kog part!! yeah... damn that 'plot advancement'...;)

    ...*poke poke*
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  • From ANON - Melina on December 27, 2005
    i come to poke the author with a stick *poke* this story really is great. its a vrey interesting idea i havent read one like this before and i thnk its great. ok im done babbling. but please continue *poke poke*
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  • From ANON - yako on December 27, 2005
    ...poke?
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  • From ANON - Lovethestory on December 27, 2005
    *Poke poke* Please update.
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  • From ANON - rANDOM rEVIEWER on December 27, 2005
    .............*pokes the author with a stick*..................
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  • From ANON - NieniSprings on December 27, 2005
    *sneaks up behind you with a pointy stick*

    .... Update... *JAB-JAB-POKE-STAB-POKE*

    XD Yea, I don't mind Kagome in the show, but I always loathe her in fics- the fic must go on! Now that we got her chapter out of the way, makes me feel dirty to read her having dirty thoughts, I can't wait to get back to Kouga and Inuyaaaasha. *purrrrr* Look forward to the next chapter, whennever it decided to come. ^__-
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  • From ANON - pixie on December 21, 2005
    10/10 One of the best stories I've ever read! Your an amazing writer. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - yako on December 11, 2005
    when will you grace us with the nest part? I'm waiting soooo looooong.....
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  • From ANON - Jade on November 14, 2005
    Hey, this is a great story, i'm loving how Inuyasha and Kouga are being forced to deal with eachother. When is Inuyasha going to snap back to reality?-snicker-or perhaps have a little more of his human side wake up just enough to eh...-tilts head and grins-help Kouga find release the next time they have sex? lol. and when is kagome going to come into the picture? haven't seen any signs of that kou/kag/inu -pouting- hehe...especially if she figured out what was going on and came to.....eh...help? if she could....which she probably might but not the way she thought?.........yeah vague ideas being shared but hey-shrug-thats what comments are for...keep up the ficcy please!
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