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By : DementedAngel

From ANON - Plum drop on May 12, 2014
It's been such a long time. I love this story I've read it all the way through at lest 3 times. I would love a new ch to enjoy. Pretty plz?
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From ANON - mel on December 01, 2013
wish you would update but maybe you've moved on... def one of my fav fics ever.
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From ANON - kei on July 17, 2012
...doesn't look like an update has been made in a long time. Lost total interest in the story? Or have you found a different place to host it? I would love to know.

This story gives everything about fanfiction within the inuyasha fandom a whole new look. It's intense, and breathtaking. It's very hard to put into words how well written and aw-striking this story really is. I love how Inuyasha keeps true to himself. He acts just like how I would imagine he'd act in this type of situation. And Kouga! Amazing being able to keep him in character. I think a lot of authors stray away from their true nature, and it's refreshing to see someone with talent actually be able to not stray.

I'd hate to think that you'll never finish this, but at the same time shit happens.

What you should take away from this story if you have in-fact stopped writing it, is that it is truly amazing. You have set a new standard and it'll be hard for me to find a story or author that is able to compile a story as great as yours.

If you have finished this story and have posted it somewhere else please email me, so I can finish xD! Lol! Again if not, I'll try to let my imagination finish it for me, however it's not as creative as yours.

Thank you for the awesome read!
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From ANON - The Head Baka on September 12, 2010
Don't worry, you've got us all wrapped around your fingers.

On the subject of receptive websites, on the other hand...

I would reccommend- as highly as I myself could possibly merit- that you look into yaoi dot y-gallery dot net. Not only will you be able to put it up there, but they were MADE for this kind of thing. You can set up a club and be freely able to submit pieces to it as well as other users being able to post fanart. Or a project, if you want to be the only one posting there. Chances are a good portion of your fans on here are already over there anyway- same demographic- and good work shared there tends to get fervently acknowledged. Additionally, you need not worry about the squeamish: there is an entire chunk of the population on y!gal devoted SPECIFICALLY to the cacophany of fleash-tearing lusts that is the general classification of "/f/ Guro" art and fiction and such. If you yourself are
acquainted with that movement then all the better for the purpose of my explanation!

Much love and admiration,
The Head Baka
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From ANON - The Head Baka on September 11, 2010
Oh, gods. Oh, heavenly something that haunts me like a dead lover- this... This is just... :makes choking sound: I... I've been doing this, this dance of forgotten logic called pornography since I was NINE, dammit, and I still haven't--
Let me just say this. I, as a human being of reasonable breeding age with a fully functional endocrine system, am consumed by these thoughts. Writing them brings up almost more questions than the satisfaction of setting them down is worth, and someday it will cease to be useful or enough, whichever may come first but for now I spend
most of the time I enjoy engaging in the dreams, nightmares, and multifarious musings of my fellow men and women; at this point given the quantity of such materials I have perused I have the impetuous folly to consider myself something of a connoiseur of their kind. I would like to let you know, however, for whatever little it is most likely worth, that I haven't seen anything half this good for a long, long time. I can probably count on one hand the number of times I have felt this way about something.
You done good, Madame. You done real good.
Lacking anything more relevant or closer to the truth than that feeble sentiment, I leave you with that in hopes that any of this made
sense. I hope it did.
Cheers.
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From ANON - Eleke on May 27, 2010
I'm a very, very, bad reader. I've been following this story since near the beginning, and just now realized that I have yet to review it! Well, my new years' resolution was to start reviewing stories that I enjoy, so I'm going to do so now.

I. Love. This. A favorite genre of mine is stories in which a character goes into 'heat,' or ingests an aphrodisiac, or gets hit with a blast of sex-pollen, or whatever, and this does it perfect. I love how bestial and primal Inuyasha is, and Kouga's slow wearing down. He's beginning to accept his place for the time being, but he's still very much an independent, tough, brash, and prideful man, instead of becoming someone he definitely isn't. Plus, his self-sacrifice just makes him so much more appealing in this story, and as someone who didn't care much for him in canon, that means you wrote him very, very well.

I'm definitely interested in reading more, but considering how long it's been since you updated, I'm going to guess that it may be lost in WIP Hell. Which is a bit disappointing, but I understand how life works and how more important things get in the way of writing. Still, I'm going to come back every now and then to re-read what you have written, as it is very enjoyable.

A small suggestion as for where you can post it - Livejournal has a very active fanfiction community, and there are quite a few places that would welcome some fresh Inuyasha fics with open arms. Plus, you can post the artwork you have created onto the site as well. Just a suggestion, you can take it with a grain of salt. :)
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From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on February 17, 2010
This is an amzing story. I really enjoy reading it and can't wait for more! I can't wait to find out what happens when Inuyasha returns to normal!
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From Narcoleptic86 on October 06, 2008
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

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From ANON - mika on August 05, 2008
OMG Im so happy that uve finally updated this fic! I hope u finishe it soo but then again i also dont want it to end. I luv it!
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From inuyasha7885 on March 10, 2008
I am still loving this!!! Please keep updating!! ^_^
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From riddlestar on February 23, 2008
*shock* you updated.. im still trying out whether im in a parallel dimension or something..
the 14th chapter i felt was a little random, though you managed to get everyone in character as brilliantly as you always do.
i dont need to tell you that i enjoyed the 15th chapter more..bwahaha. i re read the 13th chapter, because you know, after a year -_- you kinda tend to forget the feel of a fic..anyway it was very satisfying XD
and.. err. do i dare say it? *pause*
yes i do.. update soon!!!
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From ANON - inuyasha788 on February 15, 2008
I LOVE this story! I just finished chapter 13 and I LOVE it! You know what? U very rarily ever see Inu as seme and I get so tired of it. I love all combo's of Sess/Inu, Inu/Sess, Kouga/Inu, Inu/Kouga, etc...........but it is extremely difficult to find anyone who makes Inu Seme. I LOVE it-plus u are doing an excellent job of keeping Kouga a very masculine dom male who is now an uke and why he is and why he is slowly liking it -explaining what's going on and why and I like his gradual acceptance of this. I LOVE the lemon in the water-OMG Too Hot!!!. Hopefully Inu will keep on learning alittle more foreplay and techs to keep his wolfy happy. I hope that at the end they are a couple. That it doesn't end when Inu's "rut" is over. ANyway-again-LOVING your story-and will finish the next chapters tomorrow! ^_^
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From ANON - RedHerring on February 10, 2008
Even though updates are few and far between, that makes each of them more precious and more exciting when we do get an update.
I wish you luck writing the next one and hope the story moves forward a bit. I'm all for reveling in a bit of character exploration or some dirty smut, I'm wondering what's going to happen to Koga!
He's my favorite, btw.
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From ANON - Melina on December 27, 2007
I love the plot development and the porn of course :D The relationship that is developing does seem plausible, at least by my account. I really do hope you keep updating, I would love to see how far the relationship goes and what problems might arise from it. Thanks again!
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From cloroxbarbie on December 22, 2007
your could post your pictures on y-gallery
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