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Reviews for The Sins of the Father

By : whirleeq
  • From CoffeeGyrl on February 07, 2010
    I still love rereading this story.
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  • From ANON - thothgoddess567 on November 20, 2007
    that was so beautiful and the anguish of Kagome and Kenshin is so palpable throughout the story.I loved it and please please continue soon!!! It was GREAT!!!
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  • From LdyMoon on September 11, 2007
    I'd like to know when you are going to update this really really good story, i've been talking about this story since i've read it last year. I keep popping in to see if you added another chapter and i see that you haven't. And i've been patient, didn't bother you or nothing ,but now...now i want to bother you. I understand that we all have things to do i'm a really busy person too, i've got two kids, a household to run bills to pay... but to leave a good story hanging? no you can't do that it's been too long, if your muses fell asleep during the writing of this story you need to wake their butts up girl!!! Finish this story you know you want to!!! :)
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  • From ANON - AjinSword on November 18, 2006
    waaah its sooooo good but there needs to be more!! Please? =D
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  • From ANON - aleera on January 29, 2006
    this is for the japanese translations on chap. 19
    while harajuku is a "Tokyo style of fashion influenced by anime" (sort of), it's actually called that because of Tokyo's Harajuku Station(train station) which is a famous hangout for 'harajuku' dressed people, gothic lolita, etc., but like I said it's not just a style of clothing (excellent story by the way, love it!)
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  • From ANON - hatami on January 13, 2006
    OMG this is a great fic

    i'm not so much into crossovers but i really love this and i have to know what is going to happen, is sanosuke going to join with her, is koga going to join them too, ios koga going to fall in love with her o is he going to be furios with his baka-deshi when he found out that hi is mated with kagome

    jajajajaja so many question you don't have to anwsers them but please update soon and let me know (at my mail) when you update


    ja
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on November 29, 2005
    Gods I still love this story I know with the holidays and all your life is pretty hectic but I hope you don't forget about this great story. I was thinking about something with Yuki though at night she is strong enough to pick Sano up over her head and toss him like a sack of flour but during the day he'll be able to do that to her. Methinks her mouth is going to write checks that her ass can't cash if she gives him to much guff during the day. I really like the playfulness, also are you going to have her daily transformation be like her dad's. Inuyasha when he transformed from a human to a half demon again or vs would heal all of his wounds. It would make for a more convient recovery time from her. I adore how this is going LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!:):):):)
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on May 20, 2005
    That was an excellent chapter. Man freaky about Hojo. I always had a funny feeling about that guy. Anyway, this is getting really good. Kagome's going to be pissed and I bet Kouga should be there any minute. I hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Sess+Kag=Lemons on May 17, 2005
    finally! i've been waiting for you to update 4-ever!!!!!! thank you sooooo much!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on May 17, 2005
    Now WHOA what the heck is up with Hojo man, alive I didn't see that one coming who are these people?!!? You really know how to keep a gyrl on her toes:) I love what you're doing with Yuki and Sanosuke that was so funny. And her trying to resist doing a 'hot foot' on uncle Souta for shame she's quite the vixen. Oh man and picturing Sesshoumaru having a facts of life talk with Yuki LOL. To funny what you have her think of him very amusing. Well lets see Yuki's half miko but when she's hanyou she's corrupted by the jewel when she goes back to being human again will the jewel settle down? Hmmm but now she's asleep do I see a repeat of ep. 1 of Inuyasha in that the only time in the anime that you see Kagome get her fill of cute ear rubbing is when he's still racked out on the tree. I know Sano thinks Yuki's cute but he's such so superstious (I know I can't spell gimme a break its 4 am) I'm dying to know what he thinks about the ears. Yahiko too for that matter heck I can see Kouga giving her ears a tweak:)

    For some reason I kept hearing 'I wear my sunglasses at night' running threw my head when Yuki's talking to Hojo.

    I'm glad that you're paper's done good luck on you're finals:)
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on May 16, 2005
    I still say that you should make whatever pairing you want, they can have romance with out sex(and now girls her age do have boyfriend, and sex'though they shouldn't')

    I like but this story is getting to confusing and complicated for me, while I know you are setting it up for lots of twists and suprised right now while nothing is explained it makes it jumbled(to me) All these char,(veiled) in the past and present just popping up Yuki have drugs, then a fake hojo giving her more drugs of a type...I don't know sometimes if you crowd a story with to many twists the base plot and story gets lost.

    as always your writing is well done though
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on May 05, 2005
    I love the sound effects you put in this esspically when Kenshin bites Kagome I've seen too many fics that don't show that this actually hurts! I love the humor as always and that Kagome is still very impish this is so cute of her. I really can't wait untill Kouga/Hiko and Kenshin and Kags meet up, talk about dega vu her wolf and half breed fighting over her again Bwuahaha. Also this is different in that it's Ken's old teacher man this is going to be good. This is great but I'm wondering what the heck is Yuki thinking (or not thinking). When you say strange dark kimono is wearing something totally inaporprate (gods I can't spell)? What is she going to tell Sano when she gets out 'hey did you see a good for nothing red head take off with my mom' or will it even occur to her to hide the fact that she's from the future or to tell Sano what she knows about all of this. I love Sano's reaction to demons still and that Yahiko is taking this all so much in stride I'm sensing some major teasing and head knawing for poor Sano. I'm curious if you're going to have Kenshin and Sano do what they usually do when they seriously disagree and duke it out. Usually Kenshin just knocks some sense in Sano's think skull but since he doesn't have his demon blood bound yet that may get dangerous.

    :bows humbly before the queen of all hentai crossovers and makes offerings of baileys:

    Everything is amazing as always looking forward to the next update:)
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  • From ANON - Audrey on April 22, 2005
    Just read Chapter 21 and I love that last line! "WICKED!!"

    Great storyline there, but Sano with stars? Any luck we'll see some Oniwaban around too? Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Atropa on April 20, 2005
    A chapter worth waiting for I say...
    You are truly a wonderful author....!!
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on April 20, 2005
    Another great chapter! He was so close, yet so far! Hahaha. Oh Kenshin and Kouga will be interesting to see together...hahaha..Kagome might need to do many sits to Kenshin hahahaha...oh someone will be in trouble if one's mother finds out! Hahahaha. Please update soon.
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