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Reviews for The Sins of the Father

By : whirleeq
  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on April 18, 2005
    CHAP 12- was great! LOL Ken will learn that Kagome is no push over where fighting is concerned and yeah the pup arrived! Just in time to get into trouble!

    great job
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  • From ANON - Veronica on April 18, 2005
    Hey that was cool. I don't think I've ever read a simple kiss that had me hanging on the edge of my seat before. i couldn't read fast enough! This is fast becoming my very favorite fic, and that says a lot, because I normally hate crossovers with a passion. This one, however, I gave a try because of the reviews, and I'm glad that I did. I like the idea of Kenshin and Kagome. Please keep the updates coming!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on April 18, 2005
    Brillant as always darling you always blow me away with every chapter. I liked that Kag's shoved Kenshin out of the way that was quite intertaining. Hmmm and that whole kiss'n thing let me just say Homona homona homona wwwwhoooeeee THAT WAS HOT. :fans self: Finally some action! I love Sano's thoughts on this it's so real that he would be mad at Kenshin and angry at Kagome I really like this. And I love how he keeps trying to talk himself out of the demon thing I mean if someone saw demons today I can easily imagine a similar response. And the whole Kenshin finally getting the change of pace to be looking 'down' into someone's eyes this was so great. :flops over happily:
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on April 18, 2005
    ROFL!!! Oh dear, what's a Sano suppose to do? lol. *wipes tears from eyes*
    Loved that chapter!

    -Jazz-
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on April 17, 2005
    *burns coffee scented candles at the altar of updated fanfics and leaves an offering of marshmallow mocha, chocolate biscotti, Baily's Irish Cream and favorite sexy wallpapers of cute anime boys with long swords* ;)
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on April 15, 2005
    O god, I love this story. Read it through the second time this week (guilty of reading some
    parts three times). After actually watching that OAV of Kenshin's end... After crying for an
    hour or so (cuz it really is depressing) I decided that I like your ending mu-u-u-u-u-u-uch
    better and am inclined to agree with your observations.

    (Love to read angst; don't love to watch it so much. Go figure.) Anyway, I noticed you were
    editing... and although I'm glad, I just wanted you to know that there are so many of us
    that love this story and can hardly wait til you lead us on this adventure!!!

    BTW, I don't know about a HUGE romance between Sano-Yuki, BUT, I think the kickin' ass
    part could bring about major crushes and it might ease Sano's heart to hear about demon
    existence coming from a *cute* *harmless* hanyou like herself. Plus, think of the jealousy
    Sano will have when he discovers demon longevity? Oo Oo. Even better... when Yuki can
    beat the *shiznit* out of something HE can't!!!!! Or at least wield Tesseiga in front of him;
    the wonders of Tesseiga vs. the Reverseblade... You think he'll scratch his head?

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  • From ANON - aleaha on April 11, 2005
    oooohh more please soon, I can't stand it I just wanted to keep reading more and more. I've never, and really mean it, never read a good Inuyasha/Kenshin cross over. I love Yuki she comes across just like her father...I love that Shippo is subduded with the same word as Inuyasha. I love the drama between Kanshin and Kagome, and I'd have to say I'd much perfure a hanyou Kenshin that lives for centerys to the all to human end of the real character from the series...so anyway please oh muse visit this author soon, so I can read somemore in the middle of the night.

    Kirara has two tails not three...thats all the nitpicking otakuness that you'll ever get out of me

    Aleaha *Wants her cake and to eat it too* Sisson
    Inuyasha tou Kenshin ga dai suki desu yo
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on April 09, 2005
    You know I was thinking in that you seem to indicate the Yuki and Sano will have a 'flirtation' what Sano will think of Yuki's cute little dog ears. Kagome and her Mom (and lets face it pretty much all of us) are totally enamored of Inuyasha's cute little dog ears. But we've never seen cute ears like this on a girl hanyou I wonder if Sano or Yahiko will find them as irresitable as well. Yahiko seems to be taking the whole 'there are really such things as demons' in stride or maybe its just shock, I mean after burning bodies for a few days pointed ears and fangs aren't just that big of deal. Sano on the other hand seems to be having a harder time with the whole demon thing as he was tring to talk him self out of the fact that he just saw wasps the size of house cats flying overhead. I find his 'there's got to be a resonable explanation for this demons aren't real' squemish way of thinking to be quite amusing behavior in such a big strong loud mouthed guy. This should prove very interesting when he figures out what Yuki is. ^_^
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on April 07, 2005
    I really like how Shippo's paying for his big mouth now that Kagome can put the 'sit' on him Inuyasha is probally in heaven with a tally sheet ticking off each time HE got sat vs. Shippo's running total. I really like how you have Kagome mentaly compairing Kenshin to Inuyasha this is a pretty real thing to do and I like it. I'm wondering though how she'll handle the differences such as the ramen thing. She packed ramen for the trip and unfortunally on the road Kenshin won't be able to woo her with his mastery of the domestic arts. Kenshin's a good cook but the only thing you ever see Inuyasha make is that cold remedy and 15 year old Kagome couldn't cook either that's why the only thing she has in her pack is ramen, chips, soda and pocky. Now I like ramen but compared to real Japanese noodles I'm going noodles every time. I'm wondering how much Kenshin's going to like the ramen, compaired to real soup ramen is very salty. Of course if he didn't like it he'd never say anything but you can tell, and it would be interesting to see how Kagome would handle that. I hope your muse is in line again enjoy the spring! I'm going to try to not rub it in that its like in the 80's already here, which is nice now but come summer I'm going to pay.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on March 30, 2005
    Awesome! Love it! And I do think that you've blended and given enough explanation of
    Kouga-Hiko... lots of explanations in this chapter -- and such a beautiful job at it too!!!
    Can hardly wait til you update (hopefully it'll be faster than last time) and direct us into
    some twists, turns and definite excitement! (And the look on Kouga's face when he sees
    Kags again!)

    -Jazz-
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on March 30, 2005
    I cried!!! It was beautiful!!! I love Kouga and you did an excellent job with everything in this chapter!!! I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY!!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Wing_Goddess on March 30, 2005
    Another excellent chapter!! i just LOVE rurouni kenshin AND inuyasha and this is PERFECT. I enjoy this story so much i had to go out and hunt down the ruruoni kenshin OVA just so i could watch it. Excellent job with the hiko-kouga character!! please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on March 30, 2005
    great chap, and yes I think you did a good job at blending the two! wow can't wait for him to hook up with the group, lol but hell be a little pissed that Ken got Kagome!
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  • From ryukotsusei on March 30, 2005
    Very good chapter, I think you portrayed Kouga perfectly. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - me on March 28, 2005
    great please update soon
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