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Reviews for The Sins of the Father

By : whirleeq
  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on March 26, 2005
    Great chap, i was waiting!, Love the intercation of Souta and the little INU, Also, please don't let people and their canon issues bother you, it's YOUR story, IF you wanted to make something up go ahead. That is why this is called FICTION. Your story, makes logical sense and as long as you make your story line fit together and make sense that is good enough for me.

    Good writing!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on March 26, 2005
    Ok I'm in a cyber cafe in Texas on a 1200 road trip so I must make this breif I promise to leave a longer review when I get the time your work is so totally awesome! Love the set up this next battle should be interesting I can't wait to see how Kenshin reacts to Kagome in battle :) The whole Miroku groping his decendent thing was freaking funny. Kenshin's such a sweetie to her but she's still super-imposing Inuyasha over him I like this. It's like its her excuse to want him.
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on March 25, 2005
    You cowrote History Lesson?! I loved that story!!!! Oh...sorry. Anyway, I loved this chapter!! It's ok, I totally understand about life and the muses...mine are not helping me for a particluar story (glares at Kuwabara, Hiei, and Naraku muses). Anyway, I loved it, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I bet Kagome's daughter will be coming soon...same with Kouga....can't wait!!! So please update soon!!!!
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  • From ryukotsusei on March 25, 2005
    Good chapter, I enjoyed it immensely. Love the way you've brought Tsubaki in, and Kagome being Miroku's descendent was just too funny. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mija on March 11, 2005
    first of all YeaH!!!! you won I voted for ya love this fic hehe, now second how could ya leave it at such a cliffy???? argggghhhh I hate evil cliffies..grrrrrrrrrrrrrr but soo k I can wait since such a good fic and I have not power over it I have no say.........sigh anyhow you be3 well safe and happy and please please update ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija....:-)
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  • From ANON - me on March 10, 2005
    yay you got an award you deserve it
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on March 10, 2005
    That was awsome and I can't wait until they all meet with each other! I wonder how Kagome will react to seeing Kilala. This is going to be interesting. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - dEEP SERENITY on March 10, 2005
    great update!, Now I'm really excited about this story, yes Sess is to prideful that is how he probably let his guard down. Great job, looking forward to the next!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on March 10, 2005
    I see London, I see France, I see Kagome's.....BWUAHAHAHAHA! I loved that, this was quite funny. I couldn't agree with you more about Kenshin's sword I mean if you applied the whole Freudian thing to it, the way he grips it, the way it juts out from his hips.......drools...*shakes head* uh sorry what was I talking about:) Gods you're so right about Inuyasha's red fire rat haroi clashing with his hair but hey its your story let's try something. You put that the suit is self adjusting as it is tied to his youkai so put that not only will it adjust to fit the new youkai wearing it, it will change color as well to suit the new owner. After all his youkai energy is different than Inuyasha's. I'm thinking black with a white undershirt would look very striking but his orginal blue and grey is nice too. That thing is big on Inuyasha and goes over his hands, Kenshin's going to be swimming it it when he first tries it on. You could also make this as a part of his subconsious/youkai's wish to make his mate happy and not sad. She could walk in on Kenshin as he was just finishing tieing it in place (Ken will have to know before hand that this is her dead love's outfit) and she'd get all pained and teary at the sight of him and as his youkai bonds with the haroi to adjust to a new owner it will want to make him not look like her dead love so as to not cause her futher pain. And voila helping to keep Kenshin the glomp-worthy hottie he is.
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  • From ANON - me on March 09, 2005
    you know i was just about to sugest you add some humor to lighten the mood a bit but i gues now i dont have to
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on March 08, 2005
    CONGRADULATION!! This is my favorite crossover story to date. ( pause ) Ok, put the champagne down and start on the next chapter. Don't leave us hanging!!!
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  • From KuwaLover on March 07, 2005
    Excellent chapter! I loved it! Sorry I haven't been around, just busy with work. I love how your developing the story and all! Excellent with the rosarys. I bet Inuyasha was laughing at the misfourtoune of Shippo! He was propably saying "That's what you get for making Kagome sit me all those times!" I loved it! Please continue and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on March 05, 2005
    The genius of your writing is truly great I have to keep rereading the chapters to get all the subtle jems out of each one. I'm wondering who are they going to run into first when they come out of the well Sano or those wasps or both? Sano is willing to let Kenshin explain himself but I wonder how he's going to take all this. He muses that he would have no problem killing Kenshin himself if the slaughter was truly done by him but what part? I'm sure he'll forgive him about Kaoru and not blame him but how much will it bug him that Kenshin did kill the officers? I don't know his character very well but I think he would be willing to let it slide when he heard why. But Yahiko might be a different matter I think he's kinda scared of Kenshin right now. Also how much is it going to anger Sano that Kenshin 'hooked up' with someone else right away. Kenshin's flirting with Kagome is pretty obvious so he's going to pick up on it quickly. Will he be thinking that Kenshin's betraying Kaoru's memory? I loved the different POV's in the chapter that is a great way to get all the bases covered. And its a good thing you put that Inuyasha's fire rat is self adjusting other wise it would be to big for Kenshin.:) To bad about the costume change I like how his pink gi shows off more of his cute chest than Inuyahsa's haori. ^_^ Kenshin dosen't really know much of Kagome's history with Inuyasha (such as Kikio) and she knows nothing of Tomoe, even though right now they've got enought chemistry to kinda push aside such issues they are probaly going to want to talk about it as they get to know each other better. I noticed that Kenshin's demon seems a lot closer to the surface than Inuyasha's with his eyes turning yellow and red. I gather that those bandits Inuyasha killed were the first time he ever killed a human, but Kenshin had a lot more experiance in feeding his bloodlust. That his demon comes to the surface so quickly might pose a problem in a fight with out a sealing sword. If he does go 'full demon' again could Kagome calm him down again, his demon would reconize her as its mate. Inuyasha was worried that since he didn't remember anything that he would hurt Kagome but Kenshin's demon and her are well aquainted by now. ^_^ I really like how you title the chapters by the way :) Congrats on passing your 100th review I wouldn't worry to much about the slow down more likely I've noticed that new stories and chapters aren't being added as much this week and I think everyone's having an off week. I can't wait to see how this is going to go I'm fairly dancing up and down in antisapation.
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  • From ANON - lawless on March 04, 2005
    Real awesome fic. I am not a particular fan of InuYasha and I love reading fics of it. Especially if the fic has this quality.
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on March 04, 2005
    16 and 17 were great! I like Sano, always did. Nothing wrong with flirting and I think the sex should wait for Ken/Kag for now, they have more important things on their minds.

    The writing was good and I love seeing Shippo grown! Poor Sess...but he would have had to go down one day anyway.

    Keep up the good work.
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