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Reviews for The Sins of the Father

By : whirleeq
  • From ANON - Zombie Hamster on January 30, 2005
    I love you story! Crossovers are so rarely done well, and it's nice to see a shining example of one. I do have one question, though--you mentioned in a previous chapter that you weren't going to demonize (no pun intended) Sesshoumaru. I can understand if you want to keep it a secret for plot purposes, but I was wondering who the evil villiany guy is. I would've guessed that he was Sesshoumaru because of they way you discribed him. Yet, he said he was a half breed. Is he of some relation? Some long lost son or mysterious second cousin, perhaps? I know I'm much too curious for my own good. >_
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on January 29, 2005
    Thank you for the update I was shaking like a heroin addict for this story I'm so freaking crazy for it. I hear you for the college 'homework' though at 28 I'm having the same problem. I thought that homework was so passe when you have to shell out 500 bucks to take the freaking class. Oh well thank you for the update I've got a chem test on Monday and this will give me something to look forward to^_^
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  • From ANON - Arsenal on January 28, 2005
    Don't worry about it. Hope your little boy gets better soon.
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  • From ANON - ennui deMorte on January 22, 2005
    Great chapter 7! I love getting to listen from Kenshin's viewpoint to him waking up and his reactions to all the Western surroundings. And that is a TOTALLY EVIL cliffhanger!! And I so totally can't wait to see more :) !! Wonderful story and very original!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on January 21, 2005
    *does a happy dance around the room* You have no idea how freaking nuts I am for this story!!!!! My heart jumped in my chest when I saw that you had updated^_^ I'm completly crazy about this tale it is my very very favorite. I am curious though are you going to have Kenshin rember EVERYTHING?0_0 I ask because Inuyasha couldn't rember killing those bandits in his full youkia form so I am curious what you are going to have Kenshin rember. I'm so so so so happppppyyyyy that you updated! I've been daydreaming about this story at work today instead of doing what I was supposed to. *smacks back of hand 'bad coffee gyrl'* Oh well I'm also interested in Sesshomaru's deal because I don't think he'd let Rin's killer just walk away, you have created an amazing story, I truly can't predict how this is going to go! I would never presume to presure someone's muse but if you could find it in your heart to update soon that would be awesome!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on January 21, 2005
    WOW!!!! ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!! I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! please update soon because this stroy is awsome...I just LOVE it!!! Oh and if your in to Rurouni Kenshin you should get samuri X...its his whole life story...i have it...ITS AWSOME!!!! sorry just giving you something to think about....GREAT JOB and please update soon!-sesshysgirl08-
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  • From ANON - Diane on January 21, 2005
    And naturally the marks didn't appear so this time I'll just write it in CAPS where it should go; 'By Kami, WHAT is with wrong me? I do not even know that woman!'

    That's a good idea to include a bit of mental confusion etc when Kagome discovers Kenshin's full 'pedigree'. Have you ever heard the song "I'm My Own Grandpa" ? If you haven't you should really Google for the lirics since they're pretty funny. Phil Harris who did the voice of Baloo the bear in the original Jungle Book as well as Thomas O'Malley in the Aristocats [both Disney animated movies] did a version of it & it's interesting listening to it.

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  • From ANON - Diane on January 21, 2005
    Good chapter, only complaints I have is that it's too short & it's a cliffie. 8P In this sentence [below] from chapter 7 you should probably add what where I put the s since it doesn't really read right as is;

    'By Kami, is with wrong me? I do not even know that woman!'

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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on January 20, 2005
    WOW!!!!! This story is amazing!!!! It is just sooooooo good!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! please update this soon because this story is just...wow!!!!like i said please update soon!!-sesshysgirl08-
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  • From whirleeq on January 18, 2005
    Diane: Yeah, yeah, I know. I thought about the squick factor while planning this out, and the best I was able to justify it to myself was that in my story Kagome only takes care of Shippo for roughly 3 years out of his 400+ years of life. Enough to make a solid and strong connection, but not long enough for them to view each other as family in the trueist sense of the word. He calls her 'mother' as an endearment, just as she calls him 'son'. Kenshin, on the other hand, she has only seen as an adult; he's a stranger to her in any way, and born over a century before her. So, yeah, the interpersonals are kinda wierd. I was considering writing a small passage of head trauma in for Kagome over the relationships, but I think I'll wait until she finds out that not only is her new mate the son of Shippo, but also the son of Rin. ~evil grin~

    Now THAT I think might freak her out a bit.


    ;-)
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on January 18, 2005
    Awww darling I'm so sorry you were sick *hands you some chicken tortilla soup* I hope you feel better soon. I am so freaking in love with this story I'm reading it again at 3:51 in the morning before I sign off I love this story so much. I just got started watching Kenshin on cartoon network so fanficts are the only way I know this mostly but you are making me fall in love with Kenshin even harder than I thought! LOL. I REALLY can't wait for poor Kenshin's POV on this I'm sensing a citrusy flashbacks here.^_^ This story is getting so good thank you so much for the frequent updates I was dying during that dry spell I'm so nuts for this story.
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  • From ANON - Diane on January 18, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this & can hardly wait for the next chapter to see what Kenshin's reaction is when he wakes up. Some of the elements of this remind me of that old song about the guy being his own grandpa, which Kenshin kinda now is since he mated his 'grandmother' Kagome.
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  • From ANON - me on January 17, 2005
    uh oh what gonna happen to kenshin please update soon
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  • From ANON - RichOnyx on January 17, 2005
    YEAH! I love lusty, lustful demons! And I love Kenshin! I really liked the chapter, so rest assured that you did a good job. Oh, and I really want to see how Sessy fits into all of this (oooh--maybe it's really Naraku taking Sessy's form!). Eagerly awaiting your next update!
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  • From ANON - Roses_Petal(not logged in) on January 17, 2005
    Yeah another chapter! Update soon I look forward t a new chapter!
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