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Reviews for The Sins of the Father

By : whirleeq
  • From ANON - DC on January 17, 2005
    Woot! Woot! Awesome chapter. This sort of story is so cool, cause you don't know how it's going to end! Keep the writing flowing!
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  • From ANON - DC on January 17, 2005
    Wow. This is a story that I can't wait to turn out. Please keep it coming!!
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  • From ANON - me on January 12, 2005
    please update soon this is amazing

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  • From ANON - RichOnyx on January 11, 2005
    Ooooooooh, I hate you! That was so freakin' good! I love the crossover, and everything makes such wonderful sense. Damn you and your cliffies. Damn you! Damn you! Damn you!

    Your loving reader...
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 11, 2005
    omg im crying there is that fluffy huggs and happiness and missed you's and all that I was a waiting for, you did that soooo wonderfully I loved it, oh soo cant wait for more, wonderfull chapter...sniffles...update soon please??? huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on January 11, 2005
    OOOO is that citrus I smell?:) Great chapter I love how you have Kenshin speak in the style of the anime, I always liked his speech patterns. This looks great I hope that you don't torture us with waiting to long for the next chapter. Keep up the good work ^_^
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  • From ANON - xoulblade on January 10, 2005
    yes evil cliffie author!! LOL anyway update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Marlingrl on January 10, 2005
    I really like your story. Most crossovers I ignore because they're so preposterous, but the way you've set this one up is believeable. You've added good detail and I like your characterization. I'm looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on January 10, 2005
    Thats really sad. >.> But still, its a good story, and I hope you keep writing more. I give you a good review for now, so keep up the good work. Im sure that everyone agrees with me when I say that you're a very good writer, and you will go places one day if you set your goals on it. *Bows respectfully.* Hope you update soon, cause im getting excited!!! Eeeep! *Runs around in a circle squealing excitedly like a little school girl.*
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  • From ANON - kuroi kitsune on January 08, 2005
    i luv ur story. i get tears just thinkin about it. please keep writing! i'm really interested in it.
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 08, 2005
    omg that was such a warm and fuzzy chapter, short and sweet and I need MOREEEE please??? I want to see Kagome hug and cry and Shippo call her mother and all that fluffy wonderfull stuff...again great work loving this fic please update soon, if ya can email with an update, if not then will look back for another update till then be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - InuMiko on January 07, 2005
    Can I just say... *wow*? This has already caught my interest, and I can't wait for your next chapter! The love scene was so kawaii, but so sad... almost desperate even.

    I like the idea of Kenshin/Kagome, specially an older kagome -- i just don't know how you are going to make it happen since both of them have quite a lot of baggage. Also, wouldn't Kagome be squicked by the idea of hooking up with Shippo's son? Just a thought...


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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on January 07, 2005
    OOOO I'm SOOOO flatered by your note at the end of the chapter thanks:) I knew great minds think alike fugue and the youkai and the exterminator are two of my favorite stories. I agree with Mija I'm wondering who killed Kaoru. At first I thought you were going to jump right in with the future story and kinda forget about the RK gang but this makes a lot more sense and does them justice. I would see how they would try to carry on the vengence of their loved ones, and maybe run into this bad guy of Shippos', I can see a parallel story thing kinda happening. One teny tiny thing though in chapter two you have the line "Shinta's half closed violet eyes flashed gold for just a moment" but in chapter three there was "His eyes were red, Sano, red--not gold, and he...he had claws" I was just wondering I know Kenshin's eyes flashing gold was because he's the reincarnation of Inuyasha but Kenshin's eyes are really violet and staying that way for the most part right? Sorry but its just I thought from the second line that I got the impression that his eyes were supposed to be gold that's why red was weird. Sorry it's just I love his violet eyes so much^_^ I want you to know you're doing great on this story and I'm really enjoying this very much:) I've never been a beta before (I had to ask my bother what a beta was) and my spelling not all that great but my grammar and punctuation are pretty good if I could help you out in anyway:)
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 06, 2005
    oooh another wonderfull chapter, but did Kenshin kill Kauru like Sano thinks??? I myself think thats what drove him over the edge and turned him feral, someone else raped and killed her right??? right???? cant wait to see the scene with Kagome/Shippo/Kenshin...please update soon and your doing a great job with this crossover, as ive said Ive not read a Kenshin/Inuyasha crossover that I could actually get into but this one has me hooked..till next chap you be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on January 05, 2005
    Well I have to say that I like it so far, even though not much has happened. Im still getting use to shippo grown up, and having kenshin in the scene, and all the RK people, but im sure that I will love the next chapters. You have earned me as a reader, and I will read, rate, and review your chapters from now on. Thank you for this nice fic, and continue to write at a reasonable pace.
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