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Reviews for different shades of black

By : animefan
  • From ANON - Cindy on March 18, 2005
    this chapter kicked ASS... keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - Ashes on March 17, 2005
    I just got through chapter 1 and I have to say I like Goth Kagome. Yay for Goths! :-) It's a pretty good story so far. But, and I don't want you to get offended or anything, the spoiler said that you made Miroku Wiccan? Be careful with that one. I'm Wiccan and I'll be paying very close attention to the details. Something tells me that you'll know what your talking about when it comes to that particular belief system, but things like that are always touchy, you know. :-) Like I said, I'm not trying to make you mad or anything. You're probably Wiccan yourself or another one of the Goddess worshiping religions or are close to someone who is. Just remember that ignorance breeds ignorance and we've been working far too hard for far too long to stamp out negative stereotypes. So, please, be careful, be accurate, and be respectful. If I've made you in anyway upset with this review, I'm really sorry and you can feel free to erase it. But I wanted you to know that I like the first chapter and to ask you to be careful. That's all. Thanks.
    Blessed Be
    Ashes
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  • From ANON - halley on March 16, 2005
    hi!!! :) this story is totally awesome!!! I really think that you should keep writing, and I totally think that YOU should have been the owner of Inu-Yasha! Right On ::SIGH:: I wish I had you writing talents...
    o well
    NEways, I just wanted to compliment you, and get you to update.
    LATER! ;)
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  • From ANON - animelover2 on March 13, 2005
    I'd be willing to help out. I'm an english major so I can check for errors fairly well and I have a bsic knowledge of wicca. If you still need the help, write me at gamedesigner1@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - CheshireAngel (not signed in) on March 11, 2005
    If you like, I could beta for you, well, as far as the spelling and grammer goes. I'd be more then happy to help. ^^
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  • From ANON - courtney on March 01, 2005
    Awesome chappie!!!! Lol... Cliff hangerish cause I am anxious to know what it will be like at kagome's house... I can only imagine...
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  • From ANON - courtney on February 26, 2005
    Hey! Awesome story you have here! Update more often!!! I check online everyday to see if you update!! Awesome story, I love how the characters are.
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  • From ANON - CheshireAngel on February 15, 2005
    I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! Please update soon, I really would like to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - DarkLady on February 12, 2005
    I check for an update every day so UPDATE MORE!
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  • From animefan on February 11, 2005
    Alo! it is I! the one and only 'Anime Fan'...

    ok ok... i must reply to Anon's review. firstly yes... it was a long chappie. actually the longest yet. and as regards to S&M... well, that's for me to know. muahaha.

    Also, i profusely apoliogize about the 'disturbingness' that you may have found with in this chappie. but honestly, it turned out the best i think. honestly. a Goth Kagome having lovey dovey dreams didnt seem to fit.

    Anyways... the next chappie will not be as disturbing. as well as the next lemon (which wont be for a bit). but i would honesly like to know if this recent chappie worried alot of you, and if so i will dim it down. not that i wish to, but i dont want to loose readers over something as trivial as a lemon scene. or do many of you think i should add another warning? just looking for feedback! (such as Anon's. feedback is really good!)

    Ah well... thanks for the review ^_^. it always makes my day to see reviews! and to know what my readers are thinking. Arigato!

    ~Anime Fan~
    =^~.-^=
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2005
    by any random chance do u have a thing for s&m, or possibly your characters? lol. Well, pretty good, long chappie, just a "smidgen" disturbing.
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  • From ANON - dvs on February 01, 2005
    pretty good and definitly dark. keep up the blood a bit more sex and I like your dialogue. hope to read more

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  • From ANON - inunaiomi on January 31, 2005
    oooo, burn. the whole mate thing really is a big burn on his part. poor guy. he ahould like catch kagome cutting herself, or him cutting himelf or something, it be weird but, hot.
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  • From ANON - CheshireAngel on January 30, 2005
    OMG!!!! I'm lovin this story thus far....so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!! *gets down on hands and knees and BEGS* (CheshireAngel never begs for anything)
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  • From on January 30, 2005
    Dun, Dun, DUN!! ::crawls on floor with heavy raspy breathing"" "Must have more chapters!" I really like the story so far. Keep up the excellent work! (^ -)
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