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Reviews for Bana-Bana

By : Aislin
  • From Kirara86 on April 13, 2005
    This was great. You have a great writing style. Pleeeeaaasssee write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ickabod on January 03, 2005
    Excellent piece of fanfiction and knowing that this is your first one, congrats to you. As far as the love scene sometimes less is more. I can't wait to see you write more.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on January 03, 2005
    i liked it!! it was well written, descriptive without being boring and was followable (an amazing feat considering some of the crap out there) As for the sex scene, don't get all riled up if anyone complains that it wasn't graphic. those are all the horny teenagers who need details. i liked the fact that you explained the emotions but didn't feel the need to give a moment by moment action play. good for you!!
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