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Reviews for Convalescence

By : MidsummerDreamer
  • From ANON - Egyptian Kiss(not logged in) on November 19, 2005
    It's 6:04 in the morning and I'm too tired to say how great it was in depth so here's the short version, it was GREAT! Like the whole thing, very warm, cuddly and cute. Going to bed now but with sweet dreams. EK!
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  • From ANON - SYNAPSE on August 28, 2005
    that was so sweet. job well done!
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  • From ANON - me on April 10, 2005
    wow!!!! Awesome lemon! Really good job with the..ummm...descriptions. However, at the beginning with Sesshy and Yasha, I don't think that you needed that part. It gives an imaginary reason why Sesshy is so cold and emotionless and everything, but it isn't nessesary for the Inu/Kag pairing. I think that you could've gone straight to the lemon after Inuyasha confesses his love to Kagome. (unless of course you wanted to make it a Inu/Sess pairing as well). Other than that, I enjoyed this one-shot lemon a lot!
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  • From ANON - HauntedReality on April 06, 2005
    That was decidedly enjoyable! Your writing is well done and virually error-free which is really impressive given the length of the one-shot. I liked the way you gave them a catalyst that easily could have led to a quick romp, but that you still took your time allowing the characters to approach the lemon naturally.

    I liked the way you used Kouga to advance the situation, but without really making him the enemy. Sure, he is a little dense (or is it stubborn?) with Kagome's feelings and sure he gets caught up in his testestorone and hits her accidently. But you didn't paint him as a boring one dimensional plot element. He was still in character and clearly cared for her even though his actions were less than above board.

    The interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha felt very right as well. I liked the way you peppered their experience with discussion and reflection. Good times!
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  • From ANON - DelKaidin on April 06, 2005
    Very very very nice... I'm very finicky in my lemon reading... and even more so when it comes to reviewing... EXCELLENT work!
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  • From ANON - alyssa on April 06, 2005
    .. wooooow. that's all i can say.
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  • From Kirara86 on April 01, 2005
    This was a great one shot! It was very detailed, vivid, and romantic. You could feel the love in the sexual act. It wasn’t just let me get in real quick. I loved it! Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Niko on January 10, 2005
    I loved it! You did a great job!
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  • From ANON - Tami on January 08, 2005
    Yay!! I love this fic, just love it *waves banners for Midsummerdreamer*!! I got all sweaty, not to mention that my monitor screene is again steamy...God...Why did I have to be born as such a pervent!! Write more fafiction!! If you need some lecherous twisted idea for pairings or somethin' call on me!!(I'm listening too much to eric prydz...)
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  • From ANON - lil _jen on January 06, 2005
    Amazing! That story was so compassionate, romantic and sensual. It was something new besides Inu Yasha pounding into her. It was a very emotional story. Very well done is an understatment!
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  • From ANON - maggie on January 06, 2005
    love both
    good work
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  • From KeikoDogDemon on January 05, 2005
    Wow. Very, very nice. I must admit, this has got to be one of the best InuXKag fics I've read. I applaude you. Great, wonderful, fantabulous job. Keep up the awesome work. Can't wait to read more of your writings in the future.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on January 05, 2005
    wow! it was fabulous! lovely adn with a more accurate description of the male side of things then usual. plus, he was so sweet!! i loved it! and that line about the futon catching fire with the friction? number one, go alliteration! number two, damn, that line was hot!!! talk about getting the nerve endings to quiver! loved it!!
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  • From ANON - Ino on January 05, 2005
    More people should review these. Seriously!
    I saw someone put a four star rating for this first "chapter" and I thought "WHAT THE HELL?"
    lol, they just jealous because it was simply awesome.

    I reviewed them both because they are probably the best piece of fan fictions I have ever read
    since I started reading back in 2000.

    Keep your work pouring in, I for one will be reading.
    *five thumbs up*

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  • From ANON - nanda emanuelle on January 05, 2005
    This is the first one shot I ever read on fanfiction.net and it is my favourite. I was made when I went to add it to my favourites, I think fanfiction.net deleted it. I am happy to see that it is published here
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