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Reviews for Not a fairy tale life.

By : blackcatt930
  • From ANON - Jennifer on October 16, 2006
    hope u update soon
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  • From ANON - You don\'t need to know on November 16, 2005
    Update damn it... you can't stop now
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  • From InusDemoness on August 19, 2005
    You have to update this story or I will go insane! Would you wish that on me!?!?
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  • From ANON - crosser on June 06, 2005
    YOU MUST CONTINUE!!! I love fairy lemons, so please continue, I'll stay posted

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  • From ANON - Goosfraba on March 28, 2005
    Uhhh?.... IS this story going to continue.......... 'cuz I reaally LOVE it!!!!!!!!! (it's been 2months and a few weeks and I'm so sad*sigh* Please continue)
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  • From ANON - schorr different on January 14, 2005
    THOSE BASTARDS HOW DARE THEY SAY THAT, their fucking picks do you like your stories and other people exept people who seemed to feel theirs don't stand stand up to YOUR great stories, so they have to make you feel bad!!!
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  • From ANON - schorrdifferent on January 14, 2005
    Thats cold really cold, stopping right there*just when it was getting good too.*
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  • From ANON - Catt on January 13, 2005
    Listen. I wasn't being whinely or anything. Your being alittle too harsh, you don't know me, and who cares right. I do try hard at my writing, and not putting it up as quickly as I can as you put it. Its not my problem, say what you want, I could really careless. Shut up already, you seemed to be the only one with the problem, and you know what to hell with you. Your opinions don't count the others do. And I am still continuing. Don't like it too bad. Bye bye.
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  • From ANON - Now I come baring constructive criticism on January 12, 2005
    Hey, If you can't handle constructive criticism then you need to stop writing. I won't admit that you are a writer. I said before you have really good ideas that can make awesome stories if you only took the time to show you actually care about your work. It's not about updating as fast as you can but more about making sure that you would be proud to show your work to people. I mean obviously you have no problem with your work otherwise it wouldn't be published on the internet for all to see. I'm just finding it a little hard to believe that you are trying as hard as you can to write since it seems like you can write a decent responce to my review. You're right, I don't have to read your story. I actually didn't. All I could stomach was 1 chapter of 'Heaven Meets Hell' before I had to stop reading. I almost thought, 'Hey everyone is intitled to have one badly worded story, maybe this is her first one' I was shut up when I saw it wasn't your first story. It was the way you write all your stories.

    If you really feel you can't write anymore and you must bitch and whine in your stories to get your readers to agree with you, then your just looking for attention. All I said was take your fictions off this site and re-think them. They all have very good plots and just from reading the summaries you can see that they can be great stories. You just have to either take a college level writing class where someone can teach you make the reader feel like they are in the scene not reading something that consist only of conversation or lack of. I mean having your characters scream and whine ever five seconds is a little annoying. Poeple need structure.

    Just at least try to keep the damn characters in character! I mean I understand your stories are AU but come on you can at least make an effort. If you need some good examples of how to write a good story here are some:
    ABCs and LSD : http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=544172324
    The Youkai and the Exterminator: http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=33349

    Read them. Notice how there is more description then talking. It give the story atmosphere like I said before. I really hope you don't just brush this off as a flame and ignore what I'm saying. If you want more people to read, you really should take what I say seriously. It will get you alot more reviews then 'OMG WRITE MORE NOW PLZ!!'
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  • From ANON - peachy on January 12, 2005
    amazing
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  • From ANON - Zelix on January 12, 2005
    My god, i too read that 'advise' someone left in the reviews, what an ASSHOLE! What the fuck was his problem? Your stories are FAR from bad or anything like that, they are good! Not the best, since i've read quite a lot but in my scale of 1-10, with 10 being the best, i'd give you an 8, not because of your skill either but because i can clearly see you're trying to push your entusiasm into your stories, just like i do, so i'll say this to you: I know what it's like when you receive a bad review or two like that, i got one on Mediaminer.org where some asshole compared my inuyasha fic "Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past" into some fucking Zelda fanfiction! What i'm trying to tell you is that no matter how good of a writer someone is, there is always one or two people who will try to bring you down like that, since they are either total jerk-offs or just jealous assholes, that guy/girl who posted that review probably doesn't know SHIT about writing or anything so he's just envious of you or something like that...

    Anyway, do you know what i did when that evil review i mentioned popped up for me? I didn't take it seriously, i actually laughed since it was the very first pointless flame i've ever received, i always wonder when the next one will pop out so i'll know i've discovered another loser like that... well, take your time to cool off, we all need to do that once or twice, i know out of experience, so, take care and remember: Just because there is one envious asshole out there doesn't mean it's the end of the world, it's just that you can't please everyone, there are over 8 billion people in this world and who knows how many of that read fanfiction, so it's only natural that sooner or later something like that will happen, it's just too bad it had to happen so early in the story for you... but, you'll get over it, because if you quit, you'll let that asshole win and give him/her just what he/she wanted: That you quit and left, so instead, say "Fuck you" and keep up your writing, you'll see that there are lot's of people here who want you to continue, like me for instance.

    - Zelix, see ya!
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  • From ANON - sexililkagome on January 12, 2005
    YAY CATT!!! u tell em off fuckin prick judging u....i lik ur stories catt keep it up ^__^ and remember dont care what otha ppl say..they just wannna put other people down 2 feel better bout themselves >.
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  • From blackcatt930 on January 12, 2005
    Yes hi its me writing. Gee your so nice to put that in a mean way best advice ever. Listen if you do not like my stories then don't read them, I'm not forcing you or anything. I like to write, thats my business, and everyone else doesn't seem to mind reading my stories. You seemed to be having the problem. You know that advise was very harsh. If your gonna act like a prick when reading anyones stories then heres my advise keep ur fucking mouth shut. I'm sorry but I hate when someone does that. I apologies to everyone. I am not taking it out on any of you, only this person. I may not be the best writer in the world, like some of the best writer on aff.net but I at least am trying, and what about you oh so great one? I don't see any stories from you. Listen because I am only saying this once, don't read anything from me again. Simple as that. No reviews from u, nothing. So piss off!!!!!!!!!! Kisses catt. -_-
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  • From ANON - Best Advice you\'ll ever get. on January 12, 2005
    I want you to stop writing stories. I'm being 100% honest here. You write stories like a 4 year old draws, you just write whatever comes to your head without really forming any structure to the story. The sad part about this is your summaries are very good, but the stories, they suck! I'm sorry to say it. Take all your stories off of AFF,net and rethink them. They could be so much better but you ruin them with all the teenage humor. Why don't you actually stop and write some atmosphre in the story then put conversation.
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  • From on January 12, 2005
    yay birth scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up!!
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