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Reviews for Heaven

By : juanita04
  • From estelin on July 16, 2010
    this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 26, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Chiisa on July 22, 2006
    *laughs*

    Me stopped reading when I got to the 13 inch dick part. AAAHHHAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! 13 inches!? 13 inches my ass. What did Shippo do... take some freaking growth hormones? LOL 13 inches god chick you are one funny little shit. Ahem... Okay let me say that in a different way... Me's not trying to be rude but I just couldn't help but laugh as I read the 13 inch part. Do you know how long 13 inches are? Think of thoses rulers that are used in elementary school. Ya know the 12 inch ones? Yeah now add one more inch.

    Huh?

    You get me now? Do ya? I don't think a female could handle that buuuuttt what do I know... maybe it is possible but hell I don't think there is any male that is that long. Shit, I'd think that any chick would turn tail and run for the hills if they saw something like that. Than again,

    Maybe they'd stay.

    O___o;;;
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  • From ANON - The Laughing Man on July 13, 2006
    *I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf mutes.*
    For the first time, I have read this story and had no complaints about the storyline. My only complaint is the lack of details as far as sex goes. You were not able to really express your (Shippo's) feelings, and his atttraction. Otherwise, a terrific job from a wonderufl up and coming writer.
    *I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf mutes.*
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  • From ANON - aufman on April 27, 2005
    good response to the challenge!
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  • From ANON - super shippo on March 21, 2005
    wow this was really good its alot better than most of the other shippo stories and its just good in general.you should really write some sort of sequel or just another shippo story, if you do you should have him in demon form again and maybe there could be a kirara scene.
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  • From ANON - LittleShippo945 on January 23, 2005
    That was fantastic, the rest of the shippo stories suck.
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  • From ANON - Inuyasha Fan on January 21, 2005
    That was great you should write a sequel or something
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  • From ANON - ??? on January 19, 2005
    u didn't sound like ur going to but u should write a sequel or new chapter
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  • From ANON - ??? on January 19, 2005
    i'm pretty sure he's not and very nice(13?!?!? )
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 18, 2005
    Interesting. And I frankly don't think Shippo's ever taken his true form, but he might somewhere down the road. (After all, as you said, he is full demon, and if Sesshoumaru could do it, why not Shippo?)
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  • From ANON - kisda on January 18, 2005
    interesting
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