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Reviews for Diggin' On You

By : Kerenza
  • From ANON - Brittnae on July 12, 2005
    I LOVED UR STORY I LOVE READING AU INUYASHA STORIES AND U ARE A GREAT WRITER PLEASE REVIEW SOON I WILL BE WAITING WITH GREAT ANTICIPATION!!!!!






    LOVE
    *~* BRITT *~*
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  • From ANON - dvs on February 02, 2005
    cute. where's the action though? you have style I want to keep reading and I will (as long as you keep posting) just throw some real jeolousy or conflict in there. I am looking foward to finding out Inuyashas' past. so keep it up please. thanx for your effort.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on January 26, 2005
    hope you get your reviewers back! i gotta be honest, the chapters are a little boring. maybe if you made them longer and included more conversation and less dry scenery?
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  • From fallenangel7583 on January 26, 2005
    you have a very well developed plot along with great definition to your characters. its a good fic, i like it. good job so far with it. take your time with it though, i noticed your note about losing readers, don't worry about that. when you push your plot for others, you can lose something to it. just keep writing the way you want to! i love the part of the ground round, i used ot have one of dem by my house but it went bye bye a long time ago. ::sigh:: i miss that place...well...at least i used to like it when i was like, ten, so i guess it doens't count now but still...how nastalgic. very good fic, keep it up.
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  • From foxfire730 on January 25, 2005
    hopefully when the next chapter is done, there wont be much left for the imagination!! *wink*wink* update SOOON!
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on January 25, 2005
    Cool so far and yes I agree that "hot and heavy" may be to soon but maybe a small smootch between couples isn't mmm
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  • From ANON - drake220 on January 23, 2005
    oh, naughty last line!! i loved it!!
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  • From foxfire730 on January 23, 2005
    YAY!!! Another chapter (^_^) and finally they run into eachother!!!! UPDATE SOOON!!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on January 22, 2005
    kags should come out in a sexy outfit and inu should be there!!! haha!!! that'd teach him to appreciate clothes shopping. miroku was a little OOC b/c i mean, come on, miroku adverse to being allowed to look at kagome's body?? come on. but the porn thing was hysterical and totally on cue! loved it!
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  • From foxfire730 on January 22, 2005
    yay! another chapter!!! update soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnn!!!! love your work!!
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  • From ANON - Shrew on January 19, 2005
    this is a great story dude!! i can't wait for your next chapter ^.^
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  • From ANON - drake220 on January 19, 2005
    hey, cute story! finally someone had an anti-club kagome! i loathe dancing and all these wonderful fics that have clubs as central themes i could never get into! i keep trying but alas, it usually doesn't happen. hurray, it finally did!!! i hope inu and kag have a good time!!
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  • From ANON - Fayemegan on January 19, 2005
    I really like it, i can't wait to see how the rest of the plot develops. the only type of contructive critisism i have is this sentance
    "She seen it again, but this time she seen the source"
    'seen' isn't the appropriate word, it would make more sence to use 'saw' or 'noticed' or even 'but this time she HAD seen the source'
    I know when you get into a zone for writing, you don't really noice these kind of mistakes, or thats something you would say if you were speaking the story as a kind of slang, but it just doesn't make scence. :o)
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  • From ANON - catt on January 19, 2005
    Oooo me like. Update soon please!!!!^_^
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