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Reviews for Jolene

By : Schorrdifferent
  • From ANON - reddragon on January 22, 2005
    I really like your story. It has potential. Is Inu Yasha going to be hall demon disguised in his human form? If you skim over "When he was Mine" by maggz if might give you some ideas on your fic. It has a similar storyline and is a really good story.
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on January 22, 2005
    Kikyo is such a bitch I hope that you make her suffer (I'm a total Kikyo bashing fan) I can't wait untill the next chapter update soon please.
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  • From ANON - kelly on January 21, 2005
    I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. CAN'T WAIT INTIL YOU UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Snoe on January 20, 2005
    Lmao!! bwahahaha, that's the greatest thing I ever heard. My friend introduced me to that song actually, which is why I read it ^^ Cuz I was curious. But now that it sounds soo good, I like it even more. The only thing you need to work on is your structure, spelling and grammar. Such as your speach n' stuff. Whenever someone says something, you generally put them in a new paragraph [unless in certain cases] I'd be more than happy to help you out if you need any.

    But anyways, this is really interesting, please continue!! I can't wait for the new chapter to come out! You're killin me >.< Ja ne~

    Snoe
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