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By : ChocolateHentai

From ANON - Alone on October 14, 2005
This fiction was full of so much pain and angst. Im still speechless at how awesome it is!!! I think alot of ppl can relate to this story. I know I can! I mean we all have made a mistake that just turned into this messed up situation where everything seems to be going wrong and ending your life would be the best salution to stop the pain!!! Well keep on keeping on, LOL Peace
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From ANON - connor on August 10, 2005
well u have me hooked i cant wait until the next chapter .. now if youll excuse me .. i seriously need eye drops
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From ANON - connor on August 10, 2005
LOL damn !! im on confessions of a hanyu an had to come to to comment on what iv read so far !! crap my eyes are blood shot i need to get off the computer but i cqant you know how to write some depressing shit!!! lol hey you are a very talanted writer an i respect that but AHHH lol but ..... *shivers* kpuga is a asshole i dont like him he needs to go jump off a cliff an get with a wolf girl or somthing... anyway im gona keep reading ill reveiw my overall thingy when im done
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From ANON - KogasAngel on July 15, 2005
Yes, I am back and thankfully, power got turned back on so now I can review. I tell ya, Hurricanes stink.

Ok, where to begin. First of all, thanks for the dedication. It really made my day. Second, I am so happy to see that IY and Kagome are finally starting to heal. I do think that Sango needs to lay off a bit on Shiori, so I was not too upset to see her get punched, but hey, she is a tough gal and can take it.

I really hate that Aaliyah(I don't think that I spelled it right). Kouga needs to be with Ayame. Period. Personally, I won't cry if Ayame kills the other female off. Kouga needs to pull his head out from under his tail when it concerns that witch.

I love how protective you have Sesshomaru. I love seeing him in the "Daddy" mode. I have always felt that Rin brings out the best in the taiyoukai and you have done an excellent job of bringing out his protective nature. Awsome job. I can understand his bouts of anger. Any parent would feel the same, but I also love how you had Sesshomaru turn to Sango and tell her that the fates were with her. It is clear that he cares very much for Shiori and once all of this mess is over, I hope they get together.

Back to Sango...I can understand her loyalty to Kagome, I really can. My bf and I are the same way. But, it is true that it is not just Shiori's fault and Sango needs to direct her anger right where it belongs...IY. However, for Kagome's sake, she should just let it go. Kagome and IY can deal with their problems without her help.

Lastly, I love the fact that you brought in Kohaku. Excellent job. He is def. in assassin mode and I love seeing him as a killing machine. I can't wait to see where you take this, and from the looks of things, it would appear that he has some feelings for Rin.

Well, I am waiting patiently for the next chapter, so, please hurry and again, great job.

Always reading(though sometimes forgetting to review)

KogasAngel
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From ANON - RED HAIRY on July 14, 2005
U Know some of your story make sense and some of it don't. I really wished you wouldn't skip around so friggen much. And Inuyasha's whore needs to go after slapping Sango...the slut!!
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From LdyMoon on July 14, 2005
ChocolateHentai, this was another great chapter, you keep pulling me in. I can't wait to read what happens next. Now that Kohaku's in the picture and he was following Rin all this time? Hmmm. Anyway, I wonder if Aaliyah and Ayame going to get into it since Aaliyah is technically still Kouga's mate, again, Hmmm. And I love that Kagome is getting wierd looks from all who know her since she's crazy, but is she really? Hmmmm.

Anyway, until next time

LdyMoon
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From ChocolateHentai on July 10, 2005
Awwww....Kouga's Angel....good point, I may have to bring back Aaliyah, you know she long since left Kouga after he cheated on her but Hmmmm, you now have my wheels turning....lol Rin maybe a her decendent, I haven't worked that one out yet. As for our little Kagome, yeah, you're right, she's reached her braeking point.....her and Shiroi will work together but I have a feeling they may have it out again before its all over....lol

Idymoon........thanks you so much for the love.....I'm glad you enjoyed the chappie and I will be updating this week!:)
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From ANON - KogasAngel on July 08, 2005
Well, I love the new chapter. Hmmm, do you think that if I threatened to stalk you that you would update quicker? No? Well, I had to ask.

I am very happy that Kagome's mother laid into IY. I can see her point of view, and the fact that he had assaulted her and left bruises on her would drive any good mother to her limits.

Thank you for bringing in Ayame. I don't think that I mentioned that before, but I am glad to see that she is in the picture for Kouga. Normally, I like to paint Ayame as a witch, but at times, I like to see her and even have her as a good girl, so I was very happy to see her support Kouga and was thrilled to see that she did not throw blame onto Kagome, but rather tried to see her side of it.

I wonder what Kouga's mate is going to do now that Ayame is in the picture. Personally, I would love for Ayame to find out that she had been hitting and hurting Kouga and then kill the you-know-what off. That way, they could finally mate. Yeah, I would love to see that stupid wolf demon die. (I am in such a vicious little mood tonight.)

Poor Rin. My heart goes out to her. I can't believe that she is even more powerful than Kikyo and Kagome. Does that mean she is a decendent of Midoriko, or just a very powerful miko? It would be interesting to see Kagome and Shiori team up to bring Naraku down.

I sort of love the way you had Kagome kind of out of her mind when she insulted Shiori. It just shows that people have their breaking limits and clearly, Kagome has reached hers.

Well, it is time to say goodnight. I can't wait for the next chapter and am waiting with baited breath for it. So, please hurry and appease my appetite!! :o)

Many smiles and a wave,

KogasAngel
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From LdyMoon on July 06, 2005
OMG....I am at the edge of my seat right now, right now...I loved Sesshomaru's display of emotion. That is exactly how I pictured him when he found out. I mean you had my imagery nailed when I read chpt eleven. I went around the house imagining the scenerios you would write and you nailed it. My friend and I also talked about Rin and Kagome having somekind of connection, since ginengi (I don't know if I spelt it right) said that Rin reminds him of Kagome. But, I am not sure how your working it in the story. I am so excited....can't wait to read more and thanks for emailing me too. Sorry it took so long to get on here and read. Got caught up in the real life know what I mean. Anyway, you did a great job...great! Get the next chapter up as soon as you can.

love love

ldymoon
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From ANON - ldymoonluvsinuyasha (not logged on) on June 28, 2005
Wow, this had some very dark moments to it. I liked it. It's different. I could see Kagome wanting to kill herself, I know I would if I hurt that beautiful hanyou. (all joking aside) I think your story is very good. Somehow, you left it that Kagome knew what had happened to Rin, I don't exactly know what you have planned, but please update soon so that I can figure if my haunches were right. But lets see, you through adultury in there, abortion, suicide and rape. I think you covered it all. Now it's time for the sun to shine on these wretched beings. Will Sesshomaru stop being so cold to Shiori, will Shiori forgive the cold inuyoukai, will Kouga ever find a being to love again and will Inuyasha and Kagome make up and be stronger than before as for the little girl Rin, will she heal? Yes, now it is time to answer these questions. :)

Good story.
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From ANON - Oceanna on June 28, 2005
Why is this so dark I wanted to see shiori with Inu and all Kagome is driving me crazy I wanted to put this story down so many times during my reading yet I just couldn't I feel bad for the loss of the child, the betrayal all around from everyone. I can't breath cause I just want everyone happy are you sure this isn't just a sick dream or something that maybe kagome is just dreaming or something. Hooooooo hummm I just don't know if I wanna ask you to write the end of this story well I guess I got to say ok but be kind I want Happiness but there has been so much loss I can't hurry and finish and make me happy. I guess keep up with the good work cause you have me on the edge.........
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From ChocolateHentai on June 25, 2005

****Walks in, dabs her eyes******

Arigato...........thankx so much, I'm really glad you liked it. I'm thinking hard on my next move. Oh yeah....don't worry, Naraku will pay dearly for violating little Rin the way he did. Keep your eyes open for the next chpter!
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From YoukaiObsessed on June 24, 2005
Really good dark chapter. 0_0 Poor Rin!! Oh what is Sesshoumaru going to do to Naraku for this? Hope to see more soon!! Nicely done!!
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From ANON - KogasAngel on June 23, 2005
I really don't see a reason for you to be nervous. It was a great chapter. I love how you made IY see Kagome as disturbed as she was. I know that her mom knows that she cheated, but I can't wait to see how she takes the news that IY cheated, and quite a few times. I hope she explains to him and imagining one's lover in the arms of another is bad, but seeing their lover is a bit worse. Anyways, I won't be longwinded tonight, but I just wanted to tell you that I loved this chapter and am glad to see that he has actually seen Kagome.

I also loved the part with Shiori and Sesshomaru. The only think I would like to see is Naraku purified straight to hell. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Eagerly awaiting,

KogasAngel
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From ChocolateHentai on June 21, 2005
Thanks again for all of your reviews....I'll be faster with the next chapter:0
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