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By : ChocolateHentai
  • From ANON - RED HAT on June 12, 2005
    hell yell it took U long enough, now update faster...hehehe just kidding, but I do hope U UPDATE faster!!
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  • From ANON - Kogasangel on June 11, 2005
    First of all....(Yes, this will be quite a bit, so get comfy) I was thrilled to see a new chapter. I am glad that Shiori was not blind to what Inu Yasha was going through. She doesn't deserve to be played with, and for some reason, that is what she keeps getting, but in a way, she does deserve something for messing with a male who was mated, just like Kouga deserved something for messing with Kagome. Either way, all parties involved got spanked, it seems.

    I was thrilled to see Kouga re-enter the picture and see Kagome for what she really was, someone who was able to break and I am glad to see that he was also very selfish. Kagome probably did the best thing for all parties involved. Now, at least an innocent child would not be brought into some messy situation, and I commend you for the way you handled it.

    Sesshomaru finally came back into the picture and I am glad to see that he stepped in for Shiori's protection. It was nice to see him care about her. Though, if you could somehow find it in your heart to have him slaughter Naraku, I would be happy. Something very messy. Yes, that would do very nicely.

    Inu Yasha deserved that smack, but he also needed it. He had to learn that people can only take so much, and I guess he found out how much Shiori could take. Cheers for Kouga when he went to go and get Inu Yasha. Finally, it looks as though it might be possible for them to get back together. Hopefully.

    Poor Kagome. I do feel badly for her. I know she is not faultless, but I do think that she got the worst of the situation. I am glad that you put Ginta there for her. She really needed a friend, and he was just that. Hopefully, in the next chapter, Inu Yasha will go to her.

    Well, I will admit that I have never been one for Inu/Kagome pairings(check out my penname, lol) But, I will say that I have fully enjoyed yours. It has made me feel a range of emotions and I am glad that I have had the opportunity to read this. Great job.

    Well, I told yout that this would be long, so you were warned. I am looking forward to the next chapter and can't hardly wait.

    KogasAngel
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  • From ANON - Chelby on June 10, 2005
    I love your story its the best i've read yet .Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From binab86 on May 26, 2005
    i really really really hope that kag does not get back with kag. he slept with shoiri alot while kagome only slept once with kouga. please let her move on and kouga forgive her and they pair to gether. cause if i was in her position i counld never forgive him. i mean if he did it once okay understandable. but he just kisses her and have sex with her all the time. PLEASE DO NOT LET THEM GET BACK TOGETHER!!! let it be kag and kouga
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  • From ChocolateHentai on May 16, 2005


    Hey guys! Wow, I'm almost overwhelmed here...lol

    Kouga's Angel, you rock! Thank you so, so much.

    Red Hat...Hey now, Inu's not ALL bad..lol Thanks for the comment though, you're funny.

    To the rest (sorry, don't want to mess up your names;) ).... You know, you are right, Inu is wrong for playing with Shiori.....he doesn't mean to, he's hurting. Will Sesshomaru step in?

    Where is Naraku?
    Will Koga ever forgive Kagome?

    All these and more shall be answered.....I hope....lol:)

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  • From ANON - RED HAT on May 15, 2005
    well either you've live this life or you have witness it up close and personal! Because this is alomost exactly what happens. However, if This youkai that Inuyasha is screwing ends up pregnant...I'll shit! Because that would be a disaster in the making. Kagome did the logical thing!!! Inuyasha is a fool. Hell I wish Sesshoumaru could fall into the picture!! U know the future Sesshoumaru!! Now that would be an ass kicker for Inuyasha!!
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  • From ANON - ME on May 14, 2005
    ya i hate cliff hangers soo you already know what i am gonna say sooo UPDATE YOUR STORY SOON I WANT TO READ READ MORE!! LOL
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  • From ANON - muffins and cheese on May 14, 2005
    Wow... Awesome plot... I love your story, please update!
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  • From ANON - kenji on May 14, 2005
    Really good. Well worth the wait. I wonder how everything will work out. What ever happanned with Kouga and Kagome?
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  • From ANON - KogasAngel on May 14, 2005
    Wow. Excellent chapter. I feel so bad for Inu Yasha now, but I still have to wonder if he knows that Kagome saw him and Shiori together in the woods. Sure, imagining that Kagome and Kouga were screwing was bad, but seeing the actual act seems a lot worse in my opinion. I loved the way you had Sango stand up for Kagome, though I can see that it isn't Shiori's fault. But, as he continues to sleep with Shiori, it seems that what he is doing is a whole lot worse than what Kagome did. Yes, she cheated first, but it was only one time. He keeps going back and Kaede is right; Inu Yasha is playing with Shiori. Will they work things out? I am curious as to see if you work out some sort of reconciliation. I would love to see Ginta confront Inu Yasha and tell him about the conversation between him and Kagome. However, I will love whatever you do. I am eagerly awaiting for the next update.

    Now, its question time.

    1) Will Kouga ever forgive Kagome. I know that he is majorly pissed and he has every right to be.

    2) Does Sesshomaru know that Inu Yasha is carrying on with Shiori. After all, he was up in Inu Yasha's and Kagome's business, so I have to wonder.

    3) I gotta wonder what Shiori will do when she finds out that her lover is thinking of his mate.

    4) What in the world is Naraku going to do about his mate?

    Well, that is about it. I hope that I am not bugging you, but this is a favorite story of mine and I just love how you have put everything together.

    Waiting patiently(though failing miserably)

    KogasAngel
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on May 14, 2005
    Wow. This is twisted. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
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  • From ANON - Morly on May 14, 2005
    As much as Inu hates that Kags cheated on him and as much as Shiori is justifying the relationship for what Kags did. What Inu is doing is ten times worse then anything kagome did even if she did get pregnant.
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  • From DarkTeen06 on April 25, 2005
    Wow that first chapter was so sad. I can't blame Inuyasha for being pissed. Keep this up! I know I've only read chapter one but I like what i have read so far.
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  • From ChocolateHentai on April 18, 2005


    KogasAngel,

    LOL...you rock! Thanks for that long review, don't feel bad, I ramble as well. Yes, I am currently working on the next chapter, YES IY did sleep with Shiori a second time, yeah it was wrong but I can feel where hes comming from...lol No but really, thanks, all these reviews encourage me to write the next chapter.......the reason why it takes me a while is because I want it to be just right!
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  • From ANON - KogasAngel on April 13, 2005
    Sorry, I should not review and talk on the phone. I make absolutley no sense when I do. In the last part of my first review, I said that IY also wronged Kagome, clarifying on that point, if he is sleeping with Shiori on a continous basis, then he is doing to Kagome what he got angry at her for when she did it to him.

    Also, I am sorry to not have reviewed before, as I said, I thought I did, but after looking, I didn't. Oops. LOL. Great story.
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