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Reviews for UnFaithful

By : ChocolateHentai
  • From ANON - KogasAngel on April 13, 2005
    You know, I was sure that I reviewed before. When I first read the story, I really did not like it that Kagome cheated, however, you have evolved the story to a point where I am dying for the next chapter to come out. Now, some points I would like to ask, if you don't mind...Naraku said in the last chapter(Where Kouga told Kagome off)that he knew that Shiori and IY were rutting, so does that mean that they had been intimate before or was he being paranoid. I know they slept together in this chapter, but if he is continuing to sleep with Shiori, then doesn't that make what he is doing a bit more severe than Kagome's one time fling with Kouga?

    I am surprised that IY did not pick up that Kagome was there, but then again, if I were in the act, I would not notice anything either. LOL

    Ginta shocked the heck out of me...I would think that he would be on Kouga's side, but instead, he comforted Kagome, and gave her some really good advice. Sesshomaru was also surprising, I would have thought that he would have let Kagome kill herself, but then again, he probably knows what IY and Shiori is doing and is now letting things go as they are.

    I am glad that Kagome went back to her own time. I think(just a random thought)that she should stay in her time for a while, and let herself heal from everything. The thoughts about her dead(sorry to be so crass about it)pup is probably eating at her, and she should see that she needs to reevaluate her lifestyle. I know that Kouga is very upset, but when Kagome does come back, I would like to see them talk about everything, lay it all out. The guilt Kagome is going through is expected, but I do hope that once things settle, IY will see that in his own way, he too wronged Kagome and that they will be mates until they die(at least that is how the term mates was explained to me, so I just go with it).

    I'm sorry for rambling, but this is the kind of story that worms its way into your mind and won't let go until the very end. I think that it is wonderful and hope that you have the next chapter out soon.
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  • From ANON - binab86 on April 12, 2005
    wow inuyasha cheated on her. well anyways i am kinda hopeing that kag moves on and the inu does feel guilty cause. "two wrong don't make a right". aldo i hope kouga forgives kag and they be cool again. i know that they cant be close because of what kag did. but inu was at fault there. i hope you update soon i cant wait for the next chap
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  • From ANON - sunshine22 on April 11, 2005
    One thing, SESSHOUMARU HAD BETTER NOT GET WITH KAGOME. I can not muster any form of sympathy for her, she is the biggest bitch, not lonly because she cheated, but because she always looks for a way to justify her actions and make it seems another force is to blame. I'm glad she saw Inuyasha with Shiori, and I hope that he can get over her and move on with Shiori, because Kagome is not worth his time. Kouga also should be petty and not forgive her, because I am sck of everyone coddling her like she is an angel on earth when she isn't. Good job!!!
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on April 11, 2005
    Oi! that was emotional! Lotta crying. Wow... yeah it was good. I liked it. I want to read more. So please hurry up and continue :)
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on April 11, 2005
    Ohh another good chapter!! I hope Kouga will forgive Kagome.!! Ohh and the dark hottie was in it to!! 0,0..Good job!!
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  • From ANON - gurji prince on April 10, 2005
    wahhhh, everyday i come to your wonderful story and still no updates =/
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  • From ANON - Lady of the Shadows on April 05, 2005
    You better finish this or I'll hunt you down!
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  • From ANON - kenji on March 30, 2005
    Still no updates? This is a really great story, and it would suck if it gets cut off here.
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  • From ANON - Kagome179 on March 29, 2005
    uh oh looks like more trouble is heading for someone.for some reason i think about this fic every time i hear or see jhon legeand's song 'Ordanary People'. i think i know what's bout to happen but i'll just wait and see. update soon, can't wait for another dramatic episode of 'Unfaitful'.
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  • From ANON - kenji on March 18, 2005
    Hmmm, I wonder if the next lemon will be btw Inuyasha and Shori. Update SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - sunshine22 on February 28, 2005
    A Lemon, between whom? If Kagome sleeps with Koga again I swear I'm gonna just... However, if it's Yash and Shiori, I will rejoice in happiness. I am soooo glad Sango and Miroku went off on Kagome, she is such a brat, everything is Yash's fault no matter what happens. Is it too much to ask for Kagome to get eaten by a rogue youkai, or perhaps die as as old bat surrounded by a bunch of cats, while Yash and Shiori have 4 children every century?
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  • From ANON - Kira on February 22, 2005
    OMG!!!!!! I can't wait till the next chapter! I really want too read it! please write it! i love it soooooooooooooooo much!

    love
    -Kira
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  • From ANON - Cold Demon Lord on February 20, 2005
    Is Shori going to fall for the gruffy hanyou, I'm glad he told off Sango.
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  • From ANON - Goddess on February 20, 2005
    I wonder what is going to happen next?
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  • From ANON - Albino Elf on February 20, 2005
    I hope you update soon.
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