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Reviews for UnFaithful

By : ChocolateHentai
  • From ANON - kouga kun on February 20, 2005
    Some competion for Kagome go get your man Shori. I still would like it to be I/K.
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  • From ANON - Kagome179 on February 18, 2005
    yes i remember Shioir and it will be very instresting in the next chapter to find out how she fell in love with Naraku and what's Kagome planing to do now.
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  • From ANON - sunshine22 on February 18, 2005
    I like this, a possible Inuyasha and Shiori to give Kagome a little more competition, very good spin on things. I am sooooo sick of fics with Yash continuously crying over Kagome as she gets her kicks, having him gaining an interest in someone else makes it waaaay more entertaining. I am glad Yash cursed out Sango too, she is definitely a "self righteous bitch". I understand supporting your BFF, but I mean when she's wrong she's wrong, Yash is the victim in this scenario, and has been way past supportive and tolerant. I can't wait to read what you have in store for Yash and Kagome's future. Good job and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Inu-Shinta on February 18, 2005
    Shiori is the female bat-hanyou who Inuyasha saved and she also helped Inuyasha to strengthen his sword. Are you gonna put Inuyasha and Shiori together? If you do please keep Inuyasha and Kagome friends.
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  • From ChocolateHentai on February 08, 2005
    Oh, my gosh.....! Wow, I so did not expect all these rreviews!!! Thank you all soooo much. I'm workingon the next chappie and I hope you all dig it as much as the others. Thank you.....they really like me!....lol
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  • From ANON - Ryoko the cat demon on February 06, 2005
    More Please.
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  • From ANON - Crazy Kid on February 06, 2005
    I was actually about to cry for Kagome it must be really awful for her right now but she does have a lot of support and Inuyasha doesn't.
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  • From ANON - Naughty Inu on February 06, 2005
    Man I missed alot but it is getting really good.
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  • From ANON - Albino Elf on February 06, 2005
    I love all the twist and turns your story is going through.
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  • From ANON - kouga kun on February 06, 2005
    All I can say is this is a truly awesome story.
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  • From ANON - Goddess on February 06, 2005
    Wonderful plot twist and could it get more heart wrenching then losing a baby and also losing the love of your life over one mistake.
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  • From ANON - Cold Demon Lord on February 06, 2005
    Wow, that was a tough chapter to read alot of emotions being felt in this chapter, then is one thing you might want to think about is Kagome comes from a shinto shrine and it seems to me that a are little religious and I was thinking I don't think Kagome would give up the baby or have an abortion but leaving it like this is also very good it is nice to see sesshomaru there for his brother. I eagerly await the next installment.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on February 05, 2005
    0,0" Wow!!
    Damn I was at the edge of my seat on the end of chapter 4..
    Ohh love the angst. please continue on.
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  • From ANON - kari on February 04, 2005
    im crying you made me cry i love you r story so much though.....an om going to continue reading it!!!!! LOVEIN UR STORY!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sunshine22 on February 04, 2005
    Hey, I am so happy that you took the risk and finally let the whole world see what a selfish tease Kagome can be without Inu Yasha taking all of the blame. I do have a question though, will this remain an I/K? Because even if it does, you should consider introducing another female (old or OC) that vies for Yashy's attention, and not in a "slutty" way like the redhead, but in a more "supportive/friendly" way. It seems like while Kagome always has the support of her friends/family, no matter what she does, Yash is always alone and has to take the step (whether his fault or not) to bring them back together. Like in chapter 3 she sort of gave up on him, and never made an attempt (although I am aware he was pissed) to go the extra mile to explain to him/grovel/beg or anything. I think that Kagome believes in the back of her mind that she is the only person that can love Yash "unconditionally" (even Kikyo required a trade-off to completely love him) and therefore takes his patience/love for her for granted. I think that if Kagome believed Yash may find happiness and unconditional love with someone else, she may have to go the extra mile this time to prove her own self to him instead of the other way around. Sorry this was so long, but I got on a roll. Keep writing, I like the possibilities of this story.
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