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Reviews for Dangerous Adventures

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  • From ANON - 6angel9 on August 30, 2006
    Luvs it. It has its humor and good story line update soon
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  • From ANON - BastardOmega on August 29, 2006
    very good writen, long ass capters. still I love it and I hope you will update soon.

    Peace & Love BastardOmega
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  • From ANON - moonbabe1989 on August 28, 2006
    Yay! Im glad youre working on this fic, I thought you were gonna just leave it and not work on it at all... its sad how much that happens :( well I hope youll keep us posted on whats happening next :D
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  • From ANON - chanda on July 27, 2006
    I do hope you update soon... I really look forward until your next chapter. No rush, just a friendly rewiew (Hint, hint). I just miss this story.

    Until then,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - rin.dee on February 05, 2006
    i cant wait for the rest ^_^
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  • From ANON - DemonicPrincess on January 08, 2006
    hey i hope u no ur not being very fair with this story i get all the way to an interesting part and u stop KEEP GOING for god sake xOxDemonicPrincessxOx
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  • From ANON - moonbabe1989 on December 24, 2005
    oooh wow poor kagome! thats just terrible :-( but i really like your story :-D i really hope youll continue it! ill be waiting for your next update ;-)

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  • From ANON - jodiannk12 on December 22, 2005
    Please for the love for all that is good finish this story or at least update chapter 8. It's a great story.
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  • From ANON - serenity-james on December 20, 2005
    very good update soon keep it up kk
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  • From ANON - KITTY on December 18, 2005
    that was a sick way of leaving off on the chapter ....cliffhangers.... anyway please update soon and btw great fic

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  • From ANON - a lost soul on December 18, 2005
    Awesome! please update soon, keep up the fantastic work ^_^
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 18, 2005
    Ohhhh, very good! I really liked how you set things up as AU, but they were still very plausible--everyone was still true to their characterization in the anime. Poor Inuyasha keeps getting overwhelmed with herbs, you'd think he'd have realized by now he should just take them away from her...although it's just his character not to realize it. The only thing I'm sad about is that this story isn't complete, and I'm never on aff.net, so I know I'm going to miss the updates! Oh, well, I'll try to stop by every so often. Either way, it's an awesome story and SO much appreciated (especially the research you put into it).
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  • From ANON - Carebear on December 18, 2005
    Hey,

    Just thought I'd let you know that I am enjoying your story. I think it is well written with a well thought out plot. I did, however, find one mistake that you may or may not want to correct. Normally, I don't mention things like spelling in my reviews, but this one really stood out for me because I know it is not the word you meant to use. The word was "bowel," which I noticed you used a couple times in this last chapter (2), when you meant to write "bowl." A simple mistake of a single letter, but when the meanings of each word are brought to light, it is hard to not mention it; "bowl" an 'open container used to hold food or liquids,' and "bowel" a 'section of the intestines,' and a common use of the word would be in the term "bowel movement." There is also another meaning and pronunciation of "bowel," which is 'the deepest and innermost part of something' as in the "bowels of a ship," but this also isn't the word you meant.

    It is not a glaring error, and it will not stop me from continuing to read your story. It is just something I, personally, could not help noticing since I'm currently working as a substitute teacher at a nursery and preschool. So, everytime I saw the word "bowel" in this last chapter, I kept thinking of "bowel movement," which I'm sure is not what you were trying to portray when you were writing of Kagome stirring herbs in a bowl.

    Well, that's all I wanted to say. Keep up the great work. Now, I'm off to read the next chapter. ^_^

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  • From ANON - Conservgurl on December 17, 2005
    Please update again soon! I want to know what happens!! This is a very unique idea for an Inu/Kag fic! Im presonally impressed! Keep up the good work! You are an excellent writer!
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  • From Pocahontas20 on December 16, 2005
    Your story is wonderful. You keep Inuyasha in character so well. I like the ending. Kagome is caught! HeHeHeHeHeHe! Well, keep writing and I'll keep reading. Love, peace, and chicken grease.
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