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Reviews for Blue moon and Red Fire

By : sdi
  • From ValheruYaoi on February 10, 2008
    Hey, love the fic so far. looking back you have a lot of small mistakes that could easily be fixed. If you want i'll beta future chapters and have no problems with going back and pointing out the mistakes in earlier chapters. Main problems seems to be small spelling errors. in chapter one you use the phrase hole body and it should be Whole body. and a couple places you placed the wrong name in a spot. Not hard to figure out what the story is supposed to mean but it interrupts the flow a little. Still, the story is a great story and feel free to e-mail me and i'll help you catch all the small mistakes. or atleast a great deal of them.

    e-mail: ValheruYaoi@yahoo.com
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  • From SecretQuill on January 06, 2008
    you know... you're turning this story into a super angst... is that your intention? i mean they've been depressed for what- twenty chapters now or something? and i didn't even now inu and souta were really together, because you've completely skipped any romanticism after they mated. is this going to be a death fic were everyone kills themselves? i really do love your way of writing, but that'd be a bit too much
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  • From WalterKraken101 on September 05, 2007
    Keep going man keep going, I cannot wait to see what Kagome's reaction would be to Souta being mated to Inuyasha. A "Sit" festival most likely, if Kagome doesn't just faint dead away period.

    And Souta's mom? OMG.

    But I loved it, but it would be so much better if there was another chapter with the revelations revealed to all others in the group.
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  • From SecretQuill on August 10, 2007
    ohhh...and update! nothing lovelier than an update! i sooo love your story, it's the best i've ever read!
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  • From dac720 on August 10, 2007
    Grr… evil, evil cliffies! Though the mental image of Koga in the school uniform was a very nice consolation, hopefully the familiar sent is something safe like Naraku or a horde of fire spitting demons… I’d hate to see what Kagome is going to do when she finds out that she lost her precious puppy to her little bro.

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  • From Vyper on August 03, 2007
    Very nice story.......hope Inuyasha and Kouga get it on though. That would be sweet........
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  • From RedHerring on June 22, 2007
    What's with all the narcoleptic fits?
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  • From SecretQuill on June 03, 2007
    great chapter, souta is so cute and understanding in his naive way... and kouga and inuyashas "friendship" have developed some more, you are great at describing the characters and their relationships!
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  • From dac720 on April 02, 2007
    I love it, not only did we get some ”Inuyasha being nice to Kouga” goodness but also a side of Kouga getting a little better. Sweeeeeeet. I did happen to notice that in chap. # 5 it says “For someone like Souta who didn’t like math in the first place,… “ but chap. #27 has “Math. Souta didn't know why, but he loved math out of every other subject he'd ever taken.” Who knew that training in the feudal era, rescuing your half-demon mate, and cleaning a snow floded house would have such a dramatic change on ones favored subjects in school.


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  • From dac720 on March 26, 2007
    Awe, cuddled up with ice cream, very cute. Maybe there is a chance of some more Inu/Koga action after all. Yay! I think Sota and Hojo will understand.
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  • From SecretQuill on March 20, 2007
    Honestly O.O - this is one of the best inu stories I've ever read!!! My gods are you a great writer or what!!!
    The pairing is very unusual but absolutely perfect for this story and the story is just WOW!! The way you desribe each character, thoughts, emotions, personalities... it's brilliant!! Must say that I LOVE this story.
    Never ever finish it please- keep going forever!
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  • From dac720 on March 11, 2007
    I love the depth of this story but I keep wondering if Inuyasha and Koga will become more intimate, so I’ll keep reading. Keep up the great work!

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  • From ANON - kittykittyyaoigirl on January 03, 2007
    You do know it's been over a month since you've updated right? And I think I understand what all of them are going through. Kouga is afraid of others opinions, of not being seen as strong in their eyes. And he admires InuYasha because every time he's seen Inu fight he never gives in. Never backs down and runs away even when it would be the smartest thing to do. Inu is afraid of being alone trapped in the darkness and not being able to move. It's a harsher level of claustrophobia. One that affects not just the mind but the bady as well. Though I've never heard of someone getting out of that state using human contact. Sota is surrounded by very stong males or what he sees as very strong people. He sees that he is smaller and therefore waeker than the others. He wants to correct that problem. His anxious energy comes from the fact that he knows that there is a possibility that he could be useful and he wants to prove his worth to the others but most esspecially his mate. Houjo is feeling a sense of denial and a mechanical reaction to the biggest fear he has. He loves Kouga and has only recently realized it. That, combined with his fear of Kouga's demise and the fact that also on some level he's not good enough to help, not good enough to make things right is forcing him to act without thinking. To act as if through a fog of both denial and self-loathing for not being strong enough.

    Sorry. I'm a shrink in training so when I see these problems I see alot of the insecurities I deal with in my patients. And myself. I love your work. You make it all seem so common place in a very dangerous situation. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter and I hope your holidays were joyful. Happy New Year! Arie Date aka kittykittyyaoigirl. :)
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  • From ANON - Vampress on December 27, 2006
    Damn Good story! I just finished reading the chappies U got up. WOW !
    The plot reads like a suspense novel. Loving the drama, the twists & turns. Hated the cliffie :( though. Hope U update soon. Hope it's not a year wait, hee, hee. When U do please send an email.
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  • From Koday on May 08, 2006
    Again, really great stuff. Meticulous attention to angst, fluff and character development makes what would otherwise be considered an absurd premise totally beleivable. In that light, though, I'm a bit surpised Ginta and Hakkaku didn't have a stronger reaction to Kouga bringing home Hojo when I'm certain they must've expecting Kagome.

    Anyhow, besides a few slight spots were it appeared as though words and conjugation were missing, reading this fic is a blast.
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