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Reviews for The Guardian

By : whirleeq
  • From loretta537 on October 04, 2008
    this is a great story so far, please update it soon
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  • From madmiko on August 30, 2008
    Just had to check this one out again. I hope you will be continuing with it! There simply aren't enough good Hiei/Kag fics out there. And those that are get abandoned way too often. I love the way you set this up, and I think your plans sound great. Kagome doesn't have to be "dark" to work with Hiei. Quite the opposite, in fact. And I'd like to invite you to check out a new Hiei/Kag message board. http://thedeadliestsin.proboards55.com/index.cgi?
    We'll be running some contests soon!
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  • From Pyrokage on July 15, 2007
    Please please send me an email when you update this story. I really like it. I vote for a Kagome/Hiei/Kurama pairing if you're willing.
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  • From ptbear on April 18, 2007
    Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to read if Kurama remembers Kagome. If possible make it a three-some with Hiei/Kagome/Kurama.
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  • From bloodbunny on March 28, 2007
    Oh come on! You can't just leave off there! That's so mean! Kagome and the rest of the group didn't really get to meet each other! It better happen in the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - KawaiiKekeChan on October 13, 2006
    Oh, this is gettin really good! The characters are all very well portrayed and the story flows well! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tushuri on July 14, 2006
    I absolutly can not wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - hatami on January 13, 2006
    i have just read two of your fic and i already love the way you writte, i'm usually in FF.net, i don't come so often to AF.net so i don't know how it work so my main worry now is how the hell i'm goin to know when you update.

    well if you know please let me know

    ja
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  • From ANON - Twice987 on January 07, 2006
    I was sorta hoping it was gonna be a Hiei/Kag because that is my fav pairing THEN comes Kur/Kag. Most of the time I don't like ones where she has gotten a cold personality because of training with Sess or something Inuyasha was a fool to do *coughHellwithKikyocough* or all of her fuedal friends and family died so Im glad you're keeping her regular personality in this....Anyway now that Im done babbling I think this story is awesome so far so plz update it soon.
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  • From ANON - Animefreak242 on November 22, 2005
    Chap. 2 = Good chapter. Kagome's blushing a lot in this story. A little absent minded too (she forgot to heal herself). ^^;;; You made Kurama forward though. I think that he'd seduce rather than pounce. But how are you going to have Kagome fall in love with Hiei? This should be good...

    Umm... why is Kikyo travelling with the group? I thought that with the battle being over and all, she'd go her way and meet back up with Inuyasha-tachi when they were ready to make the wish (though I guessing she knew they're planning on making it now).

    Well, I hope there will be more conflict in this story (and not just the romantic kind). There'll be an enemy, right? One more powerful/cunning than Naraku? I hope so. All right, I'll keep reading. Hope Kagome meets the detectives in the next few chapters. That should be entertaining.

    Q: Why do you call Kikyo Kagome's 'former incarnation'? An incarnation IS the soul's former life. She's not dead, therefore she should only be her incarnation. Just putting it out there...

    Two more things: 1)'No' in Japanese is 'Iie', not 'Aie' and 2) there are faulty hyperlinks throughtout your story (about 5 in the second chapter alone). They're double underlined and loop right back to the beginning of this chapter. Very strange...

    Ok, I'm done.

    ~Animefreak242
    aka
    Kawaii Girl
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  • From ANON - Animefreak242 on November 22, 2005
    Pretty good chapter. I like this fic so far. It's already becoming developed. So Kagome's the reason behind the barrier? *nods* Makes sense, I guess... I hope Sesshomaru, Shippou and Youko come to 'visit' Kagome once she gets back her time. Maybe Shippou and Sesshomaru'll even be waiting for her? Hmm.. I guess that'd be too cliche.

    Well, in any case, what are you going to do with Inuyasha? Is he going to go to hell with Kikyo? Will he explain to her that he has his whole life ahead of him and can't possibly keep his promise to her? Whatever your decision was, I hope it doesn't make Kagome bitter (Inuyasha staying amongst the living doesn't necessarily mean he'll be with her).

    So, I'll stop babbling now and continue reading. I promise next review'll be longer. Ja matta~!

    ~Animefreak242
    aka
    Kawaii Girl
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  • From ANON - Diamond on July 07, 2005
    Hi!I love your story so far!Gotta go Bye!
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  • From ANON - Cindy on May 16, 2005
    A Very Very Very good story!!! I love kag/hiei parings. I wonder how the first actual meeting of Kagome, Hiei and Kurama goes, especially with Youko having met her before. I'm getting very excited. I can't wait for the next chapter to be updated. So PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - MikosWish on May 13, 2005
    Great fic so far. Hope you update soon. To bad Kuwabara doesnt know about Yukina and Hiei being siblings. Its going to make his life a bit shorter. Anyways update soon i cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Gem on April 20, 2005
    Tease! No, wait, tormentor! All this going on and soooo close to an encounter, but no! Seriously though, like everyone else, I think this is a great story. It is very easy to read, being well written, and you certainly know how to keep your readers hooked. More please!
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