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Reviews for Corporate Deception: Fate of Her Land

By : Trusuprise
  • From ANON - essie on February 23, 2005
    this great is update
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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on February 22, 2005
    Great chapter to a great story. But, which lemon are we waiting for? Inuyasha and Kagome, or Sesshomaru and Kagura? Seems we need two lemon chapters!!!

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Katy8125 on February 17, 2005
    I really like this fic. It's very interesting. I can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - ESSIE on February 17, 2005
    JAPAN
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  • From ANON - essie on February 17, 2005
    this is great but is kinda wrong about rezoing laws but it might not be the same in japen they can't do that cause the shrine was there before the city was it called grandfarthung but if it had burn down maybe. there another way he could of done it but don't could your fanfic ROCKS AND IT'S GREAT AWAY UPDATE PLEASE
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  • From ANON - essie on February 15, 2005
    this is great update
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  • From ANON - Gem on February 15, 2005
    I'll be waiting for your next update. Liking this story, it is one of the ones I always check to see if its updated. Good job of the Inu/Kagome self doubt/angst by the way. Can't have it to easy for them ne?
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  • From ANON - battousai69 on February 14, 2005
    Great fic! The plot is very interesting and the chapters are well written. I also like the way the focus shifts to the different characters, not stuck on the same ones all the time. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Fireminx on February 14, 2005
    That was an amazing chapter!! A lot of character depth. I really liked it.
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  • From ANON - dvs on February 13, 2005
    I like your concept. You have a great writing style with a well thought out and interesting plot. The long chapters are a good thing and always flow well so please don't go out of your way to shorten them. Look forward to your next post. Thanx.
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  • From ANON - Fireminx on February 09, 2005
    This story is awesome!! Long chapters, a deep and complex storyline....it just gets better and better! I'll try to keep reviewing for you. I know it helps to know people not only read, but also take a few moments to leave comments. Awesome job!
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  • From ANON - TrinityKindred on February 07, 2005
    CONTINUED from previous review it cut me off

    anyways as I was saying. I am sure once they find it they will love it so keep up the great writing and know that even though I may not review every chapter I am still here and will support you.
    Till next time take care and keep up the good work

    Hugs
    TrinityKindred
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  • From ANON - trinitykindred on February 07, 2005
    Hey There

    Well I am sorry to say that I am lurker so I tend to read and not review, but if the story is expectionally good and or interesting I will, as is the case this time for I want you to continue to write it. I was actually surprised how much I am enjoying this story, your chapters aren't boring and you have a great knack for detail without going overboard. I know summaries are hard but to be honest your summary didn't give your story enough credit, it might just take a little while for people to find it but I
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on February 07, 2005
    that was pretty long. Don't get me wrong, I like your fic, but long reads are kinda hard. Just a suggestion that you shorten them but still have something significant happening in each chapter. ;)
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  • From ANON - scherezade on February 07, 2005
    Oh my!! You've posted on aff.net!? Welcome to the hentai neighborhood ::cheesy grin::

    Now, I must push YoukaiMusashi over for beating me to 1st reviewer status...but 2nd best isn't too bad, right? Sigh....well, Kagome keeps telling herself that (but we know that she's really not 2nd in Inu's heart, right?).

    What is there NOT to gush over about your story? You've heard me say it many times over...but I think you do an EXCELLENT job of keeping the characters very consistent with the anime/manga considering that it's an AU. Wonderful balance of action, character development, humor, and angst! And the best part of your story is the plot! I mean, talk about original! I can't recall any other story - AU or otherwise - that takes the fight over the Shikon jewel and includes a battle over real estate into the storyline. Okay, that's a major oversimplification, but y'know what I'm saying.

    Ahh....and I love your dominant Inu! Sigh. I just love Inu. And I love Inu-Kag even more. Your Kagome is one sassy chick, which isn't too different from the manga 'cept for her cussing now and then. But that is a very realistic transition to AU, ne?

    Sigh....you're only on ch 4 here and there's so much fun stuff in store for everyone! Oodles and oodles of fun. I'm scared to let too much out of the bag with my review...
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