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Reviews for Corporate Deception: Fate of Her Land

By : Trusuprise
  • From LIlmamma on December 20, 2017

    I apologise, I forgot to leave my email.

    mammawolf247365@yahoo.com

    If my email didn't show up then it is in my profile on here.


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  • From LIlmamma on December 20, 2017

    I don't know if you check reviews for this story anymore, but I was wondering something. You stated that keade is kagomes aunt, and said that kikyo is keades little sister, but call souta and kagome, kikyos cousins. I am confused by this. Kikyos would have to be keades daughter to be their cousin........also that would make more sense, since keade is old while kikyo is young......


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  • From ANON - Kimiko Sakaki on September 16, 2006
    btw, how do you add stores to your favs? I'm new here and I just cant seem to find the 'Add Story to Favourites' button...

    Kimiko
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  • From ANON - Kimiko Sakaki on September 16, 2006
    wow, that was one of the most AWESOME story I've read! Great plot, characters, settings, everything! (even the lemons ;)

    I'm looking forward to read more of your stores in the future!

    Kimiko
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  • From ANON - J on August 23, 2005
    This is a great story. I can't believe that its completed through. I get mad when authors leave their stories in the air but also get mad when I see that it's completed. Confusing isn't it? The fighting scene was beatuifully laid out. I can't wait to read the other stories your planning on writing. I love sailormoon as well.

    YoukaiMusashi is a wonderful writer but can make one very angry with the doubts she has about herself.I have read her stories and say it's beautifully written and makes one very emotional.YOU have done that to me as well.

    I ask you to please not doubt yourself. You will be hearing from me or rather reading my reviews if you do. You will be seeing me alot unfortunately for you. You have started on a wonderful foot and having her as your beta will make it a ride and a half. I am a fan already and hope to be apart of the ride that will happen with you guys.

    Thank you for sharing this story with me and so many others. It's been an interesting and a whole torrent of emotions that I can't begin to describe. Thank you for that as well. I love this story and I'm sure that the others will be no different. Wish you the best!! God Bless Always!!

    You will be hearing from me again and again and AGAIN.....
    Your Fan J ---
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  • From ANON - Irpotterhead on July 28, 2005
    HOW COULD YOU KILL OFF KAGURA?!! THAT IS JUST WRONG!! That being said, I just want to say that this story is awesome and you must update soon. please?
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  • From ANON - Lizashu on July 12, 2005
    OMG!! I love this story!!! It's brilliant...I don't know what to say, sorry...I'm speechless. This chapter was sad, wonderful and very touchig. I want to know how it all ends so please, please, please update soon! And I hope Kagura's gonna be resurrected, or else...j/k.
    L.
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  • From ANON - demonqueen on July 12, 2005
    Really good story. You've taken the original anima story set in the feudal era and set it in the present with some original changes of your own. It's still a very good story. Will be waiting to see how it all ends. For myself and I'm sure from other readers, I thank you for sharing your writing talents with us.
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on June 27, 2005
    I'm really enjoying your story, especially your battle scenes. I would really like to see more about Kagura and Sesshomaru and what happened between them before so I hope you can work it in somewhere or a short prequel or something.

    Anyway continue with your story, it's brilliant and I hope you can update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2005
    Make another one!!Make another one!!Please!!!!!! I cant wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - mel on May 04, 2005
    i love your story! so please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Gem on May 04, 2005
    Worth the wait!
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  • From ANON - Lizashu on March 22, 2005
    WOW...I mean...WOW... you're fic is amazing!!!! It's so original and you're one a hell of a writer.... YoukaiMusashi recomended this to me a couple of weeks ago and i'm glad i finally got time to read it.
    I love the depth you gave the characters and how you include original parts form the manga and adapted them to your plot. That's what I loved the most about your story (apart form the fact tha it's just so damn AWESOME) I got hooked from the begining and cannot wait to read more (i already read ch 13 in ff.net...btw, poor kagura, she deserves to be happy...and finally when sango was about to confess her feeling they get interrupted arghhh).

    Keep it up!
    L.
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  • From ANON - catt on March 07, 2005
    HOLY CRAP!!!! I can't believe that happen. Oooo but great lemon, I enjoyed that!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - Diane on March 03, 2005
    I really like this & am looking forward to the next chapter. Now on to the critique; chapter 12, you have wearily [as in tired] down several times & it doesn’t make sense in the context used, I think you meant to use warily but just got messed up. Also near the end when Sesshoumaru uses his sword you have it down as Tessaiga for most of it & Tensaiga only a few times. I hope this helps.
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