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Reviews for Stripper case

By : kougas69angel
  • From ANON - A Reader on May 05, 2005
    You need spacing. Thats one huge eye sore of a paragraph. Its otherwise not bad.

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    Ex:

    Blah blah blah blah

    blah blah

    blah blah blah
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    It will do wonders
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  • From ANON - AnjelRocker (not logged in) on February 07, 2005
    Is it just me or does this story seem along like Hentai Jane's Lap Dance? Hmm?
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  • From ANON - Two cats past midnight on February 07, 2005
    I suggest you breaking up the giant paragraph into smaller paragraphs to make it better to read.
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