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By : Kittycat69
  • From Kittycat69 on July 08, 2005
    This is for anon's comment

    It is true that i make mistakes so that's y i keep reading it to see what else i need to fix, hopefully ill get better but iv'e just begun writing stories. Thank u for the comment thought, hope to see u again. Bye

    P.S. sometimes it's annoying to fix some sentences because then u have to re-do the whole page sometimes, but ill get the hang of it :)

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  • From ANON - anon on June 28, 2005
    interesting story, but you definitely need some work on your grammar and syntax. examples....parish should be perish....where should be were, and we're in a few places. and the sentence 'but still very close then they normally are'...thats not even a sentence, and then should be than. needs some revisions, and a beta with a working knowledge of english and grammar.
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  • From ANON - essie on February 17, 2005
    ok I'll bee waiting
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2005
    Inuyasha-22 (after 50 years of no aging I would assume he would be that old.)
    Inuyasha had to have been at least 17ish before he was sealed to the tree, so really he would be 67-ish. Just because he was sealed to the tree, doesn't mean he didn't age. If you saw the third movie, Sesshomaru looked exactly as he does now, on the day Inuyasha was born...
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  • From ANON - essie on February 07, 2005
    this is great update
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