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By : ryukotsusei

From ANON - KogasHentaiLuver (not signed in) on February 23, 2005
Wow. This story has come a long way. I'm thrilled with how it's unfolding. Ya know, I can understand Kurama being pissed off that Yusuke went to Koenma. That he didn't trust him to make the right decisions. But, in defense of Yusuke, Kurama was abrupt, defensive, secretive and rude when Yusuke initially came over. Kurama didn't trust Yusuke either. Did he really think that Yusuke wouldn't understand or would try to hurt Kagome. Yusuke wouldn't hurt a girl unless she attacked him. So I think that Kurama should get over it quick. It should be a wash. They both acted stupid. Well, that's just my dumbass opinion. ^_~ I'm really having so much fun reading this. I really hope that Naraku doesn't get the chance to actually capture Kag, she's really been through enough. And having to read that all my favorite characters got slaughtered, especially Inu and Shippo, I don't think my little old heart to take much more. I like that you added Inu's sword into the mix. It makes sense. You are so creative.
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From ANON - Mija on February 22, 2005
aaacccckkk More more more please??? ok ok I got on and found 4 lovely chapters to read but this fic is sooo addicting I needs more...and fudge...Naraku's playing his games already??? ooh I wonder what Kurama or Youko is going to do to Yuske..hehe big mouth went and put his foot in it...hehe.....I do have one complaint...whah happened to my tears??? I wanted more tears and sobs and all that when Kags and her mom talked and thought of Inu and all that...oooh maybe it will happen when Souta find outs??? yes I know I shouldnt be wanting the tears but am expecting them, I dont want them to forget about my Inu so soon...sniffles...my poor poor puppy...sniffles...ok...im babbbling now, its 5 am and have not been to bed, need sleep but had to read the latest chaps first, loved them...but thinking Mrs H needs to put Youko in his place...lol...that would be soo cool, I think Youkos ego is way too big for the sexy kitsune...and Mrs H always reminded me of one of those people who are the sweetest and loving people on the earth who wouldnt hurt a fly, till ya piss them off royally, then they turn fierce and make ya runnn...hehe..like Kagome...and my mom...shes a tiny woman and a kind woman but piss her off and it takes alot to do that, boy watch out...ok need sleep me thinks...sigh, great work please keep it up till laters you be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija....:-)
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From ANON - Ookami K. on February 22, 2005
I have to admit these past few chapters were a blast.... I loved it... You bring Yoko out so well. Except for his libidous nature. (I think I spelled that correctly) Anyways, I can't wait til Kun-loun (Kagome's mothers real name.) learns what it means to be mated. Oh the fun I can imagine. Now that Naraku is in their time the I can imagine the carnage he has in store for Kagome's family... It's good that Hiei is a friend to Kagome she needs it. As for the others well I hope Yusuke gets his ass beat for what he did. Hopefully you will make a Lime, lemon or good fluff scene soon. Way to cool keep it up...
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From ANON - whirleeq on February 22, 2005
Can I just say I admire you? You're like a fanfiction machine! How the heck you manage to churn out well written chapters so very fast will forever be a mystery to me...

Lessee... about this chapter: Yay on the whole kurama/mrs higs interaction. You are handling it very well so far, and if it were my daughter in question I'd make him sleep in the barn -- to heck with the downstairs futon. (of course my daughter is only three and I hopefully have many, many years before I even have to think about infatuated boys, but that's besides the point ;).

I would like to see a little Souta/Kurama interaction if you find it within you to write. After all, Souta was Inuyasha's biggest fan; it'd be interesting to see his take on the kitsune who moved in so abruptly and so soon after the hanyou's death. I imagine he'd be more than a little bitter toward him; at least at first.

Keep going, kudos, and virtual cookies with chocolate chips. As for me, I'm going to bed now... ciao

Julie
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From ANON - Kura-kun\'s-lovr on February 22, 2005
Well....I'm not supposed to tell anyone this (Kuonue is going to kill me...or punish me...hmm....) but Kuronue has a twin brother, whp looks exactly like him, only he has dark blue eyes and never wears a hat. And he wears his hair loose and fallas down his back to his waist. He is very handsome and if I wasn't mated to Kuronue I would have him as well...so I suppose you can have him. His name is Kuronosuke. Have fun with your Kuro while I get my Kuronue. Anyway, have fun writing and keep watching for me. I'm going to be posting a Kag/Ken fic on fanfiction.net where Kenshin falls into the well and is wounded where Kagome is 25 and very serious and she rescuse him and nurses him back to health. I started it today but I won't be posting until I finish the first chapter. Anyway, see ya' round. Ja ne. Keep up the good work.
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From whirleeq on February 21, 2005
Aww... c'mon... let's have Naraku hit by a... a tour bus! Yes! Wouldn't that be just great? ;)

No, really.

Nuke him.

Shoot him with a gatling gun.

Start another fic '100 modern ways to kill Naraku'.

Great job, and love that you brought Kanna into this. She is such a brilliant, but often underated character, I just love it when authors give her ink ;)

--julie
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From ANON - Jasmine Fields on February 21, 2005
This fic is incredible! I'm definitely hooked...so keep up the writing!
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From ANON - Yo on February 21, 2005
well, that story's fun anyway. i just wondered... if kagome's mom gets a bit more "mom like" ... what would her girly friends say. they had a lot girly blabla for inu i remember. and not to think of kouga hehe...
yay... whatever... just keep it up. it's better thinking of this stuff than my work. thanks :-)
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From ANON - Autumn Norris on February 21, 2005
Yay!!! Lot's of chapters!!! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while... I just don't like reviewing a chapter if there is another one after that.... but finally my dumbass of a computer allowed me to get on the internet!!! GOD!!!! I hate this computer with a passion!!! Sorry... I'm babbling... anyways, about the Kenshin info... I'd be happy to give you any info as I said before and I'm looking forward to a Rurouni Kenshin fanfic by you!!!! Update soon!!!! One question... will Sesshoumaru have any part in this??? I want him to meet Yoko... that would be funny... they are a lot alike... oh well!! Whatever!
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From ANON - Kura-kun\'s-lovr on February 21, 2005
Long live Kuronue! Oh, did I mention that Kuronue was mine. But I GUESS it's okay if you use him in this story.....just as long as he is brought back in tip top shape and handsome as ever. Um, yes, anyway good job so far! I love your stories....you're the best...take a bow! Um, yes I think you should make Kagome's mom mean and spiteful because that would cause more conflict and then Kagome and her could fight and Kagome could say she was going to live with Kurama and then they would make lemons all the time and have some lemonade thus producing lemons and lemonetts. Anyway, I love your stories and I love how fast you update. It is better than me. Except that I have majow writer's block so I won't update until I get into the writing groove again. Oh and you want information on Three Kingdoms. Well, it hasn't really gotten that far, they oly just came out with Kurama's past, but did you know Kurama is not actually three. His is more like 1000. He led a band of demons 1000 years ago with a sidekick named Yomi, who he eventually betrayed and set up for dead, because Yomi kept disobaying Yoko. Then after that Yoko reverted to his fox animal form and retreated to the Spirit REalm where he stole more stuff until a spirit peson almost killed him, thus causing him toe retreat into the final world and be born as Kurama. And by the way, did you know he know has three seperate personalities. In the new episodes he explaiuns that up until this point he has lead two lives, as Shuichi the human and Kurama, a fighter who fights for good. Now he has a third personality who is Yoko and is much more colder and is supposedly emotionless. Oh and also I love hoe you're made Yoko serious for this story. I want to write one now that I've seen the new episodes because it makes Yoko seem much colder. Anyway, I think that's enough info and who knows it might held you should you want to cause more conflict. Update soon and try to update your other stories as well. I know it's hard. Ja ne. Kura-kun's-lovr.
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From ANON - xoulblade on February 20, 2005
*cringes again* I hate to be in the same room when Youko finds out what the toddler is up too!! Oh scratch that I hate to see Kagome's reaction to whatever the toddler is up too!! Soory didn't mean to scare you like that....just keep those 50 chapters coming :D (jk again) nice job on this chapter!! Keep it up. Thanks for helping me!
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From ANON - Ookami K. on February 20, 2005
Sorry about not reviewing every chapter I tend to get lost within the story.... I have to say that this is one of the best I have read in a long time. I could understand Yoko's pov as well as Kurama's but what gets me is that niether of them mated with Kagome yet. Ya ya I know she was hurt but still it should have happened already. I can't wait til her mother finds out she's gonna flip at first. Well, I decided to let others know about this story... It's to good to pass up.... Oh, if you can, I hope that you try to post your chapters ASAP God I live for Anime. Take care. Ookami K.
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From ANON - Mija on February 20, 2005
wow two more chapters and they were soo good, hehe yup that sounded like Yuske alright and I loved that whole interaction, and omg my heart broke when Kag's mom knew in her gut the moment her daughter said something happened that Inu was dead and that her heart broke for him as well, that was like sooooooo sad and sooooo good, poor Mrs H and Souta they loved him as much as Kags...awwww dang it ya made me cry again...snifffles...but soo k, was a great chapter and sooooo cant wait for more, and as much as I love lemons I cant see them doing the deed yet either, it would be too soon for me to see them just do it..lol..your doing great and I cant wait to see Kags and her mom reunite and talk, I know that chapt is going to make me cry more, but I cant wait...again great writing till next chapter or chapters since I seem to catch it at every two lol, be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija....:-)
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From ANON - xoulblade on February 20, 2005
actually its my first attempt to write an Inuyasha story (well a crossover) Mostly I have been writing stories about 'Lord of the Rings' Im under the penname, xoulblade on this site and on Fanfiction.net.

Okay enough of that....excellent chapter, before you know it. This story will be 50 chapters instead of 30, :D (jk) anyway dont forget to get some sleep before you take another crack at this story. *whispers* update soon.
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From ANON - LIZ on February 19, 2005
I LOVE THIS STORY I CHECK EVERY FEW HOURS TO SEE IF THERE WAS AN UPDATE.
PLEASE KEEP IT UP YOU'RE A VERY GOOD WRITER.

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