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Reviews for Commitments Made In Blood

By : ryukotsusei

From ANON - Mija on February 17, 2005
omg that was soooooooooo cruel....damn that Naraku.....to have Inu do it??? omg I knew I would cry but to have Inu be the one to kill everyone was even harder to bare...omg still tearing up here, sniffles...and now Youko thinks Hiei did it???? poor Hiei...btw I like that part, how you added her meeting Hiei in the past, I like that alot, it should help her with the transition I think and he knows about Naraku and Im sure he will not be one to take letting Naraku come to the mondern era to take over....again omg that was soooooooo sad...it was even more intense than I expected and I congradulate you on that, it was totally sad and all, but you wrote it well, it evoked the proper feelings and such so you definitly wrote it right...thank you for that, although as I said it was totally a tear jerker I like how this story is progressing, Im just glad I was fowarned and knew Inu was going to die...whaaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaa......poor Inu, Shippo and Kirara and Sango and Miroku. least Miroku didnt feel no pain...sniffles....great work huggles and sniffles your fan MIja...:-)
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From ANON - Ralina on February 16, 2005
*squeel* I'm soo happy you have updated. It just made my day. Yes, I am still following the story, and I am still loving every bit of it, even if I don't review for every chapter or update. Don't let others bug you about the other stories, I do admit that I myself am eagerly awaiting any updates, but if inspiration hasn't struck then there isn't anything you can do about it. So you can just relax about them, I was content at finding out that you won't abandon them and I believe others will be too. I hadn't gotten a chance to read that one-shot that this is based off of, but I'm not really sure if I want to quite yet. It is kind of fun for me to not know what is going to happen next. If you do decide to put it up as a comparison between the two - and you don't get a review from me right away, it probably means that I'm waiting for the end of this one first - so no worries it doesn't mean that I don't like it. Anyway, keep up the wonderful work, and I am looking forward to reading more of this story. I feel sorry for Hiei, hopefully Kagome gets to be able to stand up for him even in her hurt condition otherwise Hiei might have to take refuge somewhere because I can't see him hurting Kurama. I'm also looking forward to the reaction Kagome has to being or needing to be bonded to Kurama in order to live, and if she'll fall head over heels in love with him because *drool* he's just so yummy - and smart, with a great personality... Yep, I'm one of his "rabid fan girls" all right - I try to hold it in check though, so I don't scare him away! lol Talk to ya later...

~Ralina~
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From ANON - Kisaki on February 16, 2005
That was some f***ed chapter! wut da F***! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Holy SHiet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - xoulblade on February 16, 2005
uh oh, Youko is going to jump the gun....*cringes* you should be the mistress of Cliffies! Anyway Im enjoying this chapter!! Update soon.....but not too soon you need at least five hours of sleep!
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From ANON - Lady Kio-tye on February 16, 2005
I think the story is great so far. I love YYH/INU crossovers with Kurama/Kagome, Hiei/ Kagome, and Kurama/Kagome.Hiei. Please undate as soon as possible.

Thanks
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From ANON - Kira the wolf demon on February 16, 2005
O.O....OMG!!!...dont stop there this was really getting good!!!..i9 mean i love how she met hiei and i wonder if she is going to meet her again...will he save her from someone or try to kill her?...AGH!!...its all a mystery...and ihate waiting...i wonder if kagome will meet yoko in the past...and i wonder how inuyasha will feel when he finds out about kagomes little conversation with hiei...hehehe...he is a jelous little puppy dog..hehehe
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From ANON - LeiLei on February 16, 2005
Hello :) Brilliant as always! Needless to say, I jumped up and down when I saw you'd posted a new fic. I do confess it was a bit harder to get into.. but I think that's because I'm SOO anxious for your other stories to continue, as well (your muse neds a good kick in the pants) Anyway, it doesn't matter now.. because I'm just as hooked on it as I am on your other stories. I like the idea of Kag and Hiei knowing each other, and even being friends (in a manner of speaking, at least) Naturally, I'm both curious and apprehensive to see which character(s) you have on the proverbial chopping block and have a supply of tissues on hand for when they meet their end. Anyways, I eagerly await your next chapters, as always. :) Til then!

Toodles,
LeiLei
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From ANON - mhall on February 16, 2005
love the new story but when will you be update the other 3 story.
all your story are great
big fan all four of your story
great author
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From ANON - myrrdinowl on February 16, 2005
i always feel so sad when inuyasha dies, especially if he's actually being a nice guy for once. you're doing a wonderful job, keep up the great work!
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From ANON - KogasAngel on February 15, 2005
If you have one or two more chapters out by the end of the night, I will get down on my hands and knees and call you the master of updating. Wow. What a wonderful story. I am totally loving it. What a wonderful author you are. Keep up the great job.
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From ANON - Autumn Norris on February 15, 2005
Yay! New chapter! This may sound kinda lame... I should know this... but who is Kentaro? Is he a OC or is he part of the show/ manga? I've heard the name!! I don't know where though!!!! Oh, if you want any Rurouni Kenshin info, I'll be happy to tell you anything you want, to the best of my abilities! I haven't seen every episode of the show, but I know the characters and their pasts quite well... so ask me if you want, I'm always ready to help a fellow writer in need!
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From ANON - Ox King on February 15, 2005
Holy moley, Chapter 8 was cool. Nice twist having Hiei and Kagome knowing each other in the past. I wonder how that is going to play out with Shuichi/Youko/Kurama in the furture? How about a bit of a love triangle? Heehee that is so evil. Thanks for updating so soon. I live to check for your updates.
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From ANON - myrrdinowl on February 15, 2005
i'm happy to see you're still writing your fics. i haven't seen an update on your other fics in awhile and suddenly i find this one. you have a great talent in portraying the characters. i love how kagome just met hiei in the past! keep up the great work!!
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From ANON - xoulblade on February 14, 2005
*cringed* that must of hurt........anyway thanks for answering me, but how do you do that? Writing so much?? I do have stories out there, I haven't finished them yet and now I want to do a crossover with YYH and Inuyasha Kurama and Kagome, but I'm like you I start one and I start another one :D
anyway I'm enjoying this story, but 'try' to put some chapters in your other ones (I think I need to take my own advice) but no hurry! I can't wait until you update next!
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From ANON - Kura-kun\'s-lovr on February 14, 2005
Hi! I've been meaning to review some of your stories, beginning with your first one, because personally I think they are the best. And you said you've never watched Yu Yu Hakusho? Well, you definately should and I agree with the other reviwers who say you keep the characters in character. Anyway, I just wanted to say I absolutely love your stories. Your first one because I love Kuronue and I believe you might have read some of my stories on FAnfiction.net. I know you've reviewed a few of them and thanks for reviewing. Anyway, yeah Kuronue/Kag/Kur all the way on that one! Um, this one and your Yusuke/Kurama/Kag are both interesting and I applaud you for writing that one because as far as I can tell, no one had written a Kag.Kur which involved Yusuke. It is great and you really have agrasp on their characters. Um I must confess I haven't really read your Hiei/Kag because frankly I'm not really a Hiei/Kag fan. That's not to say Id silike Hiei, but I much prefer him to be with Sango if I ever use him in my stories. I read one of your responses that said you might do a Kag/Kur/Kenshin and I think that totally rocks. I myself have been wanting to start a triangle like that because frankly they are both hot and red heads. The only thing holding me back is I don't really know the whole story behind Rurouni Kenshin, mainly because I've seen only 6 episodes as the dvds are really expensive. I'll get around to it eventually but in the mnean time if you should decide to start one I will defintalye read it. I think it's a wonderful idea. Anyway, I think that is all the reviewing I will do. Keep up the updates and try to oevr come your writer's block, because frankly I know how it feels. Trust me out of all my stories, it is getting tough to figure out where to go. Ja ne. Kura-kun's-lovr
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