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Reviews for Commitments Made In Blood

By : ryukotsusei
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on April 03, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Audrey on April 03, 2005
    *claps hands and wipes a tear* Brilliant twist! Of all places to have a romantic interlude! Kanna's mirror! HA! Ok, now what I want to know is after they killed Kanna, Naraku just disappeared? Seems kind of weird to me, I would have thought he's take the chance to finish them off or at least grab the mirror with Youko's soul to absorb. Hmmm? Well, I'm excited to see Suuichi develop his side of the relationship. :)
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  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on April 02, 2005
    Oh My God!!!!
    what a read. I just spent the past two days reading this story. I would have finished it earlier but life got in my way.
    Anyway this is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read, thank you for sharing your creative mind and posting your stories.
    I seriously can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Ralina on March 30, 2005
    Bravo!! Another wonderful chapter! I love how you are fitting everything together so nicely. I wonder when they will realize that the jewel didn't make it out with them - hopefully nothing will happen to the mirror (or nobody will steal it...) :)
    Keep up the excellent job!! Youko/ Kurama/ Kagome forever!

    ~Ralina~
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in) on March 30, 2005
    Go Koenma. He's not such a jerk after all. I'm surprised he brought everyone back so quickly without a fight. Well I guess he realized that he needs all of them to fight against Naraku. I can't wait to see how everybody punishes Kag for the trouble she caused. I wonder if Yusuke will ever accept Kagome as Kurama's mate. I know that Yusuke and Keiko are not the featured characters in this fic, but I would love to see a lemon between those two. There are so few lemons with Yusuke and Keiko, which surprises me because they are the only established relationship in the anime. Go figure. I wish you did yaoi pairings. I would also love to see Kuronue and Hiei paired together, but alas, I'll have to write that one myself. LOL.
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  • From ANON - Gem on March 30, 2005
    Glad to see you put the boys back together, somehow it just wouldn't be the same with them in their own bodies. Sounds like you have some fun time planned for Kagome as Yupko/Kurama both get to ease their frustrations! And the lemon from the last chapter was great, well worth your effort. This chap was a much needed bit of downtime so we can get ready for when Kagome is revived - still expecting something to hit the fan about her getting herself killed. Now just what twisted little plot point do you have planned for the jewel in the mirror? I'm not even going to try to guess, my mind just does not work that way! Sigh I only wish, now if you ever wanted input with snappy come backs, one liners or plotting payback, that, I could oblidge with. (grins we all have our talents) hanks for the latest update, much enjoyed.
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  • From kogaluver on March 29, 2005
    WooHoo! You've done yourself proud once again with another awesomely, grippingly, nail bitingly kick ass chapter. I'm thrilled that Kanna is dead. That kid just creeps me out. THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING HIEI. I LOVE THAT LITTLE FIREFLY TOO ^_~ You have got to be THE MOST CREATIVE AUTHOR IN THE ENTIRE FREE WORLD. I love how you come up with these ideas. Yoko getting sucked out of Kurama and into the mirror, making Kurama a basket case. And then after you killed off Kag (the dumbass deserved it though for disobeying her mate) you put her sole into the mirror too. What a wonderful way to kill two birds with one stone. Working out a way for her to stick around until they can put her soul back into her body and giving us a HOT FUCKING LEMON. I wuv you ^_^ I think it was cool that you had Yusuke shake Kag too after she died. That is just soooooo Yusuke. You are one of my favorite storytellers. Good luck with upcoming chapters.
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  • From ANON - Ookami K. on March 29, 2005
    Wow, chapter 42,43 were great... I disliked the part about Kagome getting killed and Yoko being sucked into the mirror... But you have your reasons.... The lemon was ok at least they finished the bonding.... Poor Kourune how he must feel..... Where's Sesshoumaru when you need him.... sighs... I'll let you write the story since your the author besides I want another chapter and soon.... Make us proud...
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  • From ANON - kuramarose on March 28, 2005
    I agree. Maybe you should make Kagome a truely disobedient mate and have Youko tie her to a bed and punish her over and over....and over again...:)
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  • From ANON - Gem on March 28, 2005
    Un-frickin-real! You "killed" them both off AND still managed the lemon! Wow the cliffhanger was woth it! As you can tell this last chapter was not anything like I expected. I can't wait to see how you plan and get them out of the mirror. ( lol I just had a thought- you'll throw us another curve by doing something very simple like someone just smashing the darned thing!) I wouldn't want to be Kagome either when she gets revived. Given the choice of facing a bunch of more-than-ticked demons and detectives she may wish to stay dead. Though the thought of being tied to Kurama's bed..................................
    (no further coments needed on that thought!). SO very glad you decided to update quickly. You get very creative and motivated when in fear of your life from slavering fans!!! LOL I think its safeto say we are appeased for now.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on March 28, 2005
    O-o-o. Great plot twist. Total surprise.... And you're right! It is your fic.
    At least, you make it kinda believeable that two spirits could... ehrm, do that!!!!

    -Jazz-
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  • From ANON - Gem on March 27, 2005
    Bad Bad authoress! evil cliffy indeed. I'm guessing you have a way to bring her back and get Youko out (maybe his crazed rage proving to much for the mirror?) Any way you might still want to duck and cover. LOL No one can ever say your writing is boring that's for sure. Just one thing please please update soon. Leaving us hanging at this point would be pure evil.
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  • From ANON - Kura-kun\'s-lovr on March 27, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You just had to stop there. I'm going to kill you!!!! Not really, but, come on, now I'm dying to know what is going on. There are just so many questions. For instance, is Yoko going to be reabsorbed into Shuichi? Or are you going to perhaps make Yoko come back and them be seperate? Um, is Kagome reeeeally dead? Or is that just what Yoko thinks? And Kuronue better get his ass in gear and realize Kagome isn't there anymore. Um, please don't make Yoko and Kurama be really angry at Kagome. She was only trying to help her mate. Wouldn't you do the same? Don't make them get into a really nasty fight. Um, oh geez, I have to know what happens. And you better update soon or I'll sic my Kuronue on you and have Yoko steal all your underwear. Anyway, yeah it was a great chapter, though there was a whole crisis and things. Anyway I'll be updating later, so look for me. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Cyntinell on March 27, 2005
    Yes it did meet with my approval lol and I remember reading somewhere that you couldn't write battle scenes I would say you did a hell of a job. waiting for the next chapter is going to be agonizing but will be well worth the wait I am sure keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Lauren on March 27, 2005
    OH who would kill you :P....umm...I never reviewed before but i have been reading from the start.....how come you wanted the fight scene to wait? aw well......good chapter ^.^
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