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Reviews for Commitments Made In Blood

By : ryukotsusei

From ANON - Autumn Norris on March 27, 2005
AH!!!!! *screams bloody murder* EEPNESS!!!!!!! OH MA GOD OH MA GOD!!!!! AH!!!! *bursts into uncontrollable sobs* AH!!!! YOKO!!!!! KAGOME!!!!! KURAMA!!!!! EEE!!!!! PLEASE GET OUT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! You're an evil someanawhore! J/K! I'm like in shock right now... it's like 2 in the morning so I can't scream very loud... but I almost screamed... I hate you... with a passion... no I could never hate you! But you're an evil EVIL person! I think you are trying to take my title of "Most Evil Bitch in the World"... but maybe not... UPDATE!!!! UPDATE!!!! I command you, as the God of Everything, to UPDATE!!!! WEE!!!! Hyper!!!! *runs off to do something odd*
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From ANON - Jasmine Fields on March 27, 2005
Holy f-in' shiznit!!!! I promise not to kill you... but that doesn't mean
that I won't maim you in the meantime. *with what? -- I have no-o-o clue*

-Jazz-
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From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on March 26, 2005
I like the idea of Naraku setting a trap for Hiei instead of some fight at the mall. I think it will give you more room to be creative. I am afraid that you're going to kill off Hiei. I don't know why I'm thinking that, I just am. I hope I'm wrong, but if I'm right I will trust that there will be a reason for it. Maybe I'm getting ahead of myself, sorry. Kag's really starting to get on my nerves a bit. She never stops wanting to throw herself in the line of fire without thought of the others needing to stop concentrating all of their efforts on fighting, to watch over her. She is so fucking selfish sometimes and unthinking. I guess it comes from a lack of maturity, she is quite young. But once again I say, ya think she would have picked up a few things along the way in the Feudal Era, BUT NOOOOOO. Anyway, I'm babbling now, sorry. I just printed up all three revised chapters of Circle of Souls. I want to re-read the whole thing since you've added to it. Damn, it took almost an entire ream of paper. Ah well, your fics are worth it ^_~ CYA next time.
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From ANON - cyntinell on March 26, 2005
another excellent chapter and to think I didn't have to wait for the update lol. You sure love to leave stories hanging and I am looking forward to the ass kicking that is coming.
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From ANON - Ralina on March 26, 2005
I really am enjoying your stories. I'm glad that you have updated and I am patiently waiting for the rest of the story. Take your time, and keep up the good work!

~Ralina~

P.S. I think you did a wonderful job on the police scene - it would have been funny if they had defeated Naraku, but I guess it would have also been unrealistic. lol
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From ANON - Autumn Norris on March 26, 2005
Yayness!!! A new chapter!!!! Wee!!!!!!! *bounces around room singing one of the eBay commercial songs* "When you can't seem to find the baseball that's been signed, that's on eBay!" sorry... I like that song a lot... anyways! Great chapter! You made Naraku pick out a chick outfit didn't you??? I can just imagine Naraku standing there in a pink shirt with hip-hugger jeans. Hehe... I make myself laugh! Anyways... update soon!!!!! I love ya with a passion! =)
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From ANON - Gem on March 26, 2005
Sooooooooo glad you updated. I think I was starting to go into withdrawl! This story is a alot like a great thrill park ride. There are ups, downs, variations in pace, all just making you want to know whats next. Love it - want more! Besides I still want to see you put some serious hurt on Naraku! With the YYH boys to work with, I'm thinking his end will be anything but quick and painless.
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From ANON - Audrey on March 26, 2005
Another great chapter! Yay! Naraku must be pretty good about picking out clothes, he got the right sizes first time around!!! Makes me wonder, what the fab 5 would do with his sense of style? Hee! Glad to see you back in action. I'll be rereading COS again shortly and i can't wait!
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From ANON - Cyntinell on March 26, 2005
Well I finally finished with chapter 40 stayed up most of the night to get there. I really love the way this story is coming together. I can't wait to read the rest of it. You have a remarkable talent for detail and keeping the characters believable. I love it
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From ANON - Cyntinell on March 22, 2005
This is my first review and I know it's about time. I just finished chapter 23 and I love it so far. The dynamics of the story is amazing. You are by far the best writer I've read so far. I am looking forward to reading the rest but right now it's time for bed I will review again after I have read a little more. Please update soon lmao Had to say it.
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From ANON - Tori~Chan on March 15, 2005
i want to say that i love all your stories.....you have such great work!i love all four of your stories. Commitments made in blood is great. how is naraku going to act when he finds out humans rule themselves and they are gona fight him (assuming you make them that way) and when will kagome learn greater control of he power? and if she fully mates with youko will she gain powers as well? because in some fics when the human mates with the demon the human gains a few of said demons tributes and powers so it would be kinda cool if that could happen also i love how you made youko show his softer side in the beginning it was so cute! lol it showed there was more to him then just being a sexy lobable hentai not that anyones complaning lol also thank you for making kagome stronger i hate a weak kagome it's so not her! so thanks for making her the way she relly is :) it took a lot of work to try to find a way to review to you cuz MM is kinda sucky right now with the way you can't really review because of all the bull crap you have to go threw.

for a Circle of Souls
i think this is one of my fav's! what's gonna happen to them now? i like the way your worked out the whole kagome hiei thing that was very nicely done and also i want to thank you for keeping hiei hiei. so many ppl butcher his personality and i can't stand it and i thank you for keeping him true to his character. please update this one soon.......i can't wait sp see what happens also what else is going to come from their child?>

i love the way you did whispers of the night although I'm saddened by what happened to kurama.....can't they share her? lol it would def prove to be interesting i hate seeing him get the brunt end of the situation. but i like the way you did it i never would h ave thought of it

i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove you will be mine. i have never seen this paring before and i love it. please give me more loll i need to know what's going on and what the fuck hojo is going to do. and i can't wait to see how he dies evil bastard.....

well thank you for all your wonderfull stories!!!!! and please for the love of kami please update sooner??

ja ne

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From ANON - lady974 on March 13, 2005
That Black Lucy bitch was way out of line but i offer you this my dear if you ever need a french translator to return the insult,drop me a line and it will be my pleasure to help. As for your stories, i love all of them and can't wait to read more!

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From ANON - Himeko on March 12, 2005
i think i about died of laughter from reading that flame. anyon who is an avid fan of inuyasha knows that technically, Kagome is allowed two eye colors. Rumiko Takahashi is god...at least in my world. i love this fic; i love the way you've portrayed Kagome, Kurama, and Hiei. you've definitely shown Kagome's ability to befriend others to the fullest. and more than that, you've made Hiei's kindness (if it can be called such) believeable. Please continue with this fic. i have it on my favorites and am usually impatient for new chapters.
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From ANON - MysticAngel77 on March 05, 2005
Hahaha... dont you just love the people who review and know nothing about the series they are reading fanfiction on?? And to think they got so upset and yet kept reading for 39 chapters *boggle* Well, *I* think - along with the majority of your other reviewers- that you are doing a wonderful job and are doing great with keeping the characters in check. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens with Hiei and Naraku. We haven't really seen Hiei in action yet and that little guy sure has spunk - sexy spunk, mmmmm - guh anyways, yay for more to read! *dangles a cookie out for you* Milk too if you're good and post a couple chapters tonight maybe... ;) Thanks for writing!
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From ANON - Autumn Norris on March 05, 2005
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! THAT REVIEW WAS HILARIOUS!!!! GOD! PEOPLE ARE SOOOOO STUPID!!!! HEHEHEHEHE!!!! My friend Naomi knew all that stuff about Yuyu Hakusho, and she barely get's to watch the show, let alone read the manga. Thanks for clearing up the thing about Kagome's eyes, I was kinda confoosed, I just didn't feel like Googling Kagome's eye color. I understand it being different in the anime and manga. But WOW... that review... Jesus tap dancing Christ it makes me laugh... I hate people sometimes... if she was polite about it, then it wouldn't have been as bad... but WOW... that's all I can say... WOW... I'm speechless... and that's a pretty hard state to put me in... my friend Naomi (reading over my shoulder) agrees... Well I gots ta go! Update soon!!!! I love you with a passion!!!!
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