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Reviews for Commitments Made In Blood

By : ryukotsusei

From ANON - Iamreven on March 05, 2005
I started reading this around the time chapter 20 posted and am officially, religiously hooked!! I had never thought about hooking Kagome up with Kurama, but it really makes for a good read. As to your nomination for HUMAS, WAY TO KICK HER IN THE ASS AND DARE HER TO ASK FOR THE OTHER FOOT- may she fart toenails for the rest of the week!

Keep it up. I am breathlessly awaiting the next chapter!!
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From ANON - kogas hentai luver on March 05, 2005
Sorry. Too many cocktails tonight. I hit the wrong button. As for BLACK what ever the fuck their name is. Jesus fucking Christ. How can anyone be so fucking stupid. I know the gravitation anime very well. I can not believe that someone could confuse an Inuyasha/Yu Yu fic for a crossover between Gravitation. What fucking planet is she on. I think she owes you a huge apology for her mistake. Fucking retard idiot asshole. Even if this was a gravition crossover, who the fuck cares if the eye colors are different. They change from graphic novel to DVD all the time. I have every DVD that Inu has released to date in English and I still can't figure out what color Kag's eyes are. I also have every Gravitation DVD that has been released and I don't know how she could read, how ever many chapters, and not have a clue as to the fact that it was not a Gravitation crossover. Mother fucking God. I want to beat the shit out of this fucking fool. SHE OWES YOU AN APOLOGY. SHE CRUCIFIED YOU FOR SOMETHING THAT WASN'T EVEN THE ANIME SHE THOUGHT IT WAS. PLEASE LET ME KICK HER FUCKING ASS. I AM SO MAD I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. SOME PEOPLE ARE SO FUCKING STUPID IT MAKES ME SICK. ANYWAY GREAT CHAPTER. I LIKE THAT HIEI IS CALLING NARAKU OUT. HE'S SO COOL. I COULD DO NAUGHTY THINGS TO HIEI TOO. ^_~ LOVE YA GIRL.
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From ANON - kogas hentai luver on March 05, 2005
OMFG
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From ANON - kogas hentai luver on March 05, 2005
OMFG
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From ANON - xoulblade on March 05, 2005
hey, nice chapter! I cant wait until your next update.
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From ANON - Gem on March 04, 2005
Sniker - Kogome's just a little posessive there! Now she knows the feeling. Not that Kurama needs even the smallest ego boost! It made for a bit of cuteness in a tense chapter. And Kagura, still trying to get Naraku killed whithout getting involved her self. To bad he hasn't has his tentacles handed to him on a platter yet (feeling a little blood thirsty) Along that line that was some crazy review from BL, you handled it great. I guess Hiei (spelling?) is not the only one who can turn up the heat a few degrees!Hey> Do what I did with that "bulletin" email i sent you, print it and post it on the wall near your computer! Amazing how it seems to fit so many situations. As alays can't wait till your next update.
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From ANON - Komuri on March 04, 2005
Great Chapter! I really have to tell you that you are one of the very few authors out there that can actually write a decent story. Me not included. v.v*sigh* To tell the truth..I Suck!!! But hey it don't stop me from tryin'. ^.^ I also liked the way you dealt with 'Black Lucy' you tore her review apart and showed her the error of her way. If there is one thing I can't stand besides stupidity it's idiocy. And she seems to have both in abundance. Well, the time has come to talk of many things: of shoes and ships and sealing wax, of cabbages and kings and why the sea is boiling hot and whether pigs have wings!! Though that last may be true. -.-; Either that or I may just be seeing things! If that's the case I just might need a vacation. But that's beside the point, just know that I'm waiting for your next installation. Until then. Tata!
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From ANON - Audrey on March 04, 2005
Hi! I've been a fan for a couple of years now and I know this is awful of me to say, but I don't think I've left reviews for you. So before I say anything, let me apologise for the lack of reviews and just being a reader.

So, why am I reviewing now? Well, for two reasons - 1. I'm guilty of being lazy and thinking that my reviews wouldn't really matter to you. And 2. I'm pissed as hell with myself that someone else who wasn't lazy left reviews and they had no idea what they were talking about. The effect of that is going to be you possibly not posting?!?!?!

So, Hear My Plea! DO NOT STOP WRITING! PLEASE!!!!

I've read all your fics here, mediaminer and on ff.net. This is the site I like the most because you've got freedom here. Please, keep going, you've got a great plot with not many holes if any that I can think of and great character development. In fact, I have a request that you go into a little more detail on the initial reaction now that kurama and yusuke are in the same place again. How're they going to work together on this if Kurama wants to feed him to his Sin tree and yusuke would like nothing better than to bury himself in the ground for a while? :)

As far as the negative review you had, honestly, what the heck does eye color have to do with characters' personality???

So, please don't stop and I promise to review each chapter as it comes out on ALL your fics here. I've got you bookmarked - that's how important your stories are to me.

-Audrey
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From ANON - Diane on March 04, 2005
Yeesh!!!! Black Lucy must not pay attencion to what she's reading at all. Actually manga Kagome's eye are done in at least 4 different shades of blue, grey & violet on the different manga covers, etc. & I agree with you it's you fic & you can have her eyes be any color you want. I liked the chapter & am looking forward to the next one.
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From ANON - ness on March 04, 2005
Opps!! My bad i kinda misread the AN. sorry about that.
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From ANON - Ness on March 04, 2005
I love the fic so far... I'm a fan of your writing. Its hard to find good IY/YYH fics... Also, I read your latest AN, and let me just say I'd hate to be on your bad side. LOL Anyway, the person, Black Lucy, isn't all together wrong. Kagome only has blue eyes on the manga cover. That's the only place i've seen her with them. Oh well I got 2 go now. Looking forward for your updates.

*~Ness~*
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From ANON - Kura-kun\'s-lovr on March 04, 2005
Boy, well gee I don't know quite what to say. Boy you're having a bad week aren't you? First with someone complaining about the way you portrayed Hojo and then with someone who reviewed without having th facts straight. And you are quite correct. In the Manga Kagome is drawn with blue eyes. They changed it for the Anime to make her look more like Kikyo or something. And if it is so wrong changing eye color why do people do it all the time? I almost always change her eyes color to blue or sometimes even silver. Also, one other thing, his name is in fact spelled Shuichi, not that it matters how it is spelled, people get the right idea and know who he is. It is spelled that way on the Anime and that is the way I spell it in my fics. That wasn't a very nice flame, of course flamers are never nice as I've gotten a few but never ones as bad as yours. I can't stand flamers who had no lives other than to write in and tell you how wroing you are, even though it's your story!!! Anyway, I'm done ranting even though that pisses me off as well, as I know a lot about both Animes to get the facts straight. Anyway, I hope one of those bullets bite Naraku right in the ass. Wouldn't that be funny. Anyway, so are you any close to finishing this story or are you planning to draw it out and let Naraku escape for the time being. Of course I guess you are going to have to throw some lemons in there and Kurama has to come to terms with his own feelings so I bet it'll be plenty long by the time you're done with this story. Anyway, lets discuss something cheery, like Kuronosuke. How is he doing? Has he stopped stealing your pillows amd blankets like a thief in the night? I have yet to curb Kuronue's habit of that myself. But it's okay when he has an equally warm body to cuddle up next to. So anyway, I liked your new chapter even though it was a bit short, but that's okay. Everyone is entitled to shorter chapters. For now hope you update soon and don't be too steamed for long. Although if you do, I'm sure Kuronosuke would help you in that area; as well as Yoko, I'm willing to bet. Has he stopped trying to peep in your windows at night and stealing your underwear yet?

Kuronue had to chase him away the other night,whil I of course tried to act happy that Yoko was gone. Anyway, ciao!
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From ANON - whirleeq on March 04, 2005
Oh, god... I don't know which I enjoyed more -- this chapter, or your response to black lucy ... that was... classic ;)

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From ANON - Sad on March 04, 2005
Are you going to ever finish your other stories?
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From ANON - kogas hentai luver on March 04, 2005
This will be interesting to see what the team can actually do in front of the humans in the mall. Also, Yusuke and Kurama will get to see each other for the first time since their little spat. Maybe while Keiko is keeping Kag company she can explain a little more about the team to Kag and also explain that Yusuke not a bad guy. I dunno. Just rambling again. ^_^
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