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By : ryukotsusei

From ryukotsusei on March 04, 2005
Black Lucy

I'm going to go through this nice and slow for you. Normally I'd include responses like this at the end of my chapters but somehow I get the feeling you never made it past the first few chapters of my story.

1.) In the summary it states : IYYYH crossover. Now for those that don't understand abbreviations that stands for Inuyasha Yu Yu Hakusho crossover. So where you got the idea that this was an Inuyasha Gravitation cross over I will never know. Yuki Eiri is clearly a Gravitation character so it is obvious that somewhere along the way you became confused and felt the need to lash out. Ever consider anger management classes? They'll help you play nice with others instead of feeling the need to curse and name call.

2.) Since you are so hung up on eye color let me please be the one to point out to you that Suichi (In Gravitation) has purple eyes. That should have been a clue to you that you were thinking of the wrong anime series. Shuichi Minamino has green eyes in YYH. Green, purple, eh I would think there is a large enough difference for you to notice but then who the hell am I to judge. I'm just an author.

3.) Here we go with eye color again. Perhaps you should pull yourself away from the tv series and go buy some of the mangas. Because clearly on the covers of them Kagome is drawn (In color mind you) with blue-grey eyes. So before you take me to task in error for something so damn trivial do your research. I could make her with blue eyes or brown. Either one is correct and since it is my fic, it's my perogative to portray her however the hell I want to. If you want to complain about how she's portrayed, go find the author's that give her wings and such. Leave me the hell alone.

Now if you want to whine about the spelling of his name I don't really care. I've seen it spelled Shuichi, Suichi, and Shuuichi. As for which is right, who the hell knows. I specifically went looking on the YYH Official website and they don't have him listed under his human name, only as Kurama. (In case you aren't familiar with the series no he isn't human, he is a spirit kitsune.)

It's funny how out of 130 reviews on this site, over 300 on mediaminer and over 100 on fanfiction.net you are the only one to date who has managed to attempt to take me to task over such stupid crap. Even more laughable is the fact that you were the one who was confused. As it is I'm going to let your review stand. I'm quite interested in seeing what the other readers think of such idiocity. As always, this is Fanfiction. In other words, my plot, my story. If you don't like how I write, find something else to read.

Thanks for giving me a good laugh for the night, I needed it.

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From whirleeq on March 04, 2005
Good chapter, as always. I'm really glad to see that you brought Keiko in. I love keiko - she's a really sweet and adorable girl. I think that once Kagome and her got past the 'misconception', they could be great friends, and if there's one thing that Kagome needs, it's a female friend. Love it, love it, love it. You should of described how Kagura was dressed though -- just to give us a mental picture. :)

Julie
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From ANON - Black Lucy on March 04, 2005
Kagome does not have blue eyes, you simpering idiot. NO one in Inuyasha, in Kagome's time (LET ALONE HER, YOU DUMB FUCK) has blue eyes. His name is "Suichi," not SHUICHI. Do you have any fucking (literally) any fucking idea who Shuichi is? He's a lovable, homosexual scamp who definitely wouldn't be doing anything sexual with Kagome because he's attracted to Yuki Eiri, who also has golden eyes, like a certain hanyou we all know. And given the evidence, in case you're too dumb to figure this one out: INUYASHA.

Well.. you did have 39 chapters. But why couldn't you get your details straight, even the simplest ones?? (Like names and basic eye color) If you don't find Kagome's eye color attractive in the first place and wanted to change it, then she has no business the way you've written her and who you've put her with.

Have a nice day. Va t'en faire foutre aussi. ^^ (Don't use a translator, ask an actual person who knows how to speak French beyond a mediocre level)

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From ANON - Jasmine Fields on March 04, 2005
lol. ve-e-e-e-e-e-e-ery nice. Lime... sounds good to me!
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From ANON - KogasHentaiLuver (not signed in) on March 04, 2005
Ha! It's about time Kag gets a taste of her own medicine. To answer your question, it is very likely that Keiko would turn to Kurama for protection. She sees him as a friend, as he does her. So it makes perfect sense. Stupid Yusuke, not carrying his cell. You better send him over to me for a good spanking, K ^_^ Sorry for the cliffy * runs and hides * I promise no more cliff hangers in the middle of a lemon. I didn't plan on it, it just got written that way, ya know ^_^; I wish I could crank out chapters like you do, but it just takes me forever to find time to just sit down and write. I have to do a little bit here and a little bit there. But I am almost done. My daughter is writing a fight scene for me which is turning out really good. Well, I'll be looking for more drama at the mall. Naraku is such a ditz. This is getting so exciting I can't wait to see what happens. Oh and Kuronue is just to damn sexy in this fic. He really needs to get some, LOL.
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From ANON - Autumn Norris on March 03, 2005
Great chapter!! *Kisses Cloud (my cat) on top of head* I love my kitty. She's so cute =). Yay! Nirvana is on the radio! Anyways... update soon! I haven't been giving you the super duper long reviews lately... Today we went to a big band concert thing. And our school band got a score of 1!!! and 1 is the best!!!! Wee yay!!!! and the bus ride there was the funnest part... and eating at "Granny's Buffet" because my friend Riley had a chicken sundae... he put ice cream on top of chicken... then he mixed pizza, ice cream, and cheesecake together... yum... I have really weird friends... and Hafen... the guy I like... he knows that I like him... and his nickname for me is 'Pooky'...
~Pooky
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From ANON - xoulblade on March 03, 2005
hey ryu I think Hiei went that way *points to the left* Been trying to get him to light a fire under my muse, since 'he' has been out in the woods shooting at targets with his bow all day!! (jk) anyway it may be longer on my story, but Im enjoying this chapter, can't wait until the next one

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From ANON - Ren on March 03, 2005
love All your stuff! Can't wait till up update your other stories
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From ANON - Jasmine Fields on March 03, 2005
lol.... both of them are Jealous!!!! This should be an interesting encounter up and coming....!
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From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on March 03, 2005
LOL. The mall scene was priceless. Naraku can really be quite the idiot at times. Kagura's sarcasm has me cracking up. She's so funny. I wonder if Naraku will be dumb enough to take on the police, thus, releasing enough energy to where the reikai can track him? Good ole Hiei. He always comes up with the best solutions. He's so damn cool. Well I'm off to finish chapt 4 of my Yus fic. It's almost finished, phew! Oh and thanks for your compliment as well. ^_^ I'm glad I could corrupt you to the yaoi world, hehehehe. ^_~
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From Mija on March 03, 2005
ooh Ryu as always your chapters are intense and soooooooo good...again I apologize for not reviweing..but I have been reading, couldnt stop looking for an update to one of my utmost fav fics now can I??? I love this fic and cant wait for more, you truelly are talented and I soo enjoy reading your story...hmmm thinking I should check out more of your work....will definitly look some up if there is any..again sorry I havent updated...but I just want you to know that even if I dont update I do read and enjoy all your chaps and work...just been hard to really do much but read right now...family probs wont go into it cause its not the place and etc etc etc..lol...till next chap you take care and be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija....:-)
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From michelle5137 on March 03, 2005
Ha ha ha! I laughed my ass off at picturing Naraku dealing with a bitchy chick, a snickering Kagura and of course the police. I thought it was equally amusing how Kagura managed to sneak away to avoid being caught in the public eye. Well done. I usually hate Naraku, for some reason he's always been a bit annoyin and in my opinion he is more a coward than a genious. I mean they almost beat him three or fours times and each time he runs away to hide himself until hs gets stronger. I just wish he was a strong opponent and not just a coward. That's not to say I hate him in your story or anything. I often make Naraku the bad guy in my stories as well so I applaud you using him as your baddie. Um, what else. Oh yes, Kuronue-kun keeps me nice and toasty at night and during the few times he manages to calm down enough to let me sleep. Did you know he was a blanket and pillow thief as well. Should have known better than to mate with a thief. Although he does have some pretty quick hands. I'm sure Kuronosuke is the same way!! Anyway, update soon and be sure to read my story since I finally got it out. Ja ne.
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From ANON - Diane on March 03, 2005
I've really liked the last several chapters & I'm sorry someone ticked you off that badly, especially since I really missed having a new chapter or 2 to read every day. I thought it was believable that Youko would attack Houjo or pretty much any other male who came around Kagome at this time. Like my mom told me when I told her about this 'you can't please everyone', so do what you want since it's your fic & ignore the flamers or whatever. If they don't like it they don't have to read it, it's not like you have a gun to their heads forcing them to read this fic. I rather like your interpretation of Houjo, he's too nice & too clueless for my tastes.
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From ANON - Mija on March 03, 2005
oooh I just wanted you to know that I am reading and always looking to a new chapter from you and have read lots of wonderfull chapters when I was gone...but I hae been a bad girl and havent reviewed, I can only say that alot is on my mind and I read to ease it, but I do foreget to review and I beg your forgiveness, since this is a rocking fic, love it and ya know I do, I want to see more, always...love this fic and I want more, till then great job, be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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From ANON - xoulblade on March 02, 2005
nice chapter...I can understand about Hojo being a lose string besides you can easily 'remove' them if you know what I mean. Yes give Hojo to Naraku, he will have 'fun' with him :D. Anyway, Im going to be sending a copy of my story your way, to see if you like it and add anything I missed(is that ok?)

I can't wait until the next chapter!!
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