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By : ryukotsusei

From ANON - Ox King on February 26, 2005
Hey I'm back for another review. Heh heh. I'm loving the story, its great. I'm glad you keeped the romance to just to peeps insteed of a love triangle.

I have a personal request for the next chapter. Reason being, well.... I can just see this happening. How about Sesshomaru attacking again at the last moment before the gang goes down the well. Have Kuronue the last one to go down. I'd like to see Kuronue do a clasic Buggs Bunny bunnyhole dive (you know, the one where Buggs does a tripple axle feet first?) saing "Bye bye Sesshy-chan". (Giggle Giggle.... snort).

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From ANON - Mija on February 26, 2005
ooh I feel soo bad, here I am reading all these wonderfull juicy new chapters since last night and I havent reviewed...my bad I am sorry, but have alot on my plate and mind this week...sorry...so my review will be short, just to let you know that I am reading and loving every chapter you put up, lol, love the interaction between Youko and Kuronue, anyhow cant wait for more, I love how you update so often, keep up the fantastic work, till laters be well safe and happy, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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From ANON - Kura-kun\'s-lovr on February 25, 2005
Once again, great chapter. I just love my Kuronue's sense of humor, don't you? And he's so sneaky, always trying to steal things. Although, I think I like him that way. Makes him seem more fun and wild, which he is. And it's cool with me if the pairing stays Kagome/Kurama, it is fine how it is. By the way I took your suggestion of a Kurone/Kagome lemon and I should have it out pretty soon, along witha few others. I started by Kenshin one but I had to go back and change it because I was making Kagome too Tomoe like, all sad and depressing and stuff. So I have to figre out what her personaluty will be before I post it. Anywa, great update, Kuronue was brilliant but we all know he is anyway. So, update soon and ja ne.
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From ANON - Gem on February 25, 2005
I agree that leaving it just Kagome & kurama is the better idea, since you have set it up that Inuyasha could still get involved more if you wanted a love triangle. Besides the poor girl has her hands full as it is with even Naraku lusting after her! All in all another great couple of chapters.
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From ANON - xoulblade on February 25, 2005
mmmm actually it does me too, both of them with their clothes off...but with Kagome in the middle :D mmmm yummy. Anyway yep I'm happy about the chapter....update soon.
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From ANON - xoulblade on February 25, 2005
mmmmm I see a plot bunny bouncing on either my head or yours :D, about Sessohmaru and Youko, fighting over Kagome. But I like Kuroune (sp?) I said that before, right? Anyway I do like it when Youko gets teased for once, let that happen in the next chapter okay. :D love that new chapter, update soon.
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From ANON - Ookami K. on February 25, 2005
Wow! I'm sorry I don't review all the time but this is one great story that I cannot stop reading.... I love it and I cannot not wait for the next upcoming chapters... I am glad you brought back Shippou and Konrenu I think that's right oh well if not I'm bad... Just glad your updating faster than I would do.... So hurry with the next chapter....... rating 11 out of 10 even more so....
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From ANON - mhall on February 25, 2005
maybe you could write a Kurama/Kagome/Hiei story
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From ANON - Autumn Butler on February 25, 2005
Howdy!!! I was bored so I put my other last name... but just to be clear, I am the All Mighty Autumn Norris *said in big booming voice* MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! ALL BOW DOWN BEFORE ME... NO... ALL DOWN IN "FRONT LEANING POSITION"!!!!! Except you Ryokotsusei, you can stay up... I love you... with a passion *once again, big anime type smile*... just update soon... I'm tired... very very very tired... and I feel like typing... maybe I should update my story... hmm... I don't know... whatever... UPDATE!!!!! WEE!!!! HYPER!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Autumn Norris on February 25, 2005
Howdy! I LOVED this chapter!!!! THANK YOU for the review!!!!! It was so bootiful *sniff sniff*... oh well!!! Yes I am trying to take over your title of the Mistress of Cliffhangers!!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Sorry... actually I'm not... you can be the Mistress... I'll just be the Mistress' bodyguard! Sounds good? It better. Joking! Oh and yes, I can have Sessy and I will. I guess you can have Yoko... *pouts*... but I get Kiba from Wolf's Rain, and I also get Master Chief, and Arbiter from Halo and Halo 2!!!! Sorry... I just absolutely love those games... Anyways... enough of my obssessions... Yes, I think I did get into your chocolate... hmm... I wonder how... and when... it must have happened though! Once again... I get alittle... you could say... distracted?... hmm... hard to describe... it's better just to call me stupid and get it over with. I'm with you about the Yoko and Sessy websites... you should ask me! Yes, I love Sessy with all my heart, but I wouldn't say he could win against Yoko... it would be one hell-of-a fight though! Wee!!! I'm hyper again!!!!! I have nothing more to do in my life... except read, write, watch, and game! Once again... wow... this is a really long review... hmm... bored... just feel like making it longer so you feel important... thinking of something to say... AH! Yes! Making this a Kagome/ Kurama/ Kuronue is an awesome idea! It's kinda lame, but I never knew of Kuronue until I started reading your stories, and I went into "Detective Mode" and Googled Kuronue! I didn't get shit though... *sighs*... I'm tired... and bored... I had to stay in "front leaning position" for like an entire period today!!! My arms and abs hurt sooooo much!!!!! God!!!!!! Off subject... once again... Great chapter... I'll review chapter 28 in like 3 minutes... I just feel like making this one hella long *big anime type smile*... I love you with a passion!!!!! Please update!!!!!!! I know you will anyway!!!!!!! And I broke the little rule thing I have, I reviewed a chapter that has chapters after it *GASP*... oh well... I was going to review this last night but me and my mom had a HUGE fight and she wouldn't let me on the internet, I only got to read this chapter... *sniff sniff*... stupid mom... *yawn*... tired... Need to update "Easier to Run"... *bangs head on desk* OW! I'm awake!
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From michelle5137 on February 24, 2005
Gee. Youd think I started a war. Man, I'm sorry if it seemed like I was demanding a threeway. I mean it was only a suggestion. Sure I would love you to make it one and turhfully I have some suggestions of how Kuronue could tie into it, but when I read some of other people's reviews it seemed like everyone would quite reading it if you turned it into a threeway. Personall I don't care either way, as long as she's still with Yoko. Any who, I did however think of a way for Kuronue to bond himself with Kagome. Say when Yoko goes back into the past that maybe Naraku tries again to get into Kagome's mind and only Kuronue and Hiei are there. Kuronue would have to find some way to save her, if only to help his best friend. He could therefore, be brought into the story that way. But anyway, I didn't mean to cause so many opionions. I don't want people to stop reading your fic for any reason. I think it's really good and it's only going to get better. So, sorry if my suggestion pissed your other readers who aren't particularly fond of Kuronue, off. That being said I must say that Kuronue was completely distressed upon returing to me. He thought people voted against him because he didn't look hot enough. I tried to ensure him that he was plenty hot (after many rounds of deliciious sex) and finally convinced him that he was the absoulte sex god and that you found him very sexy. He's okay now....in fact he's passed out asleep on our bed....oops. He's awake now and vying for some attention. I must go to my honey bunny! Ja ne. Update soon, like in the next few hours.
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From ANON - InuMiko on February 24, 2005
Well... I'm a serious stickler for plot personally. Once a story becomes contradictory, I abandon it. Really. This one has a lot going for it so far, but a three way pairing would blow it to high hell. Firstly, there's the Kagome issue to deal with: I'm having a hard enough time accepting the fact that she's so easily taking to Youko - okay, the bond thing helps, but the girl hadn't really even begun to grieve for Inu. Secondly, there's the whole bit you mentioned about the bond making it painful for other people to even touch her. Thirdly, there's the possisiveness of Youko. Fourthy, Inuyasha. Fifthly, the Higurashi family. I can go on and on, but that about somes up my primary objections.
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From ANON - Jasmine Fields on February 24, 2005
I myself, love the Youko/Kags pairing.... BTW, great story!

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From ANON - redtatsu on February 24, 2005
Yummy, Kuronue!!! ( wags tail ) This just keeps getting better and better.
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From ANON - whirleeq on February 24, 2005
One other point against the K/K/K pairing in this story:

Keep in mind that you have Kagome in a state of severe grief. I can barely see her opening her heart to ONE person by the end of the story enough to involve a lemon (after all, she's a young girl and her character is very innocent), but two would most definately cross the line of believability and throw her firmly into the OOC catagory.

She just lost someone she loved with all her heart after all; can you really see her allowing TWO in so very soon? Maybe if you were to do a sequel, but even still... *shrugs* I just don't think it would work. Just my opinion, for what it's worth, which, admittedly is not very much ;).

Julie
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